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All I could reckon from that rule was "present perfect tense" can replace "past tense" in cases where 1) An event happened from now to infinitely in the past 2) An event from now till some time bracket in the past
Yes Mayank. As you've rightly mentioned, from now is a crucial requirement for present perfect.

But that's not the case here. The sentence talks about something that happened between 1900 and 1920. So, there is no element of from now here. Hence, usage of present perfect is invalid here.

For example:

Correct:
By 1947, Britishers who lived in India, had made up their mind to leave India.

Wrong:
By 1947, Britishers who have lived in India, had made up their mind to leave India.

Again, since the above sentence talks about the timeframe of 1947 or earlier, there is no element of from now here. Hence, usage of present perfect is invalid here.
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How is the use of "had" justified in the correct option answer "B" ?
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The use of less/fewer has to do with what we are measuring. In this case, we are measuring the total weight, so even though pounds are plural, we are not counting the individual pounds. (This is why we talk about countable/uncountable vs. just plural/singular.) Similarly, I would say that I weigh less than 200 pounds (not by much! ;) ). If we were counting the number of fish, we'd say "fewer": "fewer than four million fish."
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How is the use of "had" justified in the correct option answer "B" ?
Hi anmolio, B is using past perfect "had reduced".

This post explains why Past perfect is the appropriate usage in this case.
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In B, How can "that" refer to plural noun? Isn't that wrong?
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In B, How can "that" refer to plural noun? Isn't that wrong?

"That" can act as both "Demonstrative pronoun" and "relative pronoun". When used as demonstrative pronoun it will only replace a singular noun, but when used a "relative pronoun" it can refer to both singular and plural noun.

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(A) that have blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams have
reduced landings to less that have blocked is a wrong tense for an event that was completed in the past

Which event was completed in the past? The blocking still occurs after 1920, but by 1920 it had gone so far that landings was considerably reduced. Have blocked may be the wrong tense, but the blocking has not come to an end by 1920.
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I can't understand why the past simple here is correct

"that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less"

It was something that was happening continuously. Shouldn't it be "that were blocking" ???
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I can't understand why the past simple here is correct

"that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less"

It was something that was happening continuously. Shouldn't it be "that were blocking" ???
Notice that that part of the sentence is about "the proliferation of milldams and culverts."

So, it's not about what the milldams and culverts were doing continuously. It's about the proliferation of certain types of milldams and culverts, ones that did a certain thing, "blocked shad."

Would milldams or culverts be continuously blocking shad as they "proliferated," i.e., were built. Not really. They would have been continuously blocking shad only once they had proliferated.

So, since the point is to describe the type of milldams and culverts that proliferated rather than express what they did once they existed, the use of the simple past "blocked" makes more sense.
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I can't understand why the past simple here is correct

"that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less"

It was something that was happening continuously. Shouldn't it be "that were blocking" ???

gamebredfighter - "milldams blocked migration" is more of a state progressive than an event progressive. Normally, we do not use progressive when talking of a state.
e.g. Back then, we were owning a Mercedes. - Incorrect. It should be "owned". No progression was happening.

Similarly since milldams were built, shad couldn't migrate. So there was no progression of blocking. We will use the simple past "blocked".
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(A) that have blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams have
reduced landings to less that have blocked is a wrong tense for an event that was completed in the past

Which event was completed in the past? The blocking still occurs after 1920, but by 1920 it had gone so far that landings was considerably reduced. Have blocked may be the wrong tense, but the blocking has not come to an end by 1920.
Yes, the blocking was still going on in 1920... but it's still an action that happened in the past (after all, the year 1920 obviously happened in the past, and we are talking about a result of the blocking that happened BY 1920). I suppose it's technically possible that the blocking is still presently going on, but given the context, the tense of "have blocked" doesn't make sense (as you said).

For more on why "blocked" (simple past) works in choice (B), check out this post.
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Thank you for beautiful response sir GMATGuruNY :)

I'm not quite clear why is present perfect tense in choice A. wrong?.

The present perfect serves to express a PAST ACTiON THAT AFFECTS THE PRESENT.
If there is no time modifier, the implication is that the action was performed in the RECENT PAST.
Biologists at the local university have discovered a bacterium that can withstand extreme heat.
Here, the present perfect verb in blue serves to express a RECENT discovery that affects our PRESENT knowledge of bacteria.

A: Around 1900, fishermen in the Chesapeake Bay area landed more than seventeen million pounds of shad in a single year, but by 1920, over-fishing and the proliferation of milldams and culverts that have blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less than four million pounds.
Here, the intention is to express actions that affected times in the PAST (1900 and 1920).
Thus, there is no justification for the use of present perfect verb in red, which implies an action performed in the RECENT PAST.
A good rule of thumb:
STAY IN ONE TENSE unless a change in tense is required.
Here, the main verbs (landed and had reduced) are past tense verbs.
Since the sentence does not require a change in tense, the verb in red should also be in the past tense.

