aragonn wrote:
Project SC Butler: Day 79: Sentence Correction (SC1)
For SC butler Questions Click HereGlass containers are considered potentially dangerous objects by stadium officials and
are therefore subject to being confiscated at the entrances to well-attended events in order to ensure crowd safety.
A. are therefore subject to being confiscated
B. therefore are subject to being confiscated
C. therefore they are subject to confiscation
D. they therefore may confiscate them to
E. may therefore be confiscated
The best/excellent answers get kudos, which will be awarded after the answer is revealed.
There may be no best/excellent answers, or a there may be a few excellent answers!Official Explanation:
The underlined portion of the sentence contains a plural verb, so check for subject-verb agreement errors. The underlined portion of the sentence also contains the idiom subject to, so check for idiom errors. The plural are agrees with containers. The idiom subject to, however, should be followed by a noun. Being confiscated is a verb form, so the sentence contains an idiom error. Eliminate choice A and look for any obvious repeaters. Choice B is an obvious repeater because it also follows subject to with the verb form being confiscated. Eliminate choice B. Now, evaluate the remaining answer choices individually looking for a reason to eliminate each.
Choice C corrects the original idiom error by replacing the verb form being confiscated with the noun confiscation but introduces a pronoun ambiguity error. The plural pronoun they could refer to containers or officials, so eliminate choice C. Choice D corrects the original idiom error by rephrasing the underlined portion of the sentence as may confiscate, but also introduces a pronoun ambiguity error. The plural pronoun they could refer to containers or officials, so eliminate choice D. Choice E corrects the original idiom error by rephrasing the underlined portion of the sentence as may…be confiscated and introduces no new errors, so keep choice E.
Choice A: No. Subject to being is unidiomatic. Idiom.
Choice B: No. Subject to being is unidiomatic. Idiom.
Choice C: No. The pronoun they has no clear referent. Pronoun ambiguity.
Choice D: No. The pronoun they has no clear referent. Pronoun ambiguity.
Choice E: Correct.