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I would go for option C, the answer choices lack either the right time or parallel structure.
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Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals survive in hostile environments and procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting the interpretation of emotions.

A) procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting
B) procreate, and that feelings, as products of the conscious mind, reflecting
C) procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect
D) to procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, which reflect
E) to procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflecting

The structure of the sentence should be: scientists maintain that emotions, which are ...., and that feelings, which are ...., reflect...

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A. the subjects emotions and feelings are missing a verb. Maintain that emotions and that feelings is the parallel list. But here there is no that before feelings. Eliminate.

B. Missing verb

C. Correct structure.

D. Missing that and verb. Emotions evolved to help survive and procreate. But here the parallelism seems to indicate that emotions evolved to help survive and
emotions evolved to procreate. This is wrong.

E. Missing verb and same parallelism error as D.

Correct answer : C
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Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals survive in hostile environments and procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting the interpretation of emotions.

A) procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting- incorrect,
One could interpret that 'and' serves to connect the parallel clauses
Scientists maintain
, and feelings are products.
B) procreate, and that feelings, as products of the conscious mind, reflecting- incorrect, subject 'feelings' do not have a verb
C) procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect- Correct
D) to procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, which reflect - incorrect, the parallel infinitives (to help and to procreate) both seem to modify evolved, implying the following illogical meaing
emotions evolved to procreate.
E) to procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflecting- same as D ; no verb for that 'feelings'

Answer C
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Can someone explain why A is wrong?

I think that 'feelings' is parallel to 'emotions' so everything before 'emotions' would be common to both of them:

Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions...evolved -> fine
Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that feelings are products -> fine

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Can someone explain why A is wrong?
An easy way to put A in the less preferable category is the absence of that between and and feelings.

Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions....and that feelings...

You might want to go thru this post, to further understand the issue at hand.
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Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals survive in hostile environments and procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting the interpretation of emotions.

A) procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting
C) procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect

How is C grammatically correct?

Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions........ and that feelings......
Shouldn't the 'that' clause for emotions be finished before starting another than clause? This looks really awkward and weird to me.

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Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals survive in hostile environments and procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting the interpretation of emotions.

A) procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting
C) procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect

How is C grammatically correct?

Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions........ and that feelings......
Shouldn't the 'that' clause for emotions be finished before starting another than clause? This looks really awkward and weird to me.

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In this sentence, contemporary cognitive scientists maintain two things. Each of those two things consists of a clause (with a subject and a verb):

  • (1) that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals:
      (i) survive in hostile environments AND
      (ii) procreate
  • (2) that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect the interpretation of emotions."

Note that each of these two (after "that") could stand alone as a complete sentence:

  • (1) Emotions {...} evolved in the nervous system {...}.
  • (2) Feelings {...} reflect the interpretation of emotions.

So we actually have really nice parallelism here: "Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain...

  • (1) that [clause 1 (subject + verb)] AND
  • (2) that [clause 2 (subject + verb)]."

The parallelism is admittedly a bit hard to follow (especially since the first thing has another parallel list nested within it), but it's grammatically correct. Remember, as discussed in our SC guide for beginners, "a huge percentage of correct GMAT SC sentences sound like hot garbage. Many of them are just too damned long and convoluted. They’re often messy, wordy, and awkward." :)

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In (C), "reflect" being a verb is not parallel to the modifier "evolved".
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Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals survive in hostile environments and procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting the interpretation of emotions.

A) procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting
C) procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect

How is C grammatically correct?

Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions........ and that feelings......
Shouldn't the 'that' clause for emotions be finished before starting another than clause? This looks really awkward and weird to me.

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In this sentence, contemporary cognitive scientists maintain two things. Each of