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Working to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(A) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(B) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonize over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(C) Despite their work to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(D) Unfortunately to agonize over making minimum payments and to witness their monthly fees rise astronomically, many people who are working to support their families and pay off their homes become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies.
(E) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonizing over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically.
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(A) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(B) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonize over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(C) Despite their work to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(D) Unfortunately to agonize over making minimum payments and to witness their monthly fees rise astronomically, many people who are working to support their families and pay off their homes become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies.
(E) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonizing over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically.
The best/excellent answers get kudos, which will be awarded after the answer is revealed.
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28 Jan 2019, 14:52
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(A) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically. -- wrong: "working to support their families and pay off their homes" should be modifying "many people"
(B) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonize over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically. -- wrong; lack of parallelism between agonize and witnessing. Also fails to associate agonizing their making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise as examples of people's struggle with their credit card companies.
(C) Despite their work to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically. -- wrong: "despite their work to support their families and pay off their homes" should be modifying "many people"
(D) Unfortunately to agonize over making minimum payments and to witness their monthly fees rise astronomically, many people who are working to support their families and pay off their homes become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies. -- wrong: the placement of unfortunately in the front changes the meaning of the sentence.
(E) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonizing over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically. -- correct: "Working to support their families and pay off their homes" properly modifies "many people", correct parallelism between "agonizing" and "witnessing", and "agonizing..." and "witnessing..." is properly associated as examples of what people embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies are experiencing.
(B) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonize over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically. -- wrong; lack of parallelism between agonize and witnessing. Also fails to associate agonizing their making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise as examples of people's struggle with their credit card companies.
(C) Despite their work to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically. -- wrong: "despite their work to support their families and pay off their homes" should be modifying "many people"
(D) Unfortunately to agonize over making minimum payments and to witness their monthly fees rise astronomically, many people who are working to support their families and pay off their homes become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies. -- wrong: the placement of unfortunately in the front changes the meaning of the sentence.
(E) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonizing over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically. -- correct: "Working to support their families and pay off their homes" properly modifies "many people", correct parallelism between "agonizing" and "witnessing", and "agonizing..." and "witnessing..." is properly associated as examples of what people embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies are experiencing.
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Working to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
Meaning analysis: first and foremost
Due to original sentence structure mess it is little difficult, but we can infer below:
Many people are working to support their families and pay off their homes. Then they tangled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, because theay are taking credits again to support their families. As a result 1. they agonize over making minimum payments 2. witness their monthly fees rise astronomically
Error analysis:
we have opening modifier "working to" whoever is working must be followed after the comma. we have "it is" seems placeholder, but it is wrong, we need "many people" after the comma. "in which" implies that people agonize and witness in this credit companies.
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(A) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(we can eliminate this answer just because of opening modifier)
(B) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonize over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically.
(this answer corrects all mistakes from the original sentence, but introduces new //sim error)
(C) Despite their work to support their families and pay off their homes, it is unfortunate that many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, in which they agonize over making minimum payments and witness their monthly fees rise astronomically.
("despite" introduces contrast, but we don't have any contrast, "their" after the comma must be followed by "many people", "in which" is wrong)
(D) Unfortunately to agonize over making minimum payments and to witness their monthly fees rise astronomically, many people who are working to support their families and pay off their homes become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies.
(Unfortunately - changes intended meaning of the sentence)
(E) Working to support their families and pay off their homes, many people become embroiled in a constant struggle with their credit card companies, agonizing over making minimum payments and witnessing their monthly fees rise astronomically.
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