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Dear
VeritasPrepBrian AnthonyRitz IanStewart GMATGuruNY,
Why is choice E. wrong?
According to Veritas SC book Q30's solution:
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From here, it becomes a Tense issue. Shortly after the underline the sentence makes clear that this is an ongoing situation ("prices are plummeting ... businesses are reluctant"). So logically you want a verb that expresses that timeline that this even begin and has yet to finish.
However, choice E. which is present simple tense also fits this explanation as well.
How to eliminate choice E. then?
Typos in explanation: It should say that "logically you want a verb that expresses that timeline that this
event began and has yet to finish." (The correction is important, because the corrected explanation makes clear that our action does not exist strictly in the present.)
In particular, this verb needs to express something that began in the past, rather than just occurring at this moment. Logically, it's not like the banks become less willing to lend (all exactly at the same present moment) and, at the same present moment, all of those described effects happen.
Furthermore, there is strong implication that this is a process, rather than a momentary occurrence.
Finally, the use of the present "creates" in this context actually, believe it or not, doesn't really seem to convey that this "creating" is actually happening right now. That's because (and I'm getting way too technical here, but you seem to want to dig into every technicality, so here we are) it appears in this usage to be the
gnomic aspect -- expressing a general truth rather than a specific occurrence. Example: "I swim in that pool." It's a general truth, but certainly not something I'm purporting to be doing at the moment of making that statement.
And that might be a plausible reading of the phrase "the decrease creates" -- that it's just trying to express a general truth -- except that our sentence then switches to present continuous ("are plummeting," "are avoiding"), and that tense is not generally used in a gnomic sense in English. So this verb form is incorrect for this reason as well.