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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.

(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising
(B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising
(C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised
(D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised
(E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of

(A) Correctneeding no approval from regulators before raising
(B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising
It is wrong. Here we are talking about companies so plural pronoun is needed
(C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised
Parallelism issue
(D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised
with...... is an adverbial and is worng
(E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
same as D
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.

(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising- CORRECT- concisely put.
(B) and it needed no approval by regulators before raising- INCORRECT- it incorrectly refers to plural insurance companies.
(C) and needing no approval from regulators before they raised- INCORRECT- with the introduction of and, needing no approval is not parallel to free to charge
(D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised- INCORRECT- they is ambiguous and usage of passive voice when the first part is in active voice, should be avoided.
(E) with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
-INCORRECT- when we have the correct form of verb "raising" available, construction of the gerund- "the raising of" should be avoided.

Correct option is A
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.

A. needing no approval from regulators before raising
CORRECT

B. and it needed no approval by regulators before raising
"it" here is wrong since "insurance companies" is prural.

C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised
"and needing" isn't parallel to "were"

D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised
"they" here is ambiguous since it could refer "insurance companies" or "regulators"

E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
"the raising of" is wordy. "raising" is better
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Why is C wrong due to parallelism? I am unable to understand the reasoning. Thanks in advance.
Hi utkarshthapak, with C, the sentence would be:

Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, and needing no approval from regulators before they raised rates.

and is an indicator of parallelism. We should always first look at the structure of the sentence to the RHS of indicator of parallelism. In option C, we have a participial phrase (needing no approval..) on the RHS.

For the sentence to be parallel, there must be a corresponding matching structure (in this case a participial phrase/adjective) on the LHS of indicator of parallelism. In option C, there is none. Hence, C is not parallel.

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses this parallelism approach, its application and examples in significant detail. If someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.

A. needing no approval from regulators before raising
Correct
B. and it needed no approval by regulators before raising
- Use of AND is incorrect since such use means that "Approval from regulator for increase in rate" and "insurance companies can charge any rate" are two different act, an idea contrary to original intent. Use of Singular pronoun "IT" for plural antecedent "COMPANIES" is incorrect. Hence Incorrect.
C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised - Use of AND is incorrect as explained in option B. Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Hence Incorrect.
D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised
Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Passive voice is not preferred. Hence Incorrect.
E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Hence Incorrect
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.

A. needing no approval from regulators before raising
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B. and it needed no approval by regulators before raising
- Use of AND is incorrect since such use means that "Approval from regulator for increase in rate" and "insurance companies can charge any rate" are two different act, an idea contrary to original intent. Use of Singular pronoun "IT" for plural antecedent "COMPANIES" is incorrect. Hence Incorrect.
C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised - Use of AND is incorrect as explained in option B. Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Hence Incorrect.
D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised
Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Passive voice is not preferred. Hence Incorrect.
E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Hence Incorrect

I dont think option D and E have any problem with the usage of with as it just gives the additional information about the previous sentence.It is acceptable.Need expert views on this issue.
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.

A. needing no approval from regulators before raising
Correct
B. and it needed no approval by regulators before raising
- Use of AND is incorrect since such use means that "Approval from regulator for increase in rate" and "insurance companies can charge any rate" are two different act, an idea contrary to original intent. Use of Singular pronoun "IT" for plural antecedent "COMPANIES" is incorrect. Hence Incorrect.
C. and needing no approval from regulators before they raised - Use of AND is incorrect as explained in option B. Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Hence Incorrect.
D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised
Use of NEEDING along with RAISED doesn't make any sense. Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Passive voice is not preferred. Hence Incorrect.
E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
Use of WITH leads to RUN-ON sentence. Hence Incorrect

I dont think option D and E have any problem with the usage of with as it just gives the additional information about the previous sentence.It is acceptable.Need expert views on this issue.

Non-expert here but hope that I can help you on this issue.

2 options (D) and (E) have more than one problem, as follows

D. with approval not needed by regulators before they raised
--> First, pronoun ambiguity - "they" could refer to both "insurance companies in California" and "regulators".
Second, passive voice "approval not needed by regulators" is insufficient and less preferred to active voice used in options (A) and (B).

