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The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

(A) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.
(B) The first shoe factory had opened in 1760, but until the industrial revolution of the 19th century, inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers.
(C) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, however inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century
(D) The first shoe factory, though it opened in 1760, inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.
(E) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

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Correct Answer: E

The original sentence contains multiple redundancy errors, using the redundant phrases 'not at all available' ('at all' is unnecessary, as 'not available' succinctly states that there was no availability) and 'up until' ('until', on its own, serves the same purpose). Answer choices B and C replicate the 'not at all' error, and answer choice D replicates the 'up until' error; all are, accordingly, incorrect. Furthermore, answer choice D fails to use proper Sentence Construction, as there is no transition present between the verb phrases 'shoe factory' and 'inexpensive shoes'. Answer choice E, which uses proper sentence structure and avoids the redundant phrases mentioned above, is correct.
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If I remember correctly, the word "however" does not function in the same way as "and", or "but".
Another reason (C) is wrong.

(E) is concise and without error.
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Hi, Don't we need a helping verb between "The shoe factory" and "opened". Something like the shoe factory WAS opened??
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shanitin14 Your version would certainly work. Since a factory doesn't open itself, the passive construction "was opened" makes sense. However, it's fairly common to use the active voice in cases like this. We say things like "The movie opened on Memorial Day" or "The store closed before I got there." The meaning is still clear here, so the GMAT shouldn't have a problem with it. If we have parallel verbs, we might want to make sure that both are active or both are passive (unless there's a clear reason for the shift), but either version can work.
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Thank you so much DmitryFarber
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Hey GMATNinja EMPOWERgmatVerbal souvik101990 ,

Can anyone of you guys do the analysis of <<not at all available vs not available>> please. I think not at all available giving the right meaning but that's not correct. can you guys help.?
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Hey GMATNinja EMPOWERgmatVerbal souvik101990 ,

Can anyone of you guys do the analysis of <<not at all available vs not available>> please. I think not at all available giving the right meaning but that's not correct. can you guys help.?

Thanks for your question EtaCarnia!

The phrases "not available" and "not at all available" mean the same thing. On the GMAT, you should choose whichever option is the shortest, or most concise. In this case, "not available" is the correct choice because it says the same thing in 2 words that the other phrase says in 4.

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The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.


A) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

B) The first shoe factory had opened in 1760, but until the industrial revolution of the 19th century, inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers.

C) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, however inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century

D) The first shoe factory, though it opened in 1760, inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.(Ambiguous)

E) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.(Correct)

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