omsoni134
Hyy I got my answer correct
I rejected A,B,E for using present continous , and D for using gradual notion ,
Am I correct ?
egmat GMATNinja anyone can answer
Hey
omsoni134Happy to help you with this.
This question is a simple test of
parallelism. When we wish to equate two actions, we have two ways to do it:
1. To verb (a.k.a. Infinitive) = To verb
For example: To work hard is to succeed.
This sentence means that the action of working hard is the same as the action of succeeding.
2. Verb-ing Noun (a.k.a. Gerund) = Verb-ing Noun
For example: Seeing is believing.
This sentence means that the action of seeing is the same as the action of believing.
Now, in this official question, only choices C and E conform to the two parallel structures discussed above. So, it's an easy elimination of choices A, B, and D. Moving forward, choice E has the distortion of meaning (already identified by you correctly): the gradual notion. It is the instilling that's gradual and not the notion. And that leaves us with choice C.
Now, yes, choice C is a little awkward. The reason is the placement of the adverb "gradually". In modern English, we split the infinitive and place the adverb in between the preposition 'to' and the base verb 'instill': to gradually instill. But please note, this question is a pre-2000 question (very old). Back then, the "Split Infinitive" was considered incorrect on the GMAT. However,
as of today, the Split Infinitive is not tested on the GMAT.
Here's what the Official Guide 2022 has to say about Split Infinitive, and I quote:
"
Some issues that are not tested:
You may hear that some usage advisors object to placing anything between to and an infinitive verb, as in to finally reach the destination. You should not expect to see Sentence Correction questions for which the deciding factor is merely whether the writer follows this advice. However, you might encounter a sentence that is awkward and unclear because too many words—or words that would go better elsewhere—are crammed in between the preposition and the verb. This occurs in the following sentence:
I try to remember to scrupulously every day before I leave work log off my computer.
This sentence has an issue of general unclarity and inelegance falling under the heading of rhetorical construction, and not a mere case of a split infinitive."
So, to conclude, this was a test of simple parallelism. Also,
the Split Infinitive is no longer tested on the GMAT nor is it strictly considered incorrect. You'll not be required to take any decisions in SC on the basis of this rule.
I hope this helps improve your understanding.
Happy Learning!
Abhishek