E. with no approval needed from regulators before the raising of
--> First, insufficient passive voice (as in above choice).
Second, "the raising" is a noun (in the form of complex gerund). According to V-A-N rule, this noun is less preferred to its verb form ("raising"/"raised") as used in options (A), (B) and (C).
Lastly, this option fails to identify agent of the action (raising rates), while based on the original sentence, the agent is insurance companies in California. This causes a slight change in the meaning of sentence. That's why this choice is clearly out.
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Why option E is wrong?
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Why option E is wrong?

Hey gmatacer40 ,

E is wrong because it is following the incorrect usage of "with".

Refer to below article to learn more on the usage.

With Usage on GMAT

Hope that makes sense?
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Why option E is wrong?


Hello

I will be glad to help you with this one. :-)

Choice A explicitly says that insurance companies in California did not need any approval from regulators.

But Choice E just says with no approval needed. It does not specify who did not need approval, an information explicitly mentioned in the original sentence. Hence, Choice E leads to a distortion in meaning and stands incorrect.

It's always easier to approach the sentence from meaning standpoint rather than learn a whole lot of grammar rules that you may or may not remember at the time when you may need to use them. :-)


Hope this helps. :-)
Thanks.
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Hi egmat,

I am confused why the construction 'with no approval needed' causes confusion. Is it true always?

What about the below sentence using the same phase -
With no approval needed, the visitors were allowed an easy entry into the premises.

As per my understanding - here the phrase 'with no approval needed' acts as an adverbial modifier and it modifies the subsequent main sentence - 'the visitors were allowed an easy entry into the premises'

Please let me know if I am wrong
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When we're looking at meaning, it doesn't generally work to say that a given phrase is always confusing or ambiguous. What matters is how clear it is in the given context. In the context of this sentence, the phrase "with no approval needed" does not make the meaning as clear as A. It doesn't help that we have additional imprecise language--"the raising of rates"--which obscures who is raising rates. Even if it's still clear to us who is raising rates without the need for approval, why express the thought in this imprecise way?
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Sentence Analysis
Here’s the sentence structure:

Before 1988, (Prepositional phrase modifying the main verb ‘were’)
insurance companies (Main Subject)
in California (Prepositional phrase modifying the main subject)
were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, (Main verb: were. ‘whatever…bear’ is a noun clause acting as an object for ‘charge’)
needing no approval from regulators before raising (Verb-ing modifier modifying the main clause. ‘before’ is followed by a verb-ing modifier which makes sense with the subject ‘insurance companies’)
The sentence says that before 1988, insurance companies were free to decide rates and did not need approval from regulators before raising rates. The second part ‘not needing approval from regulators’ is presented as a verb-ing modifier to the main clause. This construction makes sense since ‘not needing approval from regulators’ explains how the insurance companies were free to decide rates. Besides, the verb-ing ‘needing’ makes sense with the subject ‘insurance companies’. The sentence, as is, looks fine.
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Before 1988, insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators before raising rates.
(A) needing no approval from regulators before raising
(D) with approval not needed by regulators before they raised

Hi Everyone -
In choice D, I do not see any errors except the passive voice structure. Options in Both A and D, works as a modifier
In A - it is V+ing modifier modifying preceding clause
In D- it is Noun+Noun Modifier modifying preceding clause

Please correct if my analysis is wrong? If yes, then it means we are eliminating choice D only based on its passive structure?


NEED HELP!! :( :(
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it means we are eliminating choice D only based on its passive structure? [/b]
An easy way to eliminate D is the construct:

....approval not needed by regulators...

This seems to suggest that regulators are seeking approval; while the intended meaning is that approval needs to be sought from regulators.
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Why (E) is wrong
I don't think it is because of passive voice (needed is actually past participle and it is correct).
........, with ==> modify subject. I don't think it is grammatically wrong


Also, (A)... what does (A) actually modify? I don't think it is cause-effect
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Why (E) is wrong
I don't think it is because of passive voice (needed is actually past participle and it is correct).
........, with ==> modify subject. I don't think it is grammatically wrong


Also, (A)... what does (A) actually modify? I don't think it is cause-effect

Hello Tanchat,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, a more concrete error in Option E is that the phrase "the raising of" fails to clearly convey that it is the insurance companies raising the rates.

Further, Option A does convey a sense of cause and effect; the meaning it conveys is that insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear because they did not need approval from regulators before they raised rates.

We hope this helps.
All the best!
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