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Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, the oceans play an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, moderating temperature by the absorption of heat and carbon dioxide, and giving pure water back to the atmosphere through evaporation

A Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, the oceans play an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, moderating

B. Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface and playing an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, the oceans moderate

C. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface and play an essential role in maintaining conditions for human existence on land, and by moderating

D. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface, play an essential role in mandating the conditions for human existence on land, and moderate

E. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface, playing an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, and they moderate
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should be A.

Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, the oceans play an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, moderating temperature by the absorption of heat and carbon dioxide, and giving pure water back to the atmosphere through evaporation

A Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, the oceans play an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, moderating

B. Covering 71 percent of Earth’s Earth’s surface and playing an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, the oceans moderate---problem with moderate and giving

C. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface and play an essential role in maintaining conditions for human existence on land, and by moderating-- wrong use of and in this choice

D. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface, play an essential role in mandating the conditions for human existence on land, and moderate--Again no parallelism

E. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface, playing an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, and they moderate
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Hi,

Although I agree that A is the correct answer, I wonder about the structure of this sentence.

The "comma +and giving" phrase indicates that this sentence has 3 parallel factors: maintaining the condition, moderating temperature, and giving pure water. All 3 modify the "essential role".

However, from the explanation in OG2016 and the perspective of meaning, "moderating temperature" and "giving pure water" are placed there to modify the "maintaining the conditions for human existence". I just do not understand why there is a comma before "and giving pure water". It is just a clause with 2 simple parallel phrase and without any modifiers between, so I think the structure should be "moderating... and giving pure water ...".
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Yeah, this is a funny problem. On the one hand, we could disregard the intended meaning and simply look at the three -ing words as parallel items. This would get us to A. If we dig a bit deeper, however, that starts to look strange . . .

For instance, the word "in" appears before the list. I can understand how the oceans play an essential role "in maintaining the conditions" and "in moderating temperature," but "in giving pure water back to the atmosphere" doesn't make sense. It would seem that we are saying oceans are just part of this last process, when in fact they are doing it all by themselves!

Additionally, we might notice that the first item is very general (maintaining conditions), while the other two items are specific ways in which the conditions (temperature and humidity) are maintained. It seems that they must be modifying the first item!

At this point, we might be tempted to drop A. That would be unfortunate, because then someone who didn't pay attention to all this would get the problem right, while we would miss it! To me, that is not great design on the GMAT's part--we don't see that kind of thing too often. In any case, if we look down the list using this new interpretation, we still won't find a parallel answer choice. Answer A's only offense seems to be a stray comma. Let's keep it.

Now, why is that comma there? Sometimes we add a comma where it might not seem warranted, with the goal of increasing clarity. Since the phrase "moderating temperature" is itself modified, we might think that "giving" is meant to be parallel with "the absorption." That would make "giving" another way that the oceans moderate temperature. The comma makes it clear that "giving" is a new item unto itself.
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Now, why is that comma there? Sometimes we add a comma where it might not seem warranted, with the goal of increasing clarity. Since the phrase "moderating temperature" is itself modified, we might think that "giving" is meant to be parallel with "the absorption." That would make "giving" another way that the oceans modify temperature. The comma makes it clear that "giving" is a new item unto itself.

Hello DmitryFarber, thanks for the phenomenal analysis. This portion however, is not clear when you say: the phrase "moderating temperature" is itself modified.

Also, when you mention "another way that the oceans modify temperature", I believe you mean to say "another way that the oceans moderate temperature". Please confirm.
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Or can we say that GMAT wants to convey is not any more fastidious about list parallelism just as it tolerates equivocation on pronoun reference.
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Or can we say that GMAT wants to convey is not any more fastidious about list parallelism just as it tolerates equivocation on pronoun reference.

Can you please explain this a bit more. Not very clear.
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Or can we say that GMAT wants to convey is not any more fastidious about list parallelism just as it tolerates equivocation on pronoun reference
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Let me clarify.

Yeah! It is not clear since I missed a few words. The edited thing should be “or can we say that GMAT wants to convey that it is not any more fastidious about list parallelism just as it tolerates equivocation on pronoun reference.”

