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To decorate the tables at the event, the caterers used an array of decoratively carved fruits, like kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolates in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers.(A) To decorate the tables at the event, the caterers used an array of decoratively carved fruits, like kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolates in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers.
(B) Decorating the tables at the event, an array of decoratively carved fruits, including kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large number of chocolates in shapes like stars, hearts, and flowers, used by the caterers.
(C) Used by the caterers to decorate the tables at the event was an array of decoratively carved fruits, such as kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolate in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers.
(D) To decorate the tables at the event, an array of decoratively carved fruit, including kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large number of chocolates in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers, were used by the caterers.
(E) By using an array of decoratively carved fruits, like kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolate in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers, the tables at the event were decorated by the caterers.
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To decorate the tables at the event, the caterers used an array of decoratively carved fruits, like kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolates in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers.
(A) To decorate the tables at the event, the caterers used an array of decoratively carved fruits, like kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolates in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers.
This version incorrectly uses “like” in introducing a list of examples of fruits.
Also, this version incorrectly uses “amount” with the countable “chocolates.”
(B) Decorating the tables at the event, an array of decoratively carved fruits, including kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large number of chocolates in shapes like stars, hearts, and flowers, used by the caterers.
This version incorrectly uses “like” in introducing a list of examples of shapes.
Also, this version includes no main verb, only nouns and modifiers, and, therefore, is not a complete sentence.
(C) Used by the caterers to decorate the tables at the event was an array of decoratively carved fruits, such as kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolate in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers.
This version may “sound funny” because it is an inverted sentence in which the subject, “an array,” follows the main verb, “was.” All the same, this version is correct, correctly using “such as” in introducing lists of examples of fruits and shapes and correctly using “amount” with the uncountable “chocolate.”
Notice that, since “along with a large amount of chocolate …” is an additive phrase, the subject of the sentence can be correctly presumed to be the singular “array,” which agrees with the singular “was.”
Correct Answer
(D) To decorate the tables at the event, an array of decoratively carved fruit, including kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large number of chocolates in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers, were used by the caterers.
This version suggests the illogical idea that an array of fruits had the intention of decorating the tables at the event and, therefore, was used by the caterers.
Also, the subject of the sentence is the singular “an array of decoratively carved fruit, which does not agree with the plural “were.” “Along with a large number of chocolates … is an additive phrase, and, therefore, its presence does not render the singular subject plural.
(E) By using an array of decoratively carved fruits, like kiwis, grapefruit, and melons, along with a large amount of chocolate in shapes such as stars, hearts, and flowers, the tables at the event were decorated by the caterers.
Since the opening modifier, “by using an array …” must modify the subject of the clause that follows, which is “the tables,” this version expresses the nonsensical meaning that the tables at the event used an array of fruit and a large amount of chocolate in order to be decorated by the caterers.
Also, this version incorrectly uses “like” in introducing a list of examples of fruits.
Correct answer: C