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While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market.


Comparison is being made between small banks and big banks. So we are down to A and E.
E is giving an idea that earlier the big banks might have been most active, but we don't know about that.
This clears the way for Option A.

IMO A


A) it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market

B) what is known as the loan sub-participation market counts the big banks among its most active participants

C) the greatest activity in what is known as the loan sub-participation market comes from the big banks

D) the loan sub-participation market draws its greatest activity from big banks

E) big banks are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market
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While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market.

* Subject Verb Agreement

[ "small banks - are" ; "it - is"; "that - are" ; "what - is known" ]
- All pair seems okay.

* Tense Form

[ Present Tense ]
- properly conveys intended meaning

* If-then condition

- not used

* Subjunctive Verb

- not used

* Pronoun

[ "their" have antecedent " small banks"]
- all pronoun have antecedent

* Modifier

- seems okay

* Parallelism

- parallelism marker not used

* Comparison


- In terms of intended meaning , comparison of two banks are there but using "while " only shows that two activities are going parallel.

* Idioms

- not used

While analyzing the sentence, no error identifies. Let's analyze option.

A) it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market

- as discussed no error identifies.

- Correct


B) what is known as the loan sub-participation market counts the big banks among its most active participants

- distort the intended meaning.

- Incorrect

C) the greatest activity in what is known as the loan sub-participation market comes from the big banks

- changed the meaning

- Incorrect

D) the loan sub-participation market draws its greatest activity from big banks

- In the original sentence, two parallel activities are going on using "while" but this sentence doesn't connect the earlier one

- Incorrect


E) big banks are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market

- grammatically & meaning wise correct but it shows that the big banks are doing this before small banks are still passing the loans to larger institution which totally changed the meaning.

- Incorrect


IMO(A)
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While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market.


A) it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market

B) what is known as the loan sub-participation market counts the big banks among its most active participants

C) the greatest activity in what is known as the loan sub-participation market comes from the big banks

D) the loan sub-participation market draws its greatest activity from big banks

E) big banks are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market



Except choice A , all the other choice distorted the meaning ..
A has no error .
All the SV pairs are intact and agree in number . pronouns and modifiers are also referring to correct entity .


A is the answer .
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i think the phrase "it is now" in A is imp to show the contrast which needs to be presented with the usage of "while"

could someone shed light on how E is right?
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Hi generis, all the 4 explanations given for the question, by me, vipulshahi, DasAshishAshutosh, and Kritisood use the logic of it is now, but apparently got the answer wrong. Can you give us the official explanation for the question?

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In option A : the phrase 'it is now' conveys that the big banks have only now started becoming active in the loan sub-participation market.

However the intended meaning of the sentence is that even when the small banks have been passing their loans to larger institutions , even then big banks would be active in loan market.
It is not the case that only now they have become active.

Would appreciate an expert to verify my conclusion though.

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The official explanation is here.
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Hi generis, thanks for pointing out the use of it is. Honestly, I didn't know this fact. After reading the answers posted by others, I thought we all were missing something and I know I can be wrong a lot of times. But I have been following the others in the thread and often their logic to be correct. So, this time I didn't understand, where we went wrong. Then JonShukhrat explained and then I got the reasoning gap that we were having.

Again, thanks a lot for explaining.
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OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

THE PROMPT
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While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market.

The sentence presents a contrast between two types of institutions: small banks and big banks.
The first clause describes small banks. The second clause describes big banks.
To maintain balance and clarity in the contrast, the two clauses should have roughly parallel constructions.

The first clauses begins with while + small banks.
The second clause should begin with big banks in order to form the basic construction
While small banks are X, big banks are Y.

• The first part of the sentence contains Big Hints.

While small banks are still passing some of their loans off . . .

The three underlined words reveal context.
"Still passing" means that the small banks have been passing loans off for awhile.
Small banks have already been in the loan sub-participation market.
Small banks continue to be part of that market ("are still)—though they participate less now than they did before.

"Some of their loans" emphasizes that small banks do not sell very many of their loans now (compared to what small banks did before now and compared to what big banks do now)/

While: small banks are . . . Contrast!
While small banks are X, _________.
What goes in the blank?

This part is hard: we do have to understand that "to pass loans off to other institutions" (large or not) is to take part in "the loan sub-participation market."

Meaning? Although small banks do participate in the loan sub-participation market (by selling some of their loans to big institutions), big banks are the most active in that market.

Quote:
A) While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market.
• Does not follow the basic contrast structure in which similar items are compared and contrasted.
• seems to compare small banks with it is now
• the words it is now that are unnecessary; we already know from the first clause that small banks used to be more active in this market but are now passing only a few loans off
• see Notes, below, about it is
Eliminate A

Quote:
B) While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, what is known as the loan sub-participation market counts the big banks among its most active participants
• Does not follow the basic contrast structure in which similar items are compared and contrasted.
That basic structure is While small banks are X, big banks are Y
• contrasts small banks and what is known as the loan sub-participation market. We want to know about big banks.
Eliminate B

Quote:
C) While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, the greatest activity in what is known as the loan sub-participation market comes from the big banks
• Does not follow the basic contrast structure
• contrasts small banks with the greatest activity [in what is known as the loan sub-participation market]
Eliminate C

Quote:
D) While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, the loan sub-participation market draws its greatest activity from big banks
• Does not follow the basic contrast structure
• contrasts small banks with the loan sub-participation market
Eliminate D

Quote:
E) While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, big banks are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market.
• Follows basic contrast structure, While small banks are X, big banks are Y
• Contrasts small banks with big banks. That pairing is correct

The best answer is E.

