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Industry analysts said that the recent rise in fuel prices may be an early signal of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through the end of the year.

A. of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through---- 1. redundancy of may and possibility as already pointed out. 2. usually has no verb to modify, a dangling adverb


B. of the possibility that gasoline and heating oil prices could stay higher than usual throughout--- 1. redundancy 2. throughout and through are meaning - wise different.

C. of prices of gasoline and heating oil possibly staying higher than usually through ----- 1. redundancy 2. dangling adverb

D. that prices of gasoline and heating oil could stay higher than they usually are throughout----- throughout and through are meaning - wise different.

E. that prices of gasoline and heating oil will stay higher than usual through -- correct choice

General: All reported speeches are presented in a relative clause introduced by 'that'. Hence D and E are stylistically better than A. B and C.
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anje29, you'd be right if we were dealing with a simple past tense sentence: "Industry analysts said that prices would stay high for another two years."

However, this sentence is a bit more complicated. Two words in the fixed portion of the sentence--"recent" and "may"--make it clear that the analysts' statement is not restricted to the past. They made a statement about what is still going to happen. This makes "would" less appropriate. Compare "My friend said that she had pneumonia" (pure past) with "My friend said that she has pneumonia" (she still has pneumonia). We can see the same thing with will/would, even though predictions naturally extend into the future either way. "I said that I would help you, and I will." (In the past, I made a statement about what would happen, and now it is still going to happen.) "Scientists predicted last year that the world population will peak at around 9 billion." (The prediction occurred in the past, but the predicted result is still something we're waiting for.)

If it seems that there isn't a precise rule here, that's because there isn't! It's more a matter of what we are trying to emphasize. Is the point to show that a past prediction or projection is old or invalid? Have we perhaps replaced it with a new one? Are we focused more on what was said than on whether it will really happen in the future? Then "would" makes sense. Are we still anticipating the predicted outcome? Are we more focused on the prediction itself than on when it was made? Then we should use "will."
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Industry analysts said that the recent rise in fuel prices may be an early signal of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through the end of the year.

A. of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through
B. of the possibility that gasoline and heating oil prices could stay higher than usual throughout
C. of prices of gasoline and heating oil possibly staying higher than usually through
D. that prices of gasoline and heating oil could stay higher than they usually are throughout
E. that prices of gasoline and heating oil will stay higher than usual through


Option A &B : Incorrect because of the usage of possibility as may be is already used in the non-underlined part. Redundant.
Option C: Usage of usually is incorrect. the prices are higher than usual is the correct usage.
Option D: Same as C. usage of they is ambiguous.
Option E: Correct
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DebasishDhar wrote:
Hi, Can you explain the difference between option D and E


Hi DebasishDhar ,

There are various differences between D and E.

1. Through the end of the year vs throughout the end of the year. Look here for more details:

https://gmatclub.com/forum/industry-ana ... l#p1870370

2. When I am using may, I should not use possibility/could kind of words. Could again signifies possibility and using could with may can lead to redundancy error. Hence, D is incorrect.

I hope that makes sense. :)
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daagh.

I rejected E because of the phrase: "through the end of the year".

Well what is the difference between throughout the end of the year and through end of the year, why the latter is correct here?
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Industry analysts said that the recent rise in fuel prices may be an early signal of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through the end of the year.

A. of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through---- 1. redundancy of may and possibility as already pointed out. 2. usually has no verb to modify, a dangling adverb


B. of the possibility that gasoline and heating oil prices could stay higher than usual throughout--- 1. redundancy 2. throughout and through are meaning - wise different.

C. of prices of gasoline and heating oil possibly staying higher than usually through ----- 1. redundancy 2. dangling adverb

D. that prices of gasoline and heating oil could stay higher than they usually are throughout----- throughout and through are meaning - wise different.

E. that prices of gasoline and heating oil will stay higher than usual through -- correct choice

General: All reported speeches are presented in a relative clause introduced by 'that'. Hence D and E are stylistically better than A. B and C.


daagh isnt could preferred for future in past context??
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deependra1234 wrote:
daagh isnt could preferred for future in past context??




Hello deependra1234,

Although your query is not addressed to me, I would like to clarify your doubt. :-)

This official sentence intends to say that the analysts said that possibly the oil prices will remain higher than usual through the end of the year.

The event of the prices staying higher pertains to future period. The possibility is there that this action will take place. Hence, use of will is absolutely correct in the context of this sentence.

Use of the verb could stay again presents possibility. This is not the intended meaning of the sentence.


Hope this helps. :-)
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I have query regarding (D):
Is there no comparison error here after I replace they with prices?
I understand that COULD is redundant with MAY BE in non-underlined portion,
but how do I infer WILL in intended meaning of this sentence. I certainly do
see a possibility more than a certainty as suggested by WILL.
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The "may" that you mentioned already softens "will." So this may be a sign that prices will stay higher. Then again, it may not be such a sign, in which case prices may not stay higher.

As for "they" in D, I don't see a problem there. Prices are going to stay higher than prices usually do. We don't need the word "prices"--or even the word "they"--but the meaning is clear enough.
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GMATNinja VeritasPrepKarishma egmat

I have query regarding (D):
Is there no comparison error here after I replace they with prices?
I understand that COULD is redundant with MAY BE in non-underlined portion,
but how do I infer WILL in intended meaning of this sentence. I certainly do
see a possibility more than a certainty as suggested by WILL.



