Responding to a question that appeared on our
Ask Me Anything About SC thread -- and I figured that it might help somebody here, too:
Rachna23
Hi Ninja,
Can you please explain the use of past perfect tense in this sentence (Official question, link at the end of query):
Around 1900, fishermen in the Chesapeake Bay area landed more than seventeen million pounds of shad in a single year, but by 1920, over-fishing and the proliferation of milldams and culverts
that blocked shad from migrating up their spawning streams had reduced landings to less than four million pounds.
The discussions on the forum say that since the action happened
before 1920 so past perfect should be used. However, there are not 2 but 3 time periods in the question - around 1900, between 1900 and 1920, and 1920. If we are using simple past for the first action/time 'around 1900, fishermen......landed....', then how is the use of past perfect justified for second time/action.
https://gmatclub.com/forum/around-1900-fishermen-in-the-chesapeake-bay-area-landed-more-than-203779.htmlGood question! Generally speaking, the relevant time period will be the one designated in the clause that the verb appears in. For example:
"This morning Tim promised his wife that he would feed his children three nutritious meals today, but by early evening, it was clear that he had fed them nothing but a handful of Cheetos dipped in ketchup."
"Early evening" designates the time period. Because Tim fed his kids Cheetos before the early evening, and the early evening was in the past, "had fed" is correct here. The fact that there's another time period mentioned in a different clause is irrelevant.
Same deal here:
"By 1920, over-fishing and the proliferation of milldams and culverts...had reduced landings to less than four million pounds."
"By 1920" is an adverbial modifier specifying the time period for the action. Because the action, "reduced" happened before 1920, which is also in the past, it's appropriate to write "had reduced" here.
Takeaway: Don't overthink past perfect usage. If you see "had", all you're asking is yourself is whether the action in question took place before something else in the past. If it did, "had" is acceptable.
I hope that helps!