OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
With new developments in robotics and artificial intelligence taking place almost every other week,
technological advancement is rapidly transforming from a benevolent force to one that frightens many Americans.• Meaning?
The sentence indicates that the way people perceive technological advancement is changing from something positive to something negative.
• Idiom
The correct idiomatic expression is
from X to Y.THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) technological advancement is rapidly transforming from a benevolent force to one that frightens many Americans.
• I do not see any errors
• tech advancement is changing FROM X (a benevolent force) TO Y (a force that frightens people).
→ the word
one is a pronoun here. It refers to
force.
KEEP
Quote:
B) technological advancement is rapidly transforming
from a benevolent force
and to one that frightens many Americans.
• unidiomatic
Do not insert the word "and" in the idiom From X to Y.
Wrong: From X ... and to Y.
This idiom is tested a fair bit.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) technological advancement is rapidly
transforming between a benevolent force
and one that frightens many Americans.
• Meaning and idiom error
The tech advancement is not transforming "between" two things.
If you think about the verb
transform, the word
between makes no sense.
Furthermore, the idiom is From X to Y.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) technological advancement is undergoing a rapid transformation from
that of a benevolent force to one that frightens many Americans.
•
From that of X to one that Ys is not parallel
• what does "that of" refer to?
→ Given the placement, it should refer to "advancement," but that construction makes absolutely no sense.
Technological advancement is transforming rapidly from technological advancement [that is?] a benevolent force to [technological advancement] that frightens many Americans.
→ if in doubt, compare this option to (A).
Option A is cleaner and more logical because it
1) does not contain a weird "that of" phrase out of nowhere, and
2) it says what D says in fewer words.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) technological advancement is undergoing rapid transformation from a benevolent force
and to one that frightens many Americans.
• unidiomatic
Same error as that in B.
ELIMINATE E
The correct answer is A.COMMENTSGM2021 , welcome to SC Butler.
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