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It seems like we are talking about "one of the communities" in great lakes and hence it should take a singular verb. Not sure why communities are being considered as the subject?

This is admittedly a little bit confusing, but in this context, Cleveland isn't the ONLY community looking to its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract. Rather, it is one of A LARGE NUMBER of communities, all of which ARE looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

Because we are talking about a large number of communities, a plural verb is needed.



But how would we know whether is it talking about only one community or all community, both are making sense

Meaning!

First, consider the "that are" scenario we have in (C):

Quote:
Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life.

The meaning here is that a large number of communities are looking to improve the quality of urban life and Cleveland is one of these communities. In other words, Cleveland is a member of a group, and all the members of this group are behaving a certain way. Makes sense.

Now consider the "that is" scenario we have in (B):

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Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life.

This time, it seems that Cleveland alone is looking to improve the quality of urban life. That may well be the case. But then, what is the modifier "of a large number of communities" doing there? If we're not being told that Cleveland is a member of a group whose members are all doing something, why mention the group at all? Are we supposed to assume the other communities aren't looking to improve the quality of urban life? At best, this is confusing. At worst it's nonsensical.

Because the "that are" interpretation is more logical, we can eliminate every option containing "that is."

The takeaway: there is no touch rule! You can't simply assume "that" always describes whatever noun it's closest to. You have to use context and ask yourself which interpretation makes more sense.

I hope that helps!
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In this question, we want 'looking to', as the cities are looking to their waterfronts to help out (the cities are not literally viewing their waterfronts, the way 'looking at' implies). So we can get rid of (B) and (E). Next, we have 'but one...large number...communities that'. Because the relative clause is modifying communities, we want the plural form, 'are' and the plural pronoun 'their', which leaves us with (C).


With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract

'its plan' here might still be talking about Cleveland, but not the other communities on the Great lakes. Plus, 'looking to its waterfront' still coincides with the earlier statement that Cleveland is hoping to improve, but not all the other communities together.

I still have an issue with this question ChrisLele, would you mind answering this for me?
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In this question, we want 'looking to', as the cities are looking to their waterfronts to help out (the cities are not literally viewing their waterfronts, the way 'looking at' implies). So we can get rid of (B) and (E). Next, we have 'but one...large number...communities that'. Because the relative clause is modifying communities, we want the plural form, 'are' and the plural pronoun 'their', which leaves us with (C).


With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract

'its plan' here might still be talking about Cleveland, but not the other communities on the Great lakes. Plus, 'looking to its waterfront' still coincides with the earlier statement that Cleveland is hoping to improve, but not all the other communities together.

I still have an issue with this question ChrisLele, would you mind answering this for me?


Hello PRI23YA,

We hope this finds you well.

Having gone through the question and your query, we believe we can resolve your doubt.

"its plan" does refer only to "Cleaveland"; the intended meaning here is that Cleaveland has a plan to develop seven and a half acres of shoreland, and as such, it is one of many communities that are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

Put simply, there are many communities that are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses, but Cleaveland is the only one with the specific plan to develop seven and a half acres of shoreland.

We hope this helps.
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Had there been a comma in this question, after 'the great lakes', then the subject would have been Cleveland, correct?
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Had there been a comma in this question, after 'the great lakes', then the subject would have been Cleveland, correct?


Hello MBAaspirant6,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, even without the comma, the subject of the sentence is, in fact, "Cleveland".

The main clause of the sentence is "Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes", whose subject is "Cleveland".

"With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land" is a modifier that acts upon "Cleveland", and "that are looking to their waterfronts" is a modifier that acts upon the noun phrase "a large number of communities on the Great Lakes".

We hope this helps.
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This question ate my brain too, but there is a very simple rule to this, RC (in most cases) won't jump over the verb. So, 'that' can't (again not a rule, but in most cases) jump over is and hence, can only modify communities.

Try the same logic in this official question:
https://gmatclub.com/forum/a-higher-int ... 83528.html
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Had there been a comma in this question, after 'the great lakes', then the subject would have been Cleveland, correct?




Hello MBAaspirant6,


Hope you are doing well. I will be glad to help you with this one. :)

Firstly, per the grammar rules, the noun modifier "that" is NOT preceded by a comma. So, there cannot be a comma after "the Great Lakes".

