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Pack 13, Question 1 of 5:

No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment,  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  without physical contact.
 
A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed
 
B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed
 
C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed
 
D. virtual physicians and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed
 
E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

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NiftyNiffler · Accepted Answer

No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment,  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  without physical contact.

"No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment" modifies the individuals seeing treatment, not the physicians. Hence, D and E are out

A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  -- "for help to treat" is not correct idiomatic usage.

B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed  -- "for help in treating" is CORRECT idiom
 
C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from  them  to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed  -- "them" has ambiguous referent

D.  virtual physicians  and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed  -- wrong modifier, reason mentioned above

E.  virtual physicians  and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  -- wrong modifier, reason mentioned above

So,  B  is correct.

SiddharthR · Answer

B

Modifier error. We are talking about individuals and not physicians (D, E out)

From A, B, C, B uses the correct way of saying "help in treating"

PoojanB · Answer

D,E out due to modifier error.  It's the individuals who do not want to travel to local clinic.

Between A,B & C
 A has subtle meaning error - 'people turn to phy and psych for help to treat' means people themselves are offering help to doctors. that is not the intended meaning.
C - I suppose C is missing a 'that'..but its typo...even if we put that...the sentence convey the meaning that people are turning to doctors for the illnesses that  could  have been cured.. doesn't make sense.  C is out

B clearly conveys the meaning and is therefore the winner.

I am curious for following  @EMPOWERgmatVerbal 
Doesn't 'turning to someone' itself mean 'to ask for help'? isn't the use of word ' help' is redundant in all 5 answer choices?

1BlackDiamond1 · Answer

First lets dissect the sentence into different clauses.
No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment, - Modifier modifying the subject many individuals
many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses 
that can be diagnosed without physical contact. – that refers to illnesses

A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed
For help to - is in active voice meaning that individuals are themselves helping to treat illnesses.
Hence incorrect
B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed
For help in – is the correct idiom to be used here. This is a possible answer.

C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed
For help from them – Wordy and awkward
There is no connector that after illnesses and before could. A connector that is needed here.

D. virtual physicians and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed
No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment, - Modifier modifying the subject many individuals
Hence incorrect

E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed
No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment, - Modifier modifying the subject many individuals
Hence incorrect
Correct answer B

Kartikay22 · Answer

No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment,  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  without physical contact.

-Many individuals is the correct modified entity ( We can eliminate D & E)
- In option A- the use of "to treat" is incorrect. Since the use of "To + base Verb" Form is to show a purpose. The use of "to help" instead of "for help" would have been alright because that shows a purpose.
- Option B looks more logical
- Option C is just too wordy and illogical ( for help from them to treat illnesses that could have been - Its hopeless)

A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed -  Correct

C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed

D. virtual physicians and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed

E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

thenikhilseth · Answer

Answer is  B option

Area tested-  Modifiers

1)  Many Individuals vs Virtual physicians 
Now who wait at the clinic to take the treatment, obviously individuals.
Eliminate D and E

2)  To Treat vs In treat 
To always imply some intention, therefore in treating is correct
Eliminate A

C is straightway wrong-  For help from them

A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed-  BINGO

C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed

D. virtual physicians and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed

E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

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aniket2045 · Answer

Answer is B.
A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed - Changes meaning, as in individuals are helping virtual physicians and psychiatrists.

B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed
- proper comparison, meaning intact.
C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help  from them  to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed - Unnecessary use of them.

D. virtual physicians and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed

E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed- Same as D.

Raxit85 · Answer

No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment, many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed without physical contact.

No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic......, Who?? Must be patients. So, D & E out because of modifier error.

A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed - seems ok, let's hold it.

B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed - seems ok, let's hold it.

C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed - too much wordy and pronoun error.

D. virtual physicians and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed - Incorrect due to modifier error

E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed - - Incorrect due to modifier error

Correct idiom is assist (someone) in doing something. Here help is similar to assist. So, assist in treating illness is correct idiom.

Imo. B

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EMPOWERgmatVerbal · Answer

Official Explanation

No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment,  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  without physical contact.
 
 A.  many individuals  are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help  to treat  illnesses that  can be diagnosed

B.  many individuals  are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help  in treating  illnesses that  can be diagnosed

C.  many individuals  are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them  to treat  illnesses  could have been diagnosed

D.  virtual physicians and psychiatrists  are helping many people who are turning to them for help  in treating  illnesses that  they could have diagnosed

E.  virtual physicians and psychiatrists  help many people who turn to them  to treat  illnesses that  can be diagnosed  
 
After a quick glance over the options, there are a few key differences we can focus on:

1. Starting with “many individuals” vs. “virtual physicians and psychiatrists” (Modifier-Antecedent Agreement)
2. to treat vs. in treating (Idioms)
3. can be diagnosed / could have been diagnosed / they could have diagnosed (Verb Tense) 
 
 Let’s start with #1, which deals with modifiers.  If we look at the original sentence, we see that it begins with a modifier:
 
  No longer wanting to travel to a local clinic for a doctor’s appointment ,  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  without physical contact. 
 
