pk6969
Hello
mikemcgarry , love your explanations.
In this question, though I was able to find the correct answer , I was not sure whether A choice was a run on sentence. I thought that phrase was an absolute phrase. I know Gmat loves to test on Absolute phrases. So i want to ask how can we differentiate one is an absolute phrase and not an independt clause creating a run on sentence.
GMATNinja DmitryFarber AndrewNHello,
pk6969. I looked at the original sentence a little differently from the way Mike outlined in his post, but it really comes down to two ways to view the same error. I saw two independent clauses joined by nothing more than a comma—i.e. without a conjunction. In grammar lingo, such a sentence creates what is known as a
comma splice. Another example would be
John enjoys investing, he puts $2K into his portfolio each month. It is not a stretch to see that adding a conjunction after the comma—e.g.,
so or
and, maybe even
for—would produce an error-free compound sentence. How about we get back to the sentence at hand, keeping an eye on the
subject and
verb of each clause?
Quote:
Taste buds are onion-shaped structures with between 50 and 100 taste cells,
each of them
has fingerlike projections poking through the opening located at the top of the taste bud called the taste pore.
Believe it or not, for all the extra information we get on both sides of the comma, we have two quite simple independent clauses:
Taste buds are [something] and
each has [something]. We cannot join these two independent clauses by using a comma without a conjunction. (We could use a semicolon, but that is another grammatical discussion that has no bearing on the question.)
An absolute phrase
cannot, as the name implies, be an independent clause. Rather, an absolute phrase may masquerade as a clause (to the untrained eye) by turning a verb into a
participle:
The sleeping bags rolled up on top of their backpacks, the hikers set out at dawn for the next shelter. It is not as if the sentence is saying that sleeping bags were rolling themselves up, but that may not be apparent until we jump across the comma and read the
main clause, the one with a subject and a finite verb.
Now, looking at the original sentence again, an absolute modifier would be easy to create from the latter part of the sentence: just change the verb
has to the participle
having:
each of them having fingerlike projections...For further reference on absolute phrases, you may want to check out
this article on Your Dictionary. (I enjoyed it at least.)
Thank you for thinking to ask. I hope my response proves useful to you.
- Andrew