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Spoiler: From one of the practice tests of Kaplan, do not attempt if you haven't taken them all.
An unconfirmed nominee doing nothing to advance the administration’s judicial goals, the president will not consider controversial candidates.
(A) An unconfirmed nominee doing nothing to advance the administration’s judicial goals, the president will not consider any controversial candidates
(B) That nominees do nothing to advance the administration’s judicial goals unless confirmed, which is why the president will not consider controversial candidates
(C) The reason that the president will not consider a controversial candidate is because he will do nothing to advance the administrations judicial goals unless he is confirmed
(D) Because nominees do nothing to advance the administration’s judicial goals unless confirmed, the president will not consider controversial candidates
(E) Nothing is done for the judicial goals of the administration by an unconfirmed candidate, which is why the president will not consider any controversial candidate
Source: Kaplan
Can some experts explain the rationale for the OA to be correct?
(A) The first part of the sentence before the comma is a modifying phrase, and must modify the closest noun which is president. Is the president an unconformed nominee? Illogical A is out
(B) Which has to modifying the noun immediately preceeding the comma. There is no noun for which to refer to here. out
(C) "The reason that the president will not consider a controversial candidate is because he will do nothing to advance the administrations judicial goals unless he is confirmed" This sentence looks good. There is some possible pronoun ambiguity between president and candidate. Lets come back to this one
(D) "Because nominees do nothing to advance the administration’s judicial goals unless confirmed, the president will not consider controversial candidates" nothing wrong with this sentence. D looks like the best option so far.
(E) " Nothing is done for the judicial goals of the administration by an unconfirmed candidate, which is why the president will not consider any controversial candidate" Extremely wordy and awkward. This sentence is a jumbler. There is also no clear noun for which to refer to.
We are down to C vs D C repeats he frequently, possibly at the risk of being wordy and awkward. With the prounon ambiguity, (he possibly referring to president or candidate) we should drop C. D has no potential pronoun ambiguity. D it is.