The people this phrase is referring to must come directly after the comma. WHO no longer wants to travel to local clinics? Many individuals! Let’s eliminate any sentences that don’t use “many individuals” as the antecedent:
 
A.  many individuals  are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

B.  many individuals  are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed

C.  many individuals  are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed

D.  virtual physicians and psychiatrists  are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed

E.  virtual physicians and psychiatrists  help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

We can eliminate options D & E because the antecedent (virtual physicians and psychiatrists) doesn’t match up with the modifier. 
 
Now that we have it narrowed down to 3 options, let’s tackle #2 on our list: to treat / in treating. The correct idiom format here is “for help in X-ing.” Let’s rule out any that don’t use the correct idiom format:
 
A. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists  for help to treat  illnesses that can be diagnosed

B. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for  help in treating  illnesses that can be diagnosed

C. many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists  for help from them to treat  illnesses could have been diagnosed
 
 There you have it – option B is the only one that uses proper modifier-antecedent agreement, and it’s the only one that uses the “for help in X-ing” idiom correctly! We don’t even have to deal with #3 on the list because we’ve already narrowed it down to one option.

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EMPOWERgmatVerbal · Answer

First off, well done on the question - kudos to you for getting the answer right! As for the second part, we will look into what happened and respond to you via PM later in the day. No one here is reluctant to fix errors - and to suggest that is pretty harsh. We check these forums every 2 days when the OA is posted. Next time, try sending us a PM instead, since we check those daily. This was probably just an oversight, which is bound to happen when humans are involved.

Trying to work through a pandemic is hard on everyone - even us - and we hope you can understand that.

EMPOWERgmatVerbal · Answer

Well done,  NiftyNiffler ! Welcome to the contest, and kudos to you for cracking the code on the first question! We look forward to seeing you in here for the next question soon!

EMPOWERgmatVerbal · Answer

Well done,  SiddharthR ! You cracked the code on this one! Kudos to you!

EMPOWERgmatVerbal · Answer

Well done,  PoojanB ! Kudos to you for cracking the code on this one!

To answer your other question, "turning to someone" simply means to seek someone out for some reason. You still have to provide the reason WHY you're turning to them. You can turn to someone for help, turn to someone for comfort, turn to someone for support, turn to someone for advice, and many more. It's not redundant to say "for help" here because you still have to provide more detail for that idiom to work.

I hope that helps!

EMPOWERgmatVerbal · Answer

Well done,  1BlackDiamond1 ! You cracked the code on this one - kudos to you! Looking forward to seeing you on the forums more as new questions arrive!

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Well done,  Kartikay22 ! You cracked the code on this one! Kudos to you, and we look forward to seeing you in the next question, which is up today!

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Well done,  thenikhilseth ! You cracked the code on this one! Looking forward to your feedback on future questions!

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Well done,  aniket2045 ! You cracked the code on this one! Kudos to you, and we look forward to more great explanations from you in the rest of the contest!

Raxit85 · Answer

EMPOWERgmatVerbal ,
Thanks for reconsideration of my request.
I've PM you on May 06,2020, 05:55 but it was not answered till date because of (whatever unexpected) circumstances. By considering you might not be able to respond to PMs, i've PM to Rich (as he is frequently visiting the forum) on May 19, 2020 to resolve the issue and that was also not answered. So, overall, i wanted and tried to communicate with private conversation mode only but because of all such experiences led me to post on the common forum. 
Yes, i absolutely agree that human beings are liable to make mistakes and it should be taken lightly if it is not impacting negatively to anyone. In future, i will communicate to you directly for any other concerns by considering that empowergmat team checks pm daily and responds fairly. I usually never expects immediate or within 24-48 hrs response especially in such pandemic situation.

jaisonsunny77 · Answer

A.  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  - the right idiomatic structure is: to help someone (in) something. here, the infinitive form is used. Hence,  eliminate (A)
 
B.  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help in treating illnesses that can be diagnosed  - uses the right idiomatic structure. Hence,   (B) is the correct answer.

C.  many individuals are turning to virtual physicians and psychiatrists for help from them to treat illnesses could have been diagnosed  - could have been diagnosed? help FROM them? there are many errors here.  Eliminate (C)

D. virtual physicians and psychiatrists are helping many people who are turning to them for help in treating illnesses that they could have diagnosed

E. virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed

E.  virtual physicians and psychiatrists help many people who turn to them to treat illnesses that can be diagnosed  - generally speaking, we used 'for' as the preposition to indicate the subject of the infinitive phrase. Here, 'to' is used; this usage is incorrect. Hence,  eliminate (E) .

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