Not to reiterate everything on here but a few additional thoughts:
1) An MBA is not an academic degree. It is a professional degree people pursue to further their career. While students actually go for all sorts of reasons, your application must show a clearly thought out reason for why you need an MBA. One of the considerations the Admissions Committee will have is: does this person know what they want to do? Does the goal make sense? And do they need an MBA (more specifically an MBA from our school) to achieve this goal? Note: schools are partially ranked on the number of students that have full time jobs within three months of graduation. If they do not see you as someone who will add to this statistic they will be less willing to accept you
2) While some students (many students actually) attend business school to change careers you need to be able to clearly articulate a career goal. It is true that business school is a time for discovery and that many people aren't 100% clear on their goal / change their mind once they attend school. However, it is key that you show you know what you want to do on the application. Also - the reality is that while many people aren't 100% sure what they want to do when entering most have some idea . Opportunities that can lead to a good outcome (recruiting, entrepreneurship classes and contests, etc.) start almost immediately when school starts. If you take a year to figure out what you want to do, you will miss the boat - so to speak....and you won't get as much out of the degree as you would like.
3) Entrepreneurship in and of itself isn't a well-defined goal. Many people eventually want to become entrepreneurs but usually long-run. I generally tell my Clients that unless they have a specific idea for a company on which they have already started working and can clearly articulate why the MBA will help them to get it over the hump, find a different short-term goal and make entrepreneurship a long-term goal (but in something specific). It is highly unlikely that you will start school with no idea what you want to do and then find the team, idea, and funding within two years. This goes back to the point that the school wants to know you will have a job. And - if you are going to follow an entrepreneurial path (short or long term) they want to know it is well thought out
4) I don't think your lack of FT jobs is important - especially in today's world that is moving towards the gig economy. However, you need to create a story. Startups are a job, investing is a job. Make sure you can account for all the time and then think about how (or work with a counselor to think about how) you can make the choices sound intentional. Furthermore, your goals must align to the type of pattern you have had (e.g. it would be more realistic to say you wanted to work for a startup than go into industry as the former tends to see more job hoppers.) Business schools want to know you are really planning your career. Just as you would in a job interview - you need to explain why you took each step (even if it is an "after the fact" reason)
5) Business schools - similar to jobs - are give and take. This isn't college where you are paying to learn. The reason professional experience is required is to raise the bar on discussion. The schools want to know that you will be able to contribute as much to the school (in terms of your knowledge, your participation, your helping other students, adding new perspectives) as you take (what you learn). If you went to apply for a job you would tell the interviewer what you can do for them, not the other way around. Same with business school - it's a two way street
6) I think you should retake your GMAT if you are focusing on the three schools you mentioned. While candidates do get in with 700, it's not ideal in your case given that 1) your GPA is below average (you don't want both your GPA and your GMAT to be below average); 2) your verbal is higher than your quant (the schools care more about quant) 3) there will be a lot of explanation that goes into the rest of your application so make the academic section easy for them to check off. You can only "explain away" so many things.
7) While I realize this is just a forum for advice, you should focus on sounding less casual when you talk about your goals and reasons for business school - as well as the language you use. It's hard to change perspective overnight so I would advise "formalizing" your discussion manner now so you will be prepared for the interview.
In short - I think you have a decent shot at the schools you mentioned - but only if you retake the GMAT and really think through your storyline and goals. You have the elements for a good application - but how you package them and present your profile will make / break your odds. Additionally, while I do realize you want to be in CA, if you definitely want to go to business school I would advise adding some other schools in the mix. I've seen candidates rejected from USC / UCLA who have been accepted into better schools in other areas of the country. Just food for thought.
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