Secondly, it is very important to understand the intended meaning of the sentence to be sure what "that" MUST describe in this sentence to present logical meaning. The sentence says that Cleveland is BUT one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that want to do something. The use of the word "but" is significant in this sentence to understand what the author really wants to say. The use of this word suggests that Cleveland is among those many large communities on the Great Lakes that want to do something. So, the context of the sentence makes it crystal clear that the noun modifier "that" modifies/refers to the preceding plural noun "a large number of communities". Hence, the verb for the subject "that" MUST be plural "are looking".


Hope this helps. :)
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Hey Everyone!

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With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.


(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting

(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract


Here's a video I published recently: The Three Meanings of "But".

It explains:
  1. The meaning of the word "But" in this Official Question, and
  2. The importance of deriving the Intended Meaning before eliminating answer choices

I invite you to watch this video, especially if you find the usage of "but" in this question unfamiliar. This video explanation even contains a practice exercise to help you cement your learnings.

I hope this helps.

Happy Learning!

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With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.


(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting

(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract


Hi I have a small doubt.
Can anyone tell
How 'but' is adding to the meaning of the sentence.?
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[Hi I have a small doubt.

Can anyone tell

How 'but' is adding to the meaning of the sentence.?

We often see "but" used as a conjunction, but (<-- see?) in this case, "but" is used as a modifier describing "one." It's basically a synonym for "only" (or "just" or "merely"), as in: "Cleveland is just one of a large number of communities that are looking..."

Is the "but" needed? Not really. It simply adds emphasis, as in: "The annual Cherry Blossom Festival is but one of many reasons to visit Newark, New Jersey." The "but" just emphasizes the fact that there are multiple reasons to visit Newark. (Other reasons include graffiti and Portuguese food.)

I hope that helps!
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With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.


(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract

(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting

(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract


Here is my analysis of this question:

The question is fairly straightforward. But there is one interesting concept it illustrates.

What does the sentence want to say? That Cleveland is one many communities that are hoping to improve quality of life and attract businesses using their waterfronts.

If we have ‘one of many’ as the subject, ‘one’ works as a singular subject in subject verb agreement but a modifying clause could modify either ‘one’ or ‘many.’

(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract


We know that Cleveland is one of many communities that are hoping to improve quality … etc.
Hence, options (A) and (B) are eliminated.

(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting

Option (D) uses the singular pronoun ‘its’ to refer to ‘many communities’ hence this option is incorrect too.

(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract

Option (E) uses ‘as a way they can improve…’ which is incorrect. We have put in a clause with a subject and a verb ‘they can improve the quality …’ without linking it to the rest of the sentence in an appropriate manner.
We can say ‘as a way to improve’ (preferable on GMAT) or ‘as a way for improving.’
We cannot say ‘as a way they can improve…’ Hence (E) is not correct.

Also, ‘look at’ means direct your gaze while ‘look to someone/something’ means ‘to expect someone/something to provide’
Look at him. (turn your eyes in his direction)
Look to him for guidance. (expect him to provide you guidance)

Hence, here, ‘look to’ will be correct, eliminating options (B) and (E). Though even if we do not know this distinction, we will still get the answer because these options have other errors.

(C) is correct.
Answer (C)



Hi,

Why cleveland is not being taken as the subject and rather communities?

If in 'One of Many' one is considered as singular, similarly cleveland is acting here as one so it should be singular and should be followed by is and not are.

However i have came up with another thought (don't know whether it is right or wrong)

With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

If you look to above statement, if the sentence would rather be as below

Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that

then cleveland should be treated as singular...but the actual sentence is rather as below

Cleveland is one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that

Cleveland is but one of a large number- I think the insertion of 'but' in the sentence has altered the meaning and made the term plural.

Please correct me
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Answer is c)
A large number of communities -> plural, so we need a plural verb
a) and b)use 'is'(singular) with the plural subject
d) its is wrong here. Its can refer to Cleveland(singular) but how the city can look. Doesnt make any sense
Between c) and e) I found option c) better. Its precise and convey meaning in a better way
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