Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click HereScientists have observed large cracks that go on for miles in
gigantic Antarctica icebergs, which are consistent with the predictions of global warming.Quote:
A) gigantic Antarctica icebergs, which are consistent with the predictions of global warming.
•
which must refer to a noun but the logical antecedent word
observations [of large cracks] is never actually articulated
→
which probably refers to
icebergs, could refer to
large cracks, but in any case, lacks an antecedent.
Icebergs are not consistent with predictions of global warming; what the scientists observe about large cracks in the icebergs is consistent with global warming
• "Antarctica icebergs" is inferior to "icebergs in Antarctica" and is sort of "squashed" or "collapsed."
This usage is similar to the construction that I discussed in
this OE, here.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) gigantic icebergs in Antarctica, findings consistent with the predictions of global warming.
• I see no errors
•
findings consistent with the predictions of global warming is a modifier of the idea presented in the previous clause
•
findings correctly refers back to the observations of the scientists; we are allowed to rename the idea contained in the previous clause.
→ this kind of modifier is called a summative modifier and is a special kind of appositive
We use a word that summarizes the idea from the previous clause (hence "summative") and give more detail about that clause.
•the icebergs are best described as
gigantic icebergs in Antarctica, not
gigantic Antarctica icebergs.
•
findings consistent actually means
findings that are consistent → findings consistent is called a "reduced relative clause"
→ we "reduce" the relative clause
findings that are consistent by
(1) removing the relative pronoun (that), and
(2) removing the TO BE verb
You absolutely do not need to know the grammar terms that I am using here.
But you do need to understand what a reduced relative clause is, because you will see them frequently on the GMAT.
→ I have explained them quite a few times; one such post is
here, especially in the footnote, which links you to a short and effective article about reduced relative clauses.
KEEP
Quote:
C) gigantic icebergs in Antarctica, consistent with the predictions of global warming.
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consistent with the predictions of global warming is problematic:
→ to what, exactly, does this phrase refer?
→ similar to the problems with
which in option A, this modifier needs a noun (such as
findings), but no such noun exists in the first clause
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) gigantic Antarctica icebergs, where the predictions of global warming agree with these findings.
• icebergs are not the logical
where, and whatever is agreeing with what does not happen on the iceberg, but rather in the scientists' observations
• meaning issue: saying that
predictions agree with findings is slightly off, meaning-wise.
→ If anything, we would say that
the findings agree with the predictions.
→ We could say that predictions
anticipated the findings, but to say that the predictions
agree with the findings is out of sequence and syntactically odd.
• (D) is not as good as (B)
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) gigantic Antarctica icebergs, findings consistent with the global warming predictions.
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•
icebergs in Antarctica is better than this option's
Antarctica icebergs• the word
the is incorrect.
→
the indicates
particular global warming predictions, but we have not heard anything about
particular predictions.
If we have not heard of these particular predictions, why are we referring to them?
→ that is, we use "the" to introduce a noun about which we have already heard
ELIMINATE E
AntrikshR , welcome to SC Butler.
I think that this question is really hard if you rely on grammar alone.
Actually, I think that this question is just hard.
Answers here range from good to excellent. Kudos to all. Well done.