Sumi1010
Read your wonderful explanations on Qn 4- the passage mentions the status of age most likely to??
I am sorry but I still am not convinced how E is better than A.
(E) identify a factor that led Robertson to revise her hypothesis about precolonial Africa
You wrote - According to this choice, the status of age was most likely mentioned in order to identify a factor that led Robertson to revise the hypothesis.
(A) indicate that women’s dependence on men in precolonial Kenya was not absolute
You wrote - The author never stated that women's dependence on men in precolonial Kenya was absolute in the first place. So why would the author need to indicate that women's dependence was not absolute?
The passage says :
Subsequent research in Kenya...Before colonialism, gender was more salient in central Kenya..although age was still crucial....Factors like...However, since age apparently remained the overriding principle of social organization in central Kenya, some senior women had much authority. Thus, Robertson revised her hypothesis.
My understandings :
1.
The age was a crucial factor in Kenya before colonialism ( but not as much as gender was). Why someone will talk about less crucial factor here? - Just to showcase some reservation on general scenario. Reference of age does the same. It shows that the gender was not absolute determiner and women got some power because of age.
In the last sentence " Thus ....revised her hypothesis" of passage, " Thus" responds to what has been noticed ( from research) in the 2nd paragraph and not just to the sentence prior to it.
2.
One more note : If I erase the "However, since age apparently remained the overriding principle of social organization in central Kenya, some senior women had much authority" . Does it change anything in final conclusion?
Before colonialism, gender was more salient in central Kenya --> Thus, Robertson revised her hypothesis.
I don't see any difference. Request you to help.
In your point #1, you ask, "Why someone will talk about less crucial factor here?"
We were not asked to consider why "someone" would raise the issue of age. We were asked why
the author raised the issue of age
in the context of this passage. We have the choose the answer that's most reflected by the passage, NOT the answer that we think would generally make the most sense.
So let's step back and refresh on the passage itself. The purpose of the second paragraph is to explain how and why Robertson revised her hypothesis. Subsequent research about precolonial Ghana and Kenya convinced Robertson that she had overgeneralized, and the role of age in central Kenya is raised as one of the factors that led to Robertson's revision.
Choice (E) fits perfectly into the structure and purpose of the paragraph.
Now, in your interpretation of choice (A), you write, "It shows that the gender was not absolute determiner and women got some power because of age." But this is not what choice (A) says:
Quote:
(A) indicate that women’s dependence on men in precolonial Kenya was not absolute
Choice (A) states that the author is trying to indicate that
women's dependence on men was not absolute. This is NOT the same as trying to indicate that gender wasn't the absolute determinant of women's greater power in Kenya.
And getting back to the question we're trying to answer... how would choice (A) fit into the passage itself?
Well, it doesn't. As I pointed out earlier, the author never states that women's dependence on men was absolute. In fact, the author explicitly states that women were "more dependent on men than generally was the case in Ghana." The issue of dependence is raised to contrast the treatment of women in two countries and ultimately to help explain why Robertson revised her hypothesis about precolonial Africa — NOT to support a conclusion about whether or not women absolutely depended on men in precolonial Kenya.
Choice (A) sounds sensible, but it doesn't fit the purpose of the paragraph or reflect the goal of the author in writing this passage.
(E) remains a much better answer to the question we were asked, and that's why we keep (E) and eliminate (A).
I hope this helps!