A few things about (D) that make me unhappy:

- "may" already shows possibility. "could" is redundant here.
- "they usually are" followed by "throughout ..." gives the feel that "are" is getting modified. It seems that we are talking about how the prices usually are throughout the end of the year instead of how they are expected to be higher throughout the end of the year.
- the use of throughout instead of through is not right (as explained in detail by daagh above).

Also, this is perfectly valid:
A may be a sign that B will happen.
It shows uncertainty - Will B happen or not, we don't know.
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GMATNinja VeritasPrepKarishma egmat

I have query regarding (D):
Is there no comparison error here after I replace they with prices?
I understand that COULD is redundant with MAY BE in non-underlined portion,
but how do I infer WILL in intended meaning of this sentence. I certainly do
see a possibility more than a certainty as suggested by WILL.




Hello Arpit/ adkikani,


Thank you for your query. :-)


Well, I do not see any comparison issue in Choice D. They can only refer to prices, presenting the intended comparison.


Hope this helps. :-)
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Industry analysts said that the recent rise in fuel prices may be an early signal of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through the end of the year.

(A) of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through
(B) of the possibility that gasoline and heating oil prices could stay higher than usual throughout
(C) of prices of gasoline and heating oil possibly staying higher than usually through
(D) that prices of gasoline and heating oil could stay higher than they usually are throughout
(E) that prices of gasoline and heating oil will stay higher than usual through


We could also note one more tool for an early POE. We can compare adjectives with adjectives but not with adverbs. 'Higher' is an adjective while 'usually' is an adverb. We can safely eliminate A, C, and D on this count. Between B and E, the difference in meaning between 'through' and 'throughout' decides the winner that is E.
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deependra1234 wrote:
daagh isnt could preferred for future in past context??




Hello deependra1234,

Although your query is not addressed to me, I would like to clarify your doubt. :-)

This official sentence intends to say that the analysts said that possibly the oil prices will remain higher than usual through the end of the year.

The event of the prices staying higher pertains to future period. The possibility is there that this action will take place. Hence, use of will is absolutely correct in the context of this sentence.

Use of the verb could stay again presents possibility. This is not the intended meaning of the sentence.


Hope this helps. :-)
Thanks.
Shraddha


Hi Sharddha,
Please help me in understanding through and throughout
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"Through [X period of time]" means "from the beginning (now or a specified time) until the end of X period of time." So in the sentence above, this means that heating prices may remain high from now until the end of the year.

"Throughout [X period of time]" means "for all of X period of time." In the sentence above, this would mean that heating prices may remain high for all of the end of the year. This is very odd, since the end of the year isn't really a specific period. Are we talking about just Dec. 31, or all of December, etc.? Also, what about the intervening time between now (whenever that is) and the end of the year? It's fairly clear that this is not the intended meaning. In fact, I don't think a proper English sentence would ever say "throughout the end of the year." A better usage would be something like "Throughout the summer months, one can spot moths fluttering around lampposts."
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Dear Friends,

Here is a detailed explanation to this question-

AbdurRakib wrote:
Industry analysts said that the recent rise in fuel prices may be an early signal of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through the end of the year.

(A) of the possibility of gasoline and heating oil prices staying higher than usually through
(B) of the possibility that gasoline and heating oil prices could stay higher than usual throughout
(C) of prices of gasoline and heating oil possibly staying higher than usually through
(D) that prices of gasoline and heating oil could stay higher than they usually are throughout
(E) that prices of gasoline and heating oil will stay higher than usual through


Choice A: This answer choice displays a clear case of redundancy; as the non-underlined portion of the sentence already includes the verb "may", conveying the sense of ambiguity inherent to the sentence's meaning, there is no reason to use the word "possibility". Additionally, this answer choice incorrectly uses the adverb "usually" to modify another adverb "higher"; the correct form of the verb that should be used here is the adjective form "usual". Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Choice B: This answer choice repeats the redundancy error found in Option A. This answer choice also creates a meaning error by substituting the word "through" with the word "throughout"; the former implies that the prices will stay higher than usual from the present to the end of the year, while the latter implies that prices will stay high during a particular, short period before the year ends. Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Choice C: This answer choice also suffers from a redundancy error, due to the use of the word "possibly". This answer choice also repeats the error related to the use of the word "usually", found in Option A. Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Choice D: This answer choice shares the error related to the use of "throughout", seen in Option B. Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Choice E: This answer choice conveys the intended meaning of the sentence and avoids incorrect adverb use and redundancy. Thus, this answer choice is correct.

Hence, E is the best answer choice.

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Snippet from Manhattan:
The conditional tense is formed by combining would with the base form of
the verb: would provide. This construction expresses the future from the point
of view of the past.
The typical sequences for these types of sentences are either Present + Future
or Past + Conditional:
Right: The scientist BELIEVES that the machine WILL BE
wonderful.
Present Future
Wrong: The scientist BELIEVES that the machine WOULD BE
wonderful.
Present Conditional
Right: The scientist BELIEVED that the machine WOULD BE
wonderful.
Past Conditional
Wrong: The scientist BELIEVED that the machine WILL BE
wonderful.
Past Future

Why is option E correct?

Analysts SAID that the recent rise in fuel prices may be an early signal that prices of gasoline and heating oil WILL stay higher than usual through the end of the year

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