Thanks for sharing your story. You’ve got a lot to be proud of already. A 3.97 GPA from a Japanese university, especially in a second language and unfamiliar culture, shows real determination. Even though your major was broader, the finance-focused seminars and your thesis on sustainable finance in Mongolia show that your interest in this field is genuine and growing. And that 745 GMAT? Incredible. It shows you’re more than ready for the academic side of a master’s in finance. Once you retake TOEFL or IELTS, try to aim for something close to your previous 110. It will help round out your application nicely.
What’s likely on your mind, and rightly so, is your limited work experience. An 8-month internship is a good starting point, especially in a formal corporate setting. But since you haven’t had a full-time role yet, your essays will matter a lot. Use them to help admissions officers understand your journey. Talk honestly about how your interests shifted from economics to finance, and why this degree is the right next step. Show them that you’re thoughtful, motivated, and already building the skills you’ll need.
Your extracurriculars may feel light, but they still show that you’re someone who shows up. Helping organize events, volunteering, and even competing (and winning) in a trading simulation all reflect initiative and curiosity. In the coming months, see if you can explore more hands-on finance work. Even small projects or online courses can help fill in the gaps.
You come across as humble, curious, and very capable. With your strong academics and a bit more real-world exposure, you’ll be a competitive applicant and someone admissions teams will want to root for.
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Hey everyone,Could you please evaluate my profile for MFin or MSF programs in the United States? I'm planning to apply starting R1 for the Fall 2026 intake.Profile:- I'm a 23-year-old Mongolian male. Not very sporty, rather geeky.- I was interested in Economics in high school, then became more interested in finance in university.- Can speak Mongolian, English, and super basic Japanese.Education:- Graduated from a less-known Japanese University this March.- Majored in Innovation Studies (i.e. Liberal Arts), with seminar classes in Finance. All courses were in English.- 3.97 GPA converted to US.- Wrote my thesis on sustainable finance in Mongolia, was more of a literature review.Standardized Tests:- Just took the GMAT and got a 745.- Planning to take the TOEFL or IELTS soon. Got 110 on TOEFL before when applying to undergrad, but probably out of practice now.Work Experience:- Did an 8-month internship at the finance department of an international manufacturing company in Japan.- No full-time or relevant part-time job experience.Extracurriculars & Certifications:- Was a member of international student organizations in my university, and helped organize events.- Won a simulated trading competition in my seminar class by putting everything in crypto. (Needed volatility to get 1st place, personally not into crypto)- Volunteered at an startup and entrepreneurship event.Target Programs:NYU, Vanderbilt, Notre Dame, MIT, Berkeley MFE, etc.- Scholarship is important, as I can't repay tuition loans if I can't find a job in the US after graduation, which is uncertain with current job market and administration.