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For "B" I wrote following
"as much annually as is" is awkward
actually it's awkward because "as much +adverb as" looks awkward. Isn't it?
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Here is a link-> a guy from Gmatpill explaining the use of "That" instead of "which"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=foWx9ffAAb4

There u'll see he explains the usage of "which" and "that" in the sentence when inserting option B out of 5 given choices.
According to him
For
'Stores' --> "which"
but for
'one-third of stores' --> "that"
Similarly for 'twice'--> "that"

Hope it helps :)

But I would like if some expert could explain it as I am not expert ( just trying my best to learn it myself )
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D.

A, B and C fail to use 'as much as' correctly with proper comparisons.

E compares that emitted to the vehicles.
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is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by allmotor vehicles in the Chicago Metro area

A. ....
Being emitted is WORDY
B. as much annually as is emitted by the
We need 'all' before 'motor vehicles'
C. as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
'as much' anticipates the use of 'as'
D. that emitted annually by all
THAT emitted by ALL -correct
E. that emitted annually compared to
Illogical comparison
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What is the problem with A?
It has the right idiom, and as far as I can tell it's just a little wordy.
Is that it?
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What is the problem with A?
It has the right idiom, and as far as I can tell it's just a little wordy.
Is that it?

Hello ron34

A is wrong because

1. Parallel:
The syntax is: X is twice Y <= X and Y must be parallel, if X is noun phrase, Y should be noun phrase too. Let see what X is. X = total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles. This is noun phrase. But Y = that which is being emitted....... This is a clause (has both subject and verb). The parallel structure is not maintained.

2. Grammar:
"that which" is considered unidiomatic in GMAT.

Hope it helps.
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What is the problem with A?
It has the right idiom, and as far as I can tell it's just a little wordy.
Is that it?

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be,environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'hare International Airport is twice as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

A.as that which is being emitted annually by all

A is wrong because of parallelism issues. 'pollutant emitted' is not parallel to 'being emitted'. Secondly, usage of 'that which' is incorrect and awkward.
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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be,environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'hare International Airport is twice as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

A.as that which is being emitted annually by all
B.as much annually as is emitted by the
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted y all
D.that emitted annually by all
E.that emitted annually compared to the

The comparison is between amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at airport and amount of pollutant emitted by all motor vehicles in metro area.

A.as that which is being emitted annually by all that and which are redundant
B.as much annually as is emitted by the 'annually' should be after 'emitted'
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted y all compared to what is not the right idiom
D.that emitted annually by all correct choice as it compares 'amount' of both elements
E.that emitted annually compared to the 'compared to the motor vehicle' is wrong comparison
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GMAT adds unnecessary words in sentences to confuse test takers and waste their time.
The sentence in this question can be reduced to a clean, crisp one line by removing all the crap. See for your self.

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be,environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'hare International Airport "X" is twice as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area. "Y"

Now you can easily come to the correct choice D
The total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at X is twice that emitted annually by vehicles in Y.

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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be,environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'hare International Airport is twice as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

A.as that which is being emitted annually by all
B.as much annually as is emitted by the
C.as much compared to what is annually emitted y all
D.that emitted annually by all
E.that emitted annually compared to the
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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all
(E) that emitted annually compared to the

GMATNinja, Could you help to explain this question? It is tricky. Does the correct idiom is "twice as much as"?

Is it to eliminate (B) because of the word "annually" is unnecessary?

The correct version:

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

Quote:
Excerpt from Manhattan Sentence Correction

RIGHT:
He is TWICE AS tall AS Alex [is].
Leaves fall TWICE AS quickly AS they grow.
Naomi wrote TWICE AS MANY letters AS Sara [did].
Naomi wrote ten letters, DOUBLE THE NUMBER THAT Sara wrote.
Naomi's income DOUBLED in three years.
Naomi DOUBLED her income in three years.

WRONG:
He is TWICE AS tall THAN Alex [is].
Leaves fall TWICE AS quickly AS their rate of growth.
Naomi wrote DOUBLE THE LETTERS THAT Sara did.
Naomi's income INCREASED BY TWICE in three years.
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Is it to eliminate (B) because of the word "annually" is unnecessary?

Here's what (B) says:

    "...environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much annually as is emitted by the..."

"Annually" isn't just unnecessary here -- it's 100% ridiculously redundant. You can sometimes get away with a little bit of wordiness on the GMAT, but there's no grey area on this one.
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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all
(E) that emitted annually compared to the

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Can someone explain why you would say "twice that" instead of answer C? Is it just become it's more concise? Can we say twice as much? Or is that considered wordy?

D is clear winner here.
However, could an expert please help me to understand the concept of ellipsis here?

(D) Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

here that = the total amount of pollutant
my question is, why not
that = the total amount of pollutant emitted annually

In that case, is the following correct?

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

Just want to clarify what can we include within an ellipsis, and what we cannot.

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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all
(E) that emitted annually compared to the

Similar Question from OG : [LINK]

Can someone explain why you would say "twice that" instead of answer C? Is it just become it's more concise? Can we say twice as much? Or is that considered wordy?

D is clear winner here.
However, could an expert please help me to understand the concept of ellipsis here?

(D) Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

here that = the total amount of pollutant
my question is, why not
that = the total amount of pollutant emitted annually

In that case, is the following correct?

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice that by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

Just want to clarify what can we include within an ellipsis, and what we cannot.

Regards

A pronoun ideally refers to a noun (or a noun phrase) only. It is not recommended to use a pronoun to refer to a noun along with a noun modifier.

Here the pronoun "that" refers to the noun phrase "the total amount of pollutant " - it would be questionable to use the pronoun to refer to the noun phrase "the total amount of pollutant" + noun modifier "emitted annually" together.
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Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice as much as that which is being emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(A) as much as that which is being emitted annually by all
(B) as much annually as is emitted by the
(C) as much compared to what is annually emitted by all
(D) that emitted annually by all - Correct. "that" refers to "the total amount of pollutant" so sentence becomes.

Providing initial evidence that airports are a larger source of pollution than they were once believed to be, environmentalists in Chicago report that the total amount of pollutant emitted annually by vehicles at O'Hare International Airport is twice "the total amount of pollutant (that)" emitted annually by all motor vehicles in the Chicago metropolitan area.

(E) that emitted annually compared to the

Answer: (D).
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Can as much as be split as in option B?I understand why option D is incorrect but I am still not sure why answer B is incorrect.
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'twice that emitted annually by all '

is this an idiomatic phrase? Could someone help to provide other examples of how this phrase is usually used. Thank you!
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Can as much as be split as in option B?I understand why option D is incorrect but I am still not sure why answer B is incorrect.
Explained in detail here: https://gmatclub.com/forum/providing-in ... l#p1872094

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'twice that emitted annually by all '

is this an idiomatic phrase? Could someone help to provide other examples of how this phrase is usually used. Thank you!
The key is to think about what the word "that" is doing in that phrase. Check out this article or this video, and see if that helps at all.
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