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Hi,

I'm an Indian applicant to Cornell's 1 year program and was hoping to get my 'table of contents' essays reviewed. Would be grateful for any feedback on this. Here's the link to the essay:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLnle_n ... e=youtu.be

Thanks for this!

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Hello,

While a detailed review is beyond the scope for a public forum such as this, you may benefit from reading the article here.

Also look at upping the creativity element in your essay.

All the best.
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New post 13 Nov 2017, 06:18
Hey,

I just checked your video essay. I believe you have done a great job in it.

I would prefer watching tons of other video essays on you tube and find out any missing element that you might have.

Good work and all the very best :)
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