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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising (B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising (C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised (D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised (E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
First glance The choices begin with either a comma –ing (needing), the parallel marker and, or the preposition with. Examine the sentence for sentence structure, modifier, and parallelism issues.
Issues (1) Parallelism: X and Y
Modifier / Meaning: with
The first part of the sentence is a complete sentence, so the text after bear, will need to be either a modifier referring back to that earlier text or some parallel sentence structure that matches the earlier text.
Companies were free to charge whatever the market would bear,
(A) needing no approval from regulators… (B) and it needed no approval by regulators… (C) and needing no approval from regulators… (D) with approval not needed by regulators… (E) with no approval needed from regulators…
Answer (A) contains a comma –ing modifier, referring back to the full idea that companies could charge whatever they wanted; this modifier structure is appropriate for the information conveyed in the sentence.
Answers (B) and (C) introduce a parallel structure (X and Y). Answer (B) pairs two complete clauses, so that structure is okay, but the Y element in answer (C) begins with the word needing. The earlier part of the sentence does not have another word that can be parallel to needing. Eliminate choice (C) for faulty parallelism.
Answers (D) and (E) introduce prepositional modifiers using the word with. This structure is a tricky one. It is typically used in this way: She sprawled across the couch, with arms and legs dangling over the sides. The action after the comma happens in conjunction with or at the same time as the first action. It’s hard to tell in the insurance sentence whether the meaning of the sentence fits this structure (it doesn’t), so if you’re not sure, look for something else. In this case, look just a little further in each choice. Choice (D) could be read to mean that approval is not needed by regulators (i.e., the regulators don’t need to seek approval), but the companies should be the ones seeking approval, not the regulators. Choice (E) employs the passive construction no approval needed; this wording does not indicate who does not need to seek approval. Eliminate choices (D) and (E) for ambiguous meaning.
(2) Pronoun: it; they
When examining the parallel issue in answer (B), you might have spotted the pronoun it. To what noun does it refer?
Logically, this part of the sentence should refer to insurance companies, but companies[i] is plural and [i]it is singular. The possible singular nouns (market, California) don’t make sense. Eliminate choice (B) for faulty pronoun agreement.
Answers (C) and (D) both introduce the plural pronoun they. Plural is better than the singular it, but both choices still have an issue: In each case, it isn’t clear whether the pronoun they refers to regulators or to insurance companies. Eliminate choices (C) and (D) for pronoun ambiguity.
The Correct Answer
Correct answer (A) properly uses a comma –ing modifier to refer back to the main sentence. It avoids the pronoun errors found in several other choices by avoiding the use of pronouns entirely.
Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising (B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising (C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised (D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised (E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
(A) Correctneeding no approval from regulators before raising (B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising It is wrong. Here we are talking about companies so plural pronoun is needed (C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised Parallelism issue (D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised with...... is an adverbial and is worng (E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of same as D
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The following is how I chose answer choice (A)
Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising => This option contains a participial phrase modifying the preceding clause. No error is spotted. Logical meaning. CORRECT!
(B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising => Wrong. There is no singular subject that can be antecedent of this pronoun. In this case, agent of the action "needed no approval..." should be "insurance companies" which is a plural noun.
(C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised => Wrong. "and" requires parallelism, but "leading" is not parallel with "were"
(D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised => Wrong. First, "with" makes the sentence more wordy. Second, why do we have to use a passive voice "approval not needed by..." while active voice in option (A) is available? Finally, pronoun "they" is ambiguous.
(E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of => Wrong. Usage of "with" and passive voice make this option less attractive. Also, "the raising of" is a noun in V-ing form, which is less preferred to the verb "raising" in option (A).
Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising- CORRECT- concisely put. (B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising- INCORRECT- it incorrectly refers to plural insurance companies. (C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised- INCORRECT- with the introduction of and, needing no approval is not parallel to free to charge (D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised- INCORRECT- they is ambiguous and usage of passive voice when the first part is in active voice, should be avoided. (E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
-INCORRECT- when we have the correct form of verb "raising" available, construction of the gerund- "the raising of" should be avoided.
Correct option is A
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AbdurRakib wrote:
Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
A. needing no approval from regulators before raising CORRECT
B. and it needed no approval by regulators before raising "it" here is wrong since "insurance companies" is prural.
C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised "and needing" isn't parallel to "were"
D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised "they" here is ambiguous since it could refer "insurance companies" or "regulators"
E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of "the raising of" is wordy. "raising" is better _________________
Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, and needing no approval from regulators before they raised rates.
and is an indicator of parallelism. We should always first look at the structure of the sentence to the RHS of indicator of parallelism. In option C, we have a participial phrase (needing no approval..) on the RHS.
For the sentence to be parallel, there must be a corresponding matching structure (in this case a participial phrase/adjective) on the LHS of indicator of parallelism. In option C, there is none. Hence, C is not parallel.
p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses this parallelism approach, its application and examples in significant detail. If someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
A. needing no approval from regulators before raising Correct B. andit needed no approval by regulators before raising - Use of AND is incorrect since such use means that "Approval from regulator for increase in rate" and "insurance companies can charge any rate" are two different act, an idea contrary to original intent. Use of Singular pronoun "IT" for plural antecedent "COMPANIES" is incorrect. Hence Incorrect. C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised - Use of AND is incorrect as explained in option B. Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Hence Incorrect. D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Passive voice is not preferred. Hence Incorrect. E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Hence Incorrect _________________
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28 Jun 2017, 06:02
A. needing no approval from regulators before raising CORRECT
B. and it needed no approval by regulators before raising - 'it' can't refer to companies (plural)
C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised - writing 'and'here wrongly means that we are talking about 2 activities- of companies free to charge and companies not needing approval.
