OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
The projected cost of making much-needed repairs to bridges
is no small issue for any municipal, state, or federal government, however for the public’s safety, repairs must be made.
When
however is used to connect
two independent clauses (and thus forms a "compound sentence"), the word
however must be preceded by a semicolon and followed by a comma.
Read
this short but good post, here to understand (1) that you must use a semicolon when
however joins two independent clauses but (2) that you may use
however without a semicolon in other situations.
The meaning of the sentence contains
contrast.
On the one hand, the projected cost of making repairs is no small issue for any level of government.
(
No small issue is standard expression that means
a challenging issue. The cost of repairs is high.)
On the other hand, despite their costliness, repairs must be made in order to ensure the public's safety.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) is no small issue for any municipal, state, or federal government
, however• a semicolon is missing
→ Because
however is connecting two independent clauses, it must be preceded by a semicolon and followed by a comma.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B)
are no small issue for any municipal, state, or federal government, but
• subject/verb disagreement
→ The singular subject
cost requires the singular verb
is.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) is no small issue
for any municipal, and for any state or federal government,
and• contrast is not conveyed
→ The use of
and at the end of the sentence fails to bring out the contrast inherent in the sentence.
• not parallel
→ The construction
for any municipal, and for any state or federal government is confusing and not parallel.
Corrected:
. . . for any municipal, state, or federal governmentELIMINATE C
Quote:
D)
are no small issue for any municipal,
for any state, or
for any federal government, but
• subject/verb agreement
→ The singular subject
cost requires the singular verb
is.
• the repetition of the preposition
for is not as concise as the construction in option E
→ in a list, a preposition should be placed before only the first item or before all list items
→ that said, especially when the preposition is the same and it is easy to see that the preposition "distributes" across all the list items, GMAC tends to prefer placing the preposition before only the first item in the list.
This style note would
not be enough to eliminate this answer on its own. Coupled with the other error and compared to option E, though, this construction is the inferior of the two.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) is no small issue for any municipal, state, or federal government; however,
• correct subject/verb pairing: singular
cost agrees with singular
is• the conjunctive adverb
however is preceded by a semicolon and followed by a comma.
KEEP
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Nice work.