TheOutlawTorn wrote:
After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, myeloid leukemia is often signaled by pain in the spleen, which may be so overworked that it triples in size.
a. After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, myeloid leukemia is often signaled by pain in the spleen, which may be so overworked that it triples in size.
b. After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, the spleen’s size may be tripled by overwork and its pain be a signal of myeloid leukemia.
c. After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, overwork may cause the spleen to triple in size, and the resulting pain is often the first sign of myeloid leukemia.
d. After the spleen has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, it may be so overworked that it triples in size, and the resulting pain is often the first sign of myeloid leukemia.
e. After the spleen has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, it may have its size tripled by overwork and pain that is the first signal of myeloid leukemia.
After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, myeloid leukemia is often signaled by pain in the spleen, which may be so overworked that it triples in size.
a. After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, myeloid leukemia is often signaled by pain in the spleen, which may be so overworked that it triples in size.
Error in logical meaning of the modifier: The spleen has taken over the function of etc.. not the myeloid leukemiab. After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, the spleen’s size may be tripled by overwork and its pain be a signal of myeloid leukemia.
The modifier modify now the spleen size. It should modify spleen. + "its pain" the possessive pronoun refers to size. Size can't feel pain. Illogical.c. After it has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, overwork may cause the spleen to triple in size, and the resulting pain is often the first sign of myeloid leukemia.
Overwork is now modified by the modifier d. After the spleen has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, it may be so overworked that it triples in size, and the resulting pain is often the first sign of myeloid leukemia.
Correct, the modifier has been converted to a subordinate and spleen is the subject + It clearly refers to its antecedent spleene. After the spleen has taken over the function of the disabled white blood cells, it may have its size tripled by overwork and pain that is the first signal of myeloid leukemia.
Here there is a change meaning in the last part: Now the tripled size caused by overwork and pain are the first signal of leukemia because "that"modifies the entire precedent clause, not only pain