Hi GMATGuruNY,

I am not a native speaker and I am quite confused about the usage of the phrase in present perfect tense 'have blocked' in choice A. When first read this choice, I think of a scenario in which the culverts still block shad migrations at present time, and hence 'have blocked' seems appropriate to me. Is this scenario possible? and if yes, what is the correct way to express it?

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I am not a native speaker and I am quite confused about the usage of the phrase in present perfect tense 'have blocked' in choice A. When first read this choice, I think of a scenario in which the culverts still block shad migrations at present time, and hence 'have blocked' seems appropriate to me. Is this scenario possible? and if yes, what is the correct way to express it?

Thanks.

You are correct in this regard:
The usage of have blocked can serve to convey that the migrations continue to be blocked in the present.
The following sentence conveys this meaning:
Culverts have blocked the migrations.
But the two time modifiers in A -- around 1900 and by 1920 -- place the sentence firmly in the past.
Thus in A, the usage of the present perfect is unwarranted.
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This sentence has an interesting twist to it, in that the tense correctly used in describing the most recent event is the past perfect.

The reason for that is the presence of the prepositional phrase by 1920.

A simplified version could be By 1920, over-fishing had reduced landings.

The reason the past perfect is correct is that it fits the idea that the landings were reduced over the time period prior to 1920.

Now let's check the answer choices.

(A) The present perfect have blocked does not make sense in a sentence describing past events.

(B) This version correctly describes the past events. By 1920 things that blocked shad had reduced landings.

(C) In this version the simple past reduced does not make sense, and to a lower amount than four million pounds is an awkwardly worded and ineffective comparison.

(D) In this version the use of the modifier having blocked wrecks the parallelism of the list and distorts the meaning.

over-fishing and requires a noun as the next item in the list. the proliferation of milldams and culverts having blocked is not a noun or noun structure.

Also, the use of the simple past reduced does not make sense.

(E) This repeats the list error of D and reduced landings to an amount lower than is questionable wording that is less succinct than reduced landings to less than.

The correct answer is B.

Explanation copied from Beat the GMAT. (Courtesy: Martin Murthy)
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Around 1900, fishermen in the Chesapeake Bay area landed more than seventeen million pounds of shad in a single year, but by 1920, over-fishing and the proliferation of milldams and culverts that have blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less than four million pounds.


The sentence says- Around 1900 fisherman in Ch bay caught more than 17 million pounds of shad in a single year but by 1920, overfishing and proliferation of milldams and culverts reduced the landings (catch) to less than four million pounds.

(A) that have blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less
The use of the present perfect tense is inappropriate. The present perfect tense is used when the past event has some relevance to the present.
In this sentence- milldams and culverts have blocked sad migrations- could mean that the effect is still in the present
As we are talking about what happened by 1920, the use of the present perfect tense is incorrect.

(B) that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less
Correct

(C) that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams reduced landings to a lower amount
As we are talking about - four million pounds- the total quantity, the use of “less than” is correct.
The use of simple past tense “reduced” will be incorrect here because we are talking about what happened by/before 1920. Hence, we need the past perfect tense “had reduced”. Eliminate.

(D) having blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams reduced landings to less
We need to use the past perfect tense “had reduced” because we are talking about what happened by/before 1920. Eliminate.

(E) having blocked shad migrations up their spawning streams had reduced landings to an amount lower

What is the antecedent of “their”? “Shad migrations?
An amount lower is also incorrect.
When referring to the total quantity, the use of “less than” is correct. Eliminate
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A) The present-perfect tense of have blocked
inappropriately describes an event that
caused something to happen before 1920.
In addition, migrations up their spawning
streams is incorrect.
B) Correct. The comparison of poundage
is efficiently explained, and the sequence
of tenses makes sense. Despite a possible
superficial appearance of a comparison
between countable things (pounds), less
is more appropriate than fewer for the
comparison. The fishermen landed different
amounts of fish; they did not land the
number of pounds in terms of which those
amounts are measured.
C) The comparative expression to a lower
amount is unnecessarily wordy. The past-
perfect form had reduced would make the
temporal relationships somewhat clearer
than does the past tense reduced.
D) The present-perfect participial phrase,
having blocked . .. streams, should be set off in
commas; as it stands, it does not make sense.
The past-perfect form had reduced would
make the temporal relationships somewhat
clearer than does the past tense reduced.
E) The present-perfect participial phrase must
be set off with commas; the pronoun their,
which is also in (A), nonsensically refers to
migrations, and the comparative expression
to an amount lower is unnecessarily wordy
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GMATNinja, can you please confirm whether the following is the right sequence of events in this sentence? Would it be always the case that by indicates an event that happened before another event? If it is not always the case, can you please provide additional examples to show when by will not require the usage of past perfect tense when two or more present in the sentence, and these events happened in the past.
1st event--> overfishing and prolif blocked shad migration--> We should use Past perfect since this event happened before 2nd event.
2nd event--> fishermen landed more than 17M pounds of shad
less than is modifying 4 M pounds
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