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My answer is (B). It took me 48 seconds.

(A) Two major flaws: (1) "due to" cannot be used adverbially. (2) "they" lacks its precedent. Certainly "they" != "many people".

(B) The comma before "because" should better be deleted. It is otherwise sound. Keep for now.

(C) Not a sentence as there is no main verb for the supposed subject "osmium" in the supposed main clause.

(DE) See above.
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While many people believe either lead or gold is the densest naturally occurring element, osmium, due to a pattern of density among the elements, holds this distinction, and they call it “Lathanide contraction.”


A) osmium, due to a pattern of density among the elements, holds this distinction, and they call it

B) it is osmium that holds this distinction, because of a pattern of density among the elements known as

C) osmium, holding this distinction, because of a pattern of density with the elements known as

D) osmium, holding this distinction, for a pattern of density in the elements is known as

E) osmium, which holds this distinction, because a pattern of density among the elements is known as


(A) and they call it.. who calls what? Unclear.

(B) Perfect!

(C) osmium holding this distinction does what? Action verb missing.

(D) Osmium holds the distinction because a certain density of elements exists and not because a certain density of elements is called Lanthanide Contraction.

(E) osmium which holds this distinction does what? Action verb missing. Also, same error as in second half of (D)

Hence, B should be our answer.

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While many people believe either lead or gold is the densest naturally occurring element, osmium, due to a pattern of density among the elements, holds this distinction, and they call it “Lathanide contraction.”


A) 'They' doesn't have the right reference therefore out

B) No major issues keep for now

Main verb absent therefore C, D , E out
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IMO B

A) osmium, due to a pattern of density among the elements, holds this distinction, and they call it -> wrong use of due to.. 'they' refers to the same people who believe the former part.. hence wrong

B) it is osmium that holds this distinction, because of a pattern of density among the elements known as -> Correct

C) osmium, holding this distinction, because of a pattern of density with the elements known as -> no verb

D) osmium, holding this distinction, for a pattern of density in the elements is known as -> changes meaning

E) osmium, which holds this distinction, because a pattern of density among the elements is known as -> changes meaning
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