OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
In an uncertain economy, the manufacturing sector, which includes everything
from automobiles, energy equipment, and medical devices, seems to be making a comeback.
• To describe a range of things, the correct idiom is
From X to Y.• the linking (copular) verb
seem, which means to appear (in a particular way) can be followed by an infinitive phrase, an adjective, or a noun.
Seem can be followed by a that-clause only if the verb is preceded by the word
it. See Option C.
THE OPTIONS Quote:
A)In an uncertain economy, the manufacturing sector, which includes everything
from [automobiles, energy equipment, and medical devices, seems to be making a comeback.
• the word TO is missing from the idiomatic description of "everything from automobiles, energy equipment, and medical devices."
→ correct: the manufacturing sector includes everything from _____ TO _____
• the list that follows
from is nonsensically incomplete; it's missing its "to" elements
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) In an uncertain economy, the manufacturing sector, which includes everything
from automobiles and energy equipment to medical devices, seems to be making a comeback.
• the idiom is correct: From [A and B] to [C]
• the verb
seems is followed by the allowable infinitive phrase
to be making a comebackKEEP
Quote:
C) In an uncertain economy, the manufacturing sector, which includes everything
from automobiles, energy equipment, and medical devices, seems that it is making a comeback.
• if the verb
seems is followed by a that-clause, the word
it must come first, the subject is "postponed," and we have a construction called
extraposition. →
It + seems + THAT + clause (subject + verb)Wrong:
The manufacturing sector seems that it is making a comeback.Correct:
It seems that the manufacturing sector is making a comeback.→ Sometimes this "it" is called a
placeholder or a
dummy pronoun, and the that-clause is called a
delayed antecedent.
(Do not worry about this jargon. I'm just listing a few terms you might have seen.)
• as in option A, the idiom
From X to Y is missing the "to Y" part.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) In an uncertain economy, the manufacturing sector, which includes everything
from automobiles and energy equipment to medical devices, seems that it is making a comeback.
• as in option C, the phrase
seems that it is makes no sense without an extraposed sentence
Wrong:
The manufacturing sector seems that it is making a comeback.Correct (extraposed):
It seems that the manufacturing sector is making a comeback. ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) In an uncertain economy, the manufacturing sector, which includes everything
from automobiles, energy equipment, in addition to medical devices, seems to be making a comeback.
•
From X to Y is not used correctly. The expression should start with
from and end with
to, without any words such as
and or
in additionELIMINATE E
The correct answer is B.NotesTakeaways:
(1) most of the time,
seem will
not be followed by that but rather by an infinitive phrase, an adjective, or a noun
(2) to use
seems that, be sure to use the construction
It seems that + clauseCorrect:
He seems to be hyped up on steroids.Correct:
It seems that he is hyped up on steroids.Most of you were not comfortable with
seems that—you have excellent instincts.
(Non-native speakers who are reading regularly will not have seen that turn of phrase.)
No obvious reason exists to explain why
seems that in
this kind of sentence is not correct usage.
Now you know what is incorrect about
seems that it is. If you see "seems that," look to see whether the word "it" precedes "seems that."
If you do not see "it seems that," the option is incorrect.
If you do see "it seems that," check the option for other grammar errors.
COMMENTStanu11 , welcome to SC Butler.
I am glad to see people whom I haven't seen in a while.
I am glad to see people participating, full stop.
Most of these explanations are excellent. Nicely done.