OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Quote:
Early supporters of the theory of quantum mechanics hailed it as a major breakthrough in understanding the universe; however, critics of the theory called it a crude and inelegant description of the processes behind the physical world,
which they likened to rolling dice.
A)
which they likened to
rolling diceB) likening
them to
rolling diceC) likening it to the act of rolling dice
D)
which they
liken to
dice that are rolledE)
which they likened to the act of rolling dice
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QUICK POETwo things are being compared in this sentence:
the theory of quantum mechanics (as a description of the universe) and the
act of rolling dice.
The use of
which in options A, D, and E is needlessly unclear: does
which refer to
description or to
the theory?
Although both words are quite far from
which, this distance might be easily overlooked if the antecedent were clear.
The antecedent is not clear.
Eliminate A, D, and E
Option B incorrectly uses the plural pronoun
them to refer to the singular noun,
theory.
Eliminate B.
By POE, the answer is C.
ANALYSIS • Split #1: • which they likened vs. likening→
which cannot logically refer to
physical worldThe physical world cannot be equated with the rolling of dice.
→
which can modify
description Which often
but not always modifies the immediately preceding noun, so which could modify the "main noun"
description.→ We call
description the "main noun" because it anchors a noun phrase whose construction is
NOUN + noun modifiers (the modifiers are phrases that begin with
prepositions)
DESCRIPTION
of the processes
behind the physical world
→ Is it logical to say that critics equated a
description with
the act of rolling dice?
Possibly.
The critics charge that the theory IS (linking verb) a "crude and inelegant description . . .," and this "crude" description of what happens could be likened to the act of rolling dice.
On the other hand,
(1) the noun “description,” however "crude and inelegant," is not really the culprit.
The
theory of quantum mechanics is the culprit. The
theory is compared to the act of rolling dice
and
(2)
crude and inelegant description is how the critics characterize the theory but is not the theory itself.
Options A and D are easy to eliminate because in addition to this vexing
which, they respectively use
rolling dice and
dice that are rolledBoth are inapposite nouns.
The critics mean to say that the theory involves too much randomness, chaos, and uncertainty.
The critics do not mean to say that the theory is similar to a pair of dice that are rolling after having been thrown.
In A, the phrase
rolling dice suggests six-sided cubes that are tumbling end over end.
-- At the least,
rolling dice may suggest the act of rolling dice (whose outcome is unpredictable), but the phrase is not very clear.
In D, the phrase
dice that are rolling suggests six-sided cubes that are tumbling end over end.
The theory is not likened to an actual pair of dice rolling on a surface but rather to the act of rolling dice.
Finally, option D incorrectly uses present tense
liken: past tense has already been established by "critics
called."
Eliminate A and D, tentatively keep E (per the latter, look for a better answer)
• Split #2: PronounsIn option B, the pronoun
them has no logical antecedent.
Processes is the only plural noun.
Processes are not being likened to the act of rolling dice.
(Oh. And option B uses the problematic "rolling dice," too.)
Eliminate B • Split #3: Option C vs. option EOption C is better than option E.
→ (C) uses "likening it," which refers back to the
theory, which has already been deemed "it" in the nonunderlined portion.
I am sure that the critics believe that the theory is too unpredictable and chaotic.
Because (C) uses
likening it, I do not have to decide whether the which-statement in (E) applies to
description rather than
theory.
In option C,
likening it refers me immediately to another
it that refers to the
theory.
In option E, the distance of which from its antecedent coupled with the uncertainty about which word IS the antecedent both make the answer inferior to option C.
Eliminate E.
The answer is C.COMMENTSDinoPen , you wrote:
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Also, generis when dealing with noun1 + prepositional phrase + noun2 + comma + which, does which refer to noun1 or noun2? I was always confused with the touch rule
You refer to this long noun phrase, I think (except this phrase contains three nouns?):
description of the processes behind the physical world, WHICH . . .
The short answer is that
which can refer to either of the nouns.
I'm gonna have to borrow at least in part from
MGMAT, because I can't think of better example sentences.
Correct: The
box of nails,
which is heavy, is Jonathan's.
Correct: I found the big box of
nails, which we should use to secure the studs when we renovate the attic.
Logic and meaning determine which noun is the antecedent for
which.
The touch rule can be confusing.
Yes, noun modifiers should "touch" (or be very close to) the nouns that they modify, but many exceptions exist.
Logic and context dictate the noun antecedent of
which—although that antecedent is usually the immediately preceding noun (noun2/
physical world) OR the main noun (
description).
In other words, the "default" rule is that
which refers to the immediately preceding word (your "noun2,"
physical world).
In analysis, everyone
must go further than this default.
After the default guideline, we have another guideline:
which can refer to the
main noun of a noun phrase.
Which can refer to noun1 in this setup:
NOUN 1 + preposition + noun2(object) + preposition + noun3(object),
WHICHI was deeply impressed by Army Lt. Col. Alexander Vindman when he testified in the hearings on the impeachment of Donald Trump, which were broadcast by every major American news channel.I hope that answer helps.
People do have to explain "labeling" or highlighting in order to get kudos.
These answers are quite good. Nicely done.