Hi,
It would be great if you can take a look at my profile and critique on how i might be able to lower the chance of getting dinged

Academic & test score:
- GPA 3.5 (with first class honor) from Thammasat University (Business administration) Marketing/ Finance Major
- GMAT (4 times)
1. Unreported (2014)
2. June 2015 - 610 (Q44 V31) IR6
3. September 2015 - 620 (Q47 V28) IR2
4. October 2015 - 690 (Q49 V34) IR1 (my recent IR has been really bugging my every minutes of everyday after the test)
- Toefl 103 (Though I went to an international program only taught in English- will have to check if it can be waived)
- Exchanged to McGill University, Canada in 2010
WE:
- 4 Years - Marketing consulting (mostly drawing recommendations on qualitative consumer research)
- Position: Associate Consultant (Job scope: analysis, coaching, project management & client service)
Extra curricular:
- Active member of youth organization to promote child peace education (most actively at CISV - endorse by the united nations) and voluntary social works
- Active alumni still helping out with school activities
- Board member of the Thammasat University Cheerleader Club (overlook annual plan, budgeting, training process, and yearly audition)
- President of International Case Comp back in uni (and core team of other several student activities)
- Interests: cooking and photography
School of interest:
- Kellogg
- Tuck
- Wharton
- HBS (a dream)
Post MBA direction:
- Short-term: get into management consulting
- Long-term: Teaching at university on marketing and strategies
Thank you very much! any of your responses is much appreciated!!