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sambitspm , four people can certainly all get the wrong answer.
Just the other day, almost everyone wrote that insist was a "subjunctive" verb.
Not always, and not in that question, which you can find here.
People got lucky in that question: the correct answer certainly was not "command subjunctive," but it looked to them as if it were.

I've seen threads in which six or seven people all give the same wrong answer until a brave soul comes along . . . or not.
Part of what happens on these forums is that people whose answers are different from what seems to be the reigning wisdom feel afraid to post—but as the stats stand now, 63% of people chose (E). You four were not among that group, and that fact is perfectly okay.

I frequently give kudos to people whose answers are incorrect but whose reasoning is good.
Why? Because I want everyone to make their mistakes here and now rather than on the test.
In fact, I'm not too sure how people intend to learn without making mistakes.

You four are talented and hardworking, as are many on this site.
Almost always, you all write good posts.


• The "It is" construction in option A

First, GMAC generally does not like it is and there is.
I can think of only half a dozen official questions in which the correct answer included it is.
In English, we use such structures because the original sentence is awkward or we want to put emphasis on whatever comes after it is.

Second, even when the "It is" structure is acceptable to GMAC, as far as I can tell from a few hours' of research, a true "dummy" IT is not acceptable on the GMAT.
IT must have a delayed antecedent, and that antecedent is a noun.
-- as far as I can tell and remember, JonShukhrat is correct that GMAC does not accept expletive it clauses unless it contains a delayed antecedent that comes in the form of a that-clause, a whether-clause, or an infinitive clause
Read his post, which is here.
Two other places this issue is discussed are here and here.

Third, I would not spend much time on this issue.
I would read the posts to which I and JonShukhrat linked.
Two of those posts contain official examples in which the correct answer includes it is.

Fourth and finally, I do not see any meaning issues.
I don't think that options A and E have radically different meanings.
Even if option E does differ radically in meaning from A (a proposition with which I do not agree!), so what?
Is E logical? Yep.
Option A does not determine intended meaning.

Kritisood , as I wrote above, the words while, still, and some in the first clause give us the contrast information that we need.
In other words, you are correct that we want to establish contrast—because the details about small banks are forceful (albeit in an understated way), a simple contrast in the second clause works just fine.

Taulark1 , I think your analysis is headed in the right direction.
I will shift gears for you just a little bit: focus on small banks and the big banks will follow.
The first part of the sentence tells us that small banks were more active than they are now.
So some other institutions stepped into small banks' place. Which ones? Big banks.
We do not need the word "now." Its meaning is tacit in the non-underlined portion of the sentence.

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Taulark1 , welcome to SC Butler. :)

JonShukhrat , your analysis is spot on.
I am bumping you to Best Community Reply.

Also, people -- please, be brave enough to post your question on the thread?
I am not a fan of backdooring.

Everyone: you seem to have thought hard about the question.
It doesn't matter that some of you have the wrong answer. Your reasoning is good. You just missed a few details.

Kudos to all.

What a fantastic explanation .. Phew !! I missed the meaning part by a big margin in this question ..
Thanks again generis for the learning .
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Hi, sambitspm

I just wanted to share my thoughts before generis announces the final verdict.

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A) While small banks are still passing some of their loans off to larger institutions, it is now the big banks that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market.

The red clause is a dependent clause. The blue clause is an independent clause. An independent clause must be able to stand alone as a sentence and form a complete thought. However, the blue clause at hand cannot do so because “it” has no referent. On the GMAT, “it” must have a crystal clear referent. The referent either precedes or follows “it”.

1. When the referent precedes “it”:

- While the most expensive fruit is an apple in country A, it is a grape in country B.

Here, “it” has a clear referent such as “the most expensive fruit”. So, if we replace “it” with its referent and write the blue clause alone, we get a valid independent clause: The most expensive fruit is a grape in country B. Hence, the sentence above is correct.

However, in choice A the red clause lacks any singular noun to which “it” could refer.


2. When the referent follows “it”:

- While an apple is added virtually to every food in country A, it is strange that people in country B consider this fruit inedible.

Here, the blue clause will work alone even if “it” refers to nothing in the red clause. The reason is that now “it” is used as an expletive (dummy) pronoun that refers to the following that-clause, which serves as a noun (that people in country B consider this fruit inedible). Since “it” refers to the that-clause, we can replace “it” with this that-clause, and the meaning will remain the same:

- It is strange that people in country B consider this fruit inedible. (works alone)
- That people in country B consider this fruit inedible is strange. (works alone)


Note that “it” can refer to the following that-clause only if this that-clause serves as a noun. Such noun clauses must have both a verb and a subject. In the example above, that-clause has the verb “consider” and the subject “people”, so it can serve as a noun. Hence, “it” has a referent and is correctly used.

However, in A the that-clause following “it” serves NOT as a noun, BUT as an adjective that modifies “the big banks”. You can see that this that-clause (that are most active in what is known as the loan sub-participation market) misses a subject. Such that-clauses can serve only as an adjective to which “it” CANNOT refer. Therefore, “it” has no referent.


In a nutshell, A is wrong because it lacks an independent clause, and because “it” refers to nothing.


- Read more about “adjective vs. noun clauses” here .

- Read more about the correct usage of “it” here .

Spot on JonShukhrat

With above learning of use of It , May you please help me to analyse choice A . This is a different question , however it would be really great if we can apply above learning and solidify our understandings .

Thank you..



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generis Thank you for your reply ! , really helped me a lot :)
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