OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Quote:
Despite widespread research on the benefits of consuming genetically modified food, public opinion remains divided
among those who believe in the benefits of these foods and those who think that these foods are bad for the health.A)
among those who believe in the benefits of these foods and those who think that these foods are bad for the health.
B)
among those who believe in the benefits of these foods and
the ones who think that these foods are bad for the health.
C)
among the
ones who believe in the benefits of these foods and those who think that these foods are bad for the health.
D) between those
who believe in the benefits of these foods and those
thinking that these foods are bad for the health.
E) between those who believe in the benefits of these foods and those who think that these foods are bad for the health.
• Split #1: among vs. betweenWhen two elements are involved, use
between to talk about them.
When more than two elements are involved, use
among to talk about them.
We have two groups of people: those in favor of GMOs and those against GMOs. [Did you catch what I just did with "those"? Stay tuned.]
Options A, B, and C use among rather than between.
ELIMINATE A, B, and C
• Split #2: parallelismThe word
and is a parallelism marker.
In Between X and Y,
the X and Y elements must be parallel—must be the same parts of speech that play the same grammatical role in a sentence.
In option D,
X = [those] who believe
Y = [those] believing
The modifiers are not parallel.
→
who believe is a relative clause
→
believing is a participle (a verbING)
Eliminate option D.
By POE, the answer is E.Option E correctly uses
between to compare two groups of people and correctly uses
those.ThoseMost of the time with the word
those, it is
(1) a determiner—something that points to a noun, such as "
those special cookies I like"
or
(2) a pronoun with an antecedent—
Cars in Europe are generally smaller than those in the U.S. (those = cars)
Those can be used in a third way.
In formal prose,
those can be used without an antecedent to mean "a group of people who possess or exhibit some quality."
→ Correct:
Those who wish to leave the airplane at the stopover may do so.
People do not mention this detail very often, but I have seen at least two fairly recent OG questions in which "those" functions in this special way.
This usage is not common on the GMAT, but I don't want you to get frustrated if you see a standalone
those used in the manner described.
The onesOptions B and C try to couple
the ones with
those.Foul.
The ones needs an antecedent and cannot stand alone to mean "certain people" as
those can do.
COMMENTSAnisha1637 , welcome to SC Butler.
Okay, everyone, your answers are good, but I do not see any mention of "the ones."
Please be sure that you understand what I mean when I say, above, that "the ones" cannot be used to refer to an as-yet-unmentioned group of people.
Kudos to all.