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New post 18 Jun 2017, 10:01
hazelnut wrote:
Is it to eliminate (B) because of the word "annually" is unnecessary?


Here's what (B) says:

    "...environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much annually as is emitted by the..."

"Annually" isn't just unnecessary here -- it's 100% ridiculously redundant. You can sometimes get away with a little bit of wordiness on the GMAT, but there's no grey area on this one.
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(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all=> which is not preceded by comma
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the => redundant
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all => same error as E
(D) that emitted annually by all => correct and no mistakes
(E) that emitted annually compared to the => twice and compared are redundant
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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all
(E) that emitted annually compared to the

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Can someone explain why you would say "twice that" instead of answer C? Is it just become it's more concise? Can we say twice as much? Or is that considered wordy?


D is clear winner here.
However, could an expert please help me to understand the concept of ellipsis here?

(D) Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

here that = the total amount of pollutant
my question is, why not
that = the total amount of pollutant emitted annually

In that case, is the following correct?

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

Just want to clarify what can we include within an ellipsis, and what we cannot.

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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all
(E) that emitted annually compared to the

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Can someone explain why you would say "twice that" instead of answer C? Is it just become it's more concise? Can we say twice as much? Or is that considered wordy?


D is clear winner here.
However, could an expert please help me to understand the concept of ellipsis here?

(D) Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

here that = the total amount of pollutant
my question is, why not
that = the total amount of pollutant emitted annually

In that case, is the following correct?

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

Just want to clarify what can we include within an ellipsis, and what we cannot.

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A pronoun ideally refers to a noun (or a noun phrase) only. It is not recommended to use a pronoun to refer to a noun along with a noun modifier.

Here the pronoun "that" refers to the noun phrase "the total amount of pollutant " - it would be questionable to use the pronoun to refer to the noun phrase "the total amount of pollutant" + noun modifier "emitted annually" together.
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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all
(E) that emitted annually compared to the

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Can someone explain why you would say "twice that" instead of answer C? Is it just become it's more concise? Can we say twice as much? Or is that considered wordy?



it is great that you provide LINK TO SIMILAR QUESTIONS ON OG. keep doing so.
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The answer if you look closely is

the total amount of pollutant emitted annually is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area. Option A doesnt make sense.
In option D we have

the total amount of pollutant emitted annually is twice that emitted annually by all
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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.


(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all - Correct. "that" refers to "the total amount of pollutant" so sentence becomes.

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice "the total amount of pollutant (that)" emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(E) that emitted annually compared to the

Answer: (D).
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