SohGMAT2020
AbhiroopGhosh
Bunuel
Before realist forms became prominent during the Archaic period, the proportions of sculpture were based on theory rather than observation.
(A) Before realist forms became prominent during the Archaic period, the proportions of sculpture were based on theory rather than observation.
(B) Before realist forms became prominent during the Archaic period, the proportions of sculpture had been based on theory rather than observation.
(C) Before realist forms had become prominent during the Archaic period, the proportions of sculpture were based on theory rather than observation.
(D) Before realist forms had become prominent during the Archaic period, the proportions of sculpture had been based on theory rather than observation.
(E) Before realist forms became prominent during the Archaic period, the proportions of sculpture were being based on theory rather than observation.
AndrewNRequest you help in understanding the correct answer choice.
I remember reading that when the order of events are explicit we don't need to use a complex tense such as past participle and the use of past tense is accepted.
For Example:
She graduated from Mountain Ridge, which was established during World War II.I think (please correct me if I am wrong) the below usage is incorrect -
She graduated from Mountain Ridge, which had been established during World War II.Reason: Because she graduated from a school, the school should have been established prior to her graduation. Hence the sequence is explicit and the usage of past perfect tense is not required.
Can you let me know if my understanding is correct. I always thought that GMAT prefers using a complex tense only when absolute necessary.
Request you to let me know why is the usage of the simple past is incorrect as 'Before' explicitly specifies the order of events.
AndrewN @dreamscore
I also have the same doubt here.
In this question the sequence is perfectly clear because "before" is used.
I thought using past perfect is redundant, because using simple past can clearly establish the timeline.
Thank you
Hello,
SohGMAT2020 and
AbhiroopGhosh.
Before is a tricky time marker on the GMAT™. In
this OG question on insurance companies, the simple past is used, but there is no other simple past verb in the sentence; in
this GMAT Advanced question on female writers of France, however, we see the same cue word paired with the past perfect
had been, but note that in the latter sentence, the simple past also appears in the form of
were. I will admit that I did not touch the question on the grounds that I thought either answer choice (A) or (B) could be defended without a further split to separate the two. I could write a sentence similar in structure to the original and make a strong case for the simple past:
Decades before Justin Bieber rose to fame, Michael Jackson was known as the King of Pop.I would argue that altering either
rose (to
would rise) or
was (to
had been) would create a much different sentence, in terms of meaning.
Likewise, in the two sentences about Mountain Ridge, the former seems to convey that the school still stands and remains in use, the latter that the school (perhaps the building) existed at some point during World War II, but was torn down at some later, unspecified time. Either version could work, depending on what the author wanted to say.
In the end, we have to accept that the question-writer(s) in this case wanted to touch on a point about the past perfect. It is hard to create questions, and, as the GMAT Advanced question above illustrates, there is an official precedent for such usage—pairing
before with the past perfect—on the GMAT™.
I may not have provided the definitive answer you were seeking, but if my response proves helpful in some way, so much the better. Thank you both for thinking to ask me about it. As always, good luck with your studies.
- Andrew