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Just shooting out my opinion here: thought this question was really lame. There's nothing really wrong with choice A itself. D and E are more concise, I guess.

sudarshan22, what's wrong with E? Also, why have you highlighted "Despite the fact that"? What do the highlights represent?
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One thing I learned from practicing sentence correction, despite the fact has always been a no no. So I instantly eliminated A and C
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Why was E wrong?

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E & D have a similar construction as far as modifiers are concerned.

that were in existence in the sixteenth century is just too wordy & it does change the meaning slightly. It takes the limelight away from the act of plundering that the Spaniards had done.
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my 2 cents.

Despite and in spite of are always accompanied by a noun or a pronoun. With these in sentence, if we have to introduce a clause, we are forced to insert "the fact" between Despite/in spite of and the clause. Whereas using although/even though is much straight forward and concise. Since gmat tends to favor concise statements, I would always pick although over despite/in spite of.

Another pair is instead of and rather than..i'd always pick rather than.


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c is concise
instead of saying despite the fact that we can simply say although
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What is wrong with A?
I know despite should be followed by a noun phrase /noun. Also *fact that* needs to be followed by an Independent clause ( complete sentence). I don't see anything wrong with option A. Please help

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+1 for D

D only uses the correct preposition during, which put more emphasis on the happening of the period.

The following link will give you some insights of diff b/w during and in.

https://www.grammar-quizzes.com/preps_during-in.html

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in spite of / despite / although

In spite of, despite and although are all used to show a contrast but there are differences in the structures used with them.

In spite of / despite

After in spite of and despite we use a noun or a pronoun.

We enjoyed our camping holiday in spite of the rain.
Despite the pain in his leg he completed the marathon.
Despite having all the necessary qualifications, they didn’t offer me the job.
Remember that the gerund (‘-ing’ form) is the ‘noun’ form of a verb.

The only difference between in spite of and despite is the ‘of’.

Despite of the bad weather, there was a large crowd at the match. - Incorrect


Although

After although we use a subject and a verb.

We enjoyed our camping holiday although it rained every day.
Although he worked very hard, he didn’t manage to pass the exam.
The holiday was great although the hotel wasn’t very nice.


We can use in spite of and despite with a subject and verb if we include the expression ‘the fact that’. - So choice C is wrong in original question.

In spite of the fact that he worked very hard, he didn’t manage to pass the exam.
Despite the fact that he worked very hard, he didn’t manage to pass the exam.


Even though

Even though is a slightly stronger form of although.

We decided to buy the house even though we didn’t really have enough money.
You keep making that stupid noise even though I’ve asked you to stop three times.

Like although, even though is followed by a subject and a verb.

Request other GC members to shade light on errors in original question choices in light of above.

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Option (B) is incorrect since "most Incan cities" is an object of the verb "plundered". The prepositional phrase "in the 16th century" should appear after "cities" or before Spaniards.

Option (E) is illogical - it implies that Spaniards targeted cities that were in existence in the 16th century - when did they actually plunder is not known but they targeted those cities which existed in the 16th century. This makes no sense.
The Spaniards must have plundered during the 16th century.

Compared with "despite the fact that", "although" is far more concise and clean.

Answer must be (D)
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Hi Team,
Please help with the difference b/w option A & option D.

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Hi Team,
Please help with the difference b/w option A & option D.

Thanks in advance,
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Hi Anurag

As you can observe on examination, the only difference between option (A) and (D) is the contrasting transition used. (A) uses "Despite" and (D) uses "Although". As has been explained in an earlier post, the former is required to be followed by a noun/pronoun and this is accomplished by inserting "the fact that" after "Despite". The latter is required to be followed by a clause and is accomplished by "the Spaniards plundered...".

As such there is nothing grammatically wrong with either of the two options. Hence, we are left with resorting to other criteria to eliminate one of the two options. As you are aware, all else being equal, GMAT prefers a concise answer to a wordy one. Option (D) is the more concise of the two and hence is the better option.

Hope this helps.
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