Hi!
In respect to "e":
REDUNDANCY:
"neural representations - representations known"
>>> Unless redundancy is just "nice not to have", but "ok to have", I see no reason for the repetition. Anyway, not wrong but against concision.
PARALLELISM:
"human memory contains..."
(i) neural representations of the physics of the musculoskeletal system and
(ii) objects in the environment
>>> Does the memory contain "objects in the environment"? Probably not.
OR
"human memory contains neural representations..."
(i) OF the physics of the musculoskeletal system and
(ii) OF (the) objects in the environment
>>> In this case, "THE physics" should match "THE objects"; and there must be an "of" before "objects".
OR
"human memory contains neural representations of the physics..."
OF the musculoskeletal system and
OF (the) objects in the environment
>>> In this case, "THE musculoskeletal system" should match "THE objects"; and there must be an "of" before "objects".
I appreciate your comments.
Thanks,