As you know, GMAT allows certain amount flexibility in fixing the referents for pronouns. This we have known by GMAT’s marking as correct choices even those with uncertain referents. In the given case, the logical extension may be that even if there are only two items in a list, it doesn’t mind allowing a serial comma in those lists.

The other doubt is whether this an OG sample at all or whether there is some transcriptional error?

We don’t know at the moment.
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The other doubt is whether this an OG sample at all or whether there is some transcriptional error?

Thanks. I just checked. This is question number 66 in OG16 and the comma is present in the question as well.

Official explanation does not mention any reason for comma.
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Sorry for the belated clarification:

1) the phrase "moderating temperature" is itself modified

"Moderating temperature" is an adverbial modifier. It modifies the previous clause: "the oceans play an essential role . . . " However, we don't just say "moderating temperature" and move on to something else. The phrase "by the absorption of heat and carbon dioxide" modifies the modifier! How do the oceans moderate temperature? By the absorption of heat and carbon dioxide. This additional modifier makes the sentence more complicated, and I think that's why the author added a comma. If the modifying phrase were just "moderating temperature and giving back pure water," there would be absolutely no reason to put a comma between the two modifiers.

2) Also, when you mention "another way that the oceans modify temperature", I believe you mean to say "another way that the oceans moderate temperature".

You're absolutely right. All that moderating and modifying got me a bit mixed up. I've corrected the original post for clarity.
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Thanks daagh and DmitryFarber for the explanations. It is much clearer now, though overall I found it to be on the slightly difficult side:(.
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DmitryFarber and other experts:
Choice A might be an OA but it sounds quite awkward to me. Here is why -

It seems to me that the intent of the author is to say "Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, the oceans play an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, BY moderating temperature by the absorption of heat and carbon dioxide, and BY giving pure water back to the atmosphere through evaporation" i.e. the oceans play an essential role ...BY moderating temperature ....and BY giving pure water.

However, I am not quite sure if I see very often that a participle phrase especially when it occurs at the end of the sentence is used instead of using BY construction. For instance -

Sweeping across the night sky, the bats hunted their prey (sounds quite ok to my ear)
The bats hunted their prey, sweeping across the night sky (sounds awkward)
Second kind of construction is not very common at least for me.

Does it make sense? What Im missing here in terms of GMAT preference?
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X of Y's structure is wrong.

Then how come '71 percent of Earth's' is correct in option A.

X = 71 percent
Y = Earth

Can someone explain?
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Hi Kartab,

It's not wrong at all. It is perfectly fine to write 71 percent of Earth's water, biggest piece of the pie, etc.

Hope this helps!

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X of Y's structure is wrong.

Then how come '71 percent of Earth's' is correct in option A.

X = 71 percent
Y = Earth

Can someone explain?
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Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, the oceans play an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, moderating temperature by the absorption of heat and carbon dioxide, and giving pure water back to the atmosphere through evaporation

A Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, the oceans play an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, moderating

B. Covering 71 percent of Earth’s Earth’s surface and playing an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, the oceans moderate

C. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface and play an essential role in maintaining conditions for human existence on land, and by moderating

D. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface, play an essential role in mandating the conditions for human existence on land, and moderate

E. The oceans cover 71 percent of Earth’s surface, playing an essential role in maintaining the conditions for human existence on land, and they moderate

Covering 71 percent of Earth’s surface, correctly modifies the subject here the oceans
Verb-ing modifier,clause
can modify the subject of the clause and the entire clause itself for ex
Wearing the black shirt,John killed the snake.
Here modifier modifies the John i.e subject

In choice C
cover and play two things happening which is not the intended meaning of the sentence
In D and E and B
and moderate is not correct as we have in non underlined part giving

So A is the best answer
moderating || giving
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Hi guys I'm new here, anyway, I was looking for an answer here since I did not find the OA's very clear. I think the point here is that most of the answers are grammatically correct, so we gotta look at the meaning of them. The oceans play an essential role because they moderate etc, so answer A is the only one which gives that meaning. Hope I've been clear
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