Preparation to the Second World War witnessed a massive increase in the funding of science for military use, such as the Manhattan Atomic Bomb project, advanced radar technology and new initiatives in rocket propulsion, for war-prone countries considered advances in technology critical
to their success in the event of a war.
(A)
such as the Manhattan Atomic Bomb project, advanced radar technology and new initiatives in rocket propulsion,
for war-prone countries
considered advances in technology critical.
Correct(B)
for the Manhattan Atomic Bomb project, advanced radar technology
and for new initiatives in rocket propulsion,
for war-prone countries considered advances in technology critical
The whole sentence is awkward(C)
like the Manhattan Atomic Bomb project, advanced radar technology and new initiatives in rocket propulsion, for war-prone countries considered advances in technology
to be critical "like"here is a typical mistake,"to be critical" wordy (D) such as the Manhattan Atomic Bomb project, advanced radar technology and new initiatives in rocket propulsion, for war-prone countries considered advances in technology
as critical
"as" should not appear in here.(E)
; such as the Manhattan Atomic Bomb project, advanced radar technology and new initiatives in rocket propulsion, for war-prone countries considered advances in technology
are critical
the semicolon ruin the structure of the sentence, also wrong with "are"