D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised - passive construction to be avoided
E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of 'the raising of' is wordy.
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
A. needing no approval from regulators before raising Correct B. andit needed no approval by regulators before raising - Use of AND is incorrect since such use means that "Approval from regulator for increase in rate" and "insurance companies can charge any rate" are two different act, an idea contrary to original intent. Use of Singular pronoun "IT" for plural antecedent "COMPANIES" is incorrect. Hence Incorrect. C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised - Use of AND is incorrect as explained in option B. Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Hence Incorrect. D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Passive voice is not preferred. Hence Incorrect. E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Hence Incorrect
I dont think option D and E have any problem with the usage of with as it just gives the additional information about the previous sentence.It is acceptable.Need expert views on this issue.
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vlakhanpal14 wrote:
elegantm wrote:
Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
A. needing no approval from regulators before raising Correct B. andit needed no approval by regulators before raising - Use of AND is incorrect since such use means that "Approval from regulator for increase in rate" and "insurance companies can charge any rate" are two different act, an idea contrary to original intent. Use of Singular pronoun "IT" for plural antecedent "COMPANIES" is incorrect. Hence Incorrect. C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised - Use of AND is incorrect as explained in option B. Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Hence Incorrect. D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Passive voice is not preferred. Hence Incorrect. E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Hence Incorrect
I dont think option D and E have any problem with the usage of with as it just gives the additional information about the previous sentence.It is acceptable.Need expert views on this issue.
Non-expert here but hope that I can help you on this issue.
2 options (D) and (E) have more than one problem, as follows
D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised --> First, pronoun ambiguity - "they" could refer to both "insurance companies in California" and "regulators". Second, passive voice "approval not needed by regulators" is insufficient and less preferred to active voice used in options (A) and (B).
E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of --> First, insufficient passive voice (as in above choice). Second, "the raising" is a noun (in the form of complex gerund). According to V-A-N rule, this noun is less preferred to its verb form ("raising"/"raised") as used in options (A), (B) and (C). Lastly, this option fails to identify agent of the action (raising rates), while based on the original sentence, the agent is insurance companies in California. This causes a slight change in the meaning of sentence. That's why this choice is clearly out.
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21 Jul 2017, 11:53
I was not sure about the correct answer because I remember verbs of opinion/preference/necessity cannot be conjugated in the BE+V-ing form? is needing correctly used here? Can someone help explain? Thank you!
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Hi, I chose option A. Can someone kindly enlighten with the usage of with. Is with here an acceptable form. I know that in option (D) they is ambiguous and in option (E) the raising of looks dubious. But I am not sure about the exact fault in option E. Need help.
Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising (B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising (C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised (D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised (E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
main problem in d is " needed by regulators" is wrong. companies, not regulators need approval.
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sunny91, the problem with E is that it's oddly vague and passive. If we are saying that companies didn't need permission to raise rates, then why add "with no approval needed," which no longer clearly applies to companies, or "the raising of rates," which no longer specifies who's doing the raising? We can still tell the intended meaning (who else would be raising the rates?), but E only obscures the meaning and doesn't add anything helpful. It's like a disgraced politician saying "Mistakes were made" rather than "I made mistakes." Why the vagueness?
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising (B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising (C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised (D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised (E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
A) needing no approval from regulators before raising (B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising ("IT" cannot refer back to companies(plural)) (C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised( and is not needed here; there is only one thing that is going on here) (D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised ( they can be ambiguous here; can refer to regulators or companies) (E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of (the sentence structure is awkward and doesn't provide sufficient meaning)
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising correctly modifies the preceding clause "were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear" What was free to charge? The insurance companies were
(B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising "it" can only refer to market. Market need no approval from regulators is not the intended meaning of the original sentence. Insurance companies don't need approval.
(C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised "were" is not parallel with "needing". It is also unclear what "they" is referring to. Regulators? Insurance companies?
(D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised Same problem with (C)
(E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of Passive voice, seems inferior to answer (A)
Please correct my explanation in (A) if I did it wrong.
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gmatacer40 wrote:
Why option E is wrong?
Hello
I will be glad to help you with this one.
Choice A explicitly says that insurance companies in California did not need any approval from regulators.
But Choice E just says with no approval needed. It does not specify who did not need approval, an information explicitly mentioned in the original sentence. Hence, Choice E leads to a distortion in meaning and stands incorrect.
It's always easier to approach the sentence from meaning standpoint rather than learn a whole lot of grammar rules that you may or may not remember at the time when you may need to use them.
I am confused why the construction 'with no approval needed' causes confusion. Is it true always?
What about the below sentence using the same phase - With no approval needed, the visitors were allowed an easy entry into the premises.
As per my understanding - here the phrase 'with no approval needed' acts as an adverbial modifier and it modifies the subsequent main sentence - 'the visitors were allowed an easy entry into the premises'
Please let me know if I am wrong
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