Hello,
imSKR. To help myself with the organizational aspect in responding to your post, I will reply in-line below.
imSKR
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Unlike frogs that metamorphose from tadpoles into adults within a one-year period, it takes three to four years for the mountain yellow-legged frog of the Sierra Nevada to reach adulthood, and so they are restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.
(A) it takes three to four years for the mountain yellow-legged frog of the Sierra Nevada to reach adulthood, and so they are
(B) it takes the mountain yellow-legged frog of the Sierra Nevada three to four years until it reaches adulthood, and therefore it is
(C) in the Sierra Nevada, mountain yellow-legged tree frogs take three to four years to reach adulthood, thus being
(D) mountain yellow-legged frogs of the Sierra Nevada take three to four years until they reach adulthood, thus
(E) mountain yellow-legged frogs of the Sierra Nevada take three to four years to reach adulthood, and so they are
Quote:
D. xxx adulthood, thus restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.
For a moment , assume thus is not there and the sentence is :
i. xxx adulthood, restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.
Here restricted xx modifies adulthood, right?
This must be -ed modifier week or something: yours is the fourth inquiry I have responded to on the matter in about as many days. To be clear, you cannot simply look to the last noun before a comma to attribute a past participle, despite what many others may propose on this forum. It is true that in most cases, the past participle will behave in this manner, but there are logical exceptions, and they typically incorporate prepositional phrases (with an object of a preposition). Please see
this post, in which I discuss the matter with a given sentence. In this case, focusing just on the modifier (since
until is the wrong idiom in (D)), I would argue that
restricted most logically refers back to the frog and NOT to adulthood. How can adulthood be restricted to deeper bodies of water? That makes no sense. We would thus need to backtrack a little further in the sentence to find a logical noun that could be restricted in such a manner.
imSKR
What if there is no comma and the sentence is :
ii. Xx adulthood restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.
Then also restricted modifies adulthood ,
Q1a. What is the value of comma in such a case? Q1b. Can I say the difference in i and ii is :- Doer is mountain yellow-legged frogs in I; no need doer in ii.
Is my understanding right?Sentence ii. would be an obvious candidate for elimination. There is less wiggle room when the participle is not preceded by a comma, and again, it does not make sense to say that adulthood is restricted to deeper bodies of water. In short, the comma can make a difference.
imSKR
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(E) mountain yellow-legged frogs of the Sierra Nevada take three to four years to reach adulthood, and so they are restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.
so they are restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.
How to read this sentence ?
i. So, they are restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.ii. They are so restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.- wrong
Correct version should have been:
They are so restricted to deeper bodies of water that THEY do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.
Q2: So i is right meaning ? Why no comma is present in E. Is it optional? Please confirm
AndrewN AjiteshArun Q1a,Q1b,Q2
Thanks!
You probably know that
so is used as a conjunction to mark a conclusion. We can thus read the line in question as one that illustrates a cause-and-effect relationship, a premise followed by its logical endpoint. If you view this portion of the sentence in isolation through a slightly different lens, I think you will see how
so fits in.
Because mountain yellow-legged frogs of the Sierra Nevada take three to four years to reach adulthood, and so they are restricted to deeper bodies of water that do not dry up in summer or freeze solid in winter.The dependent
that clause modifies the bodies of water, not the frogs. That is, it is the bodies of water that are understood to neither dry up nor freeze. One final note here is that two conjunctions are competing for space when one alone would do. The sentence requires
so, but not
and in
and so. The superfluous word is more or less disregarded in everyday English, quite similar to the same word in the expression
and yet when the contrasting
yet could stand on its own two legs.
I hope that helps with your questions on this one. Thank you for thinking to ask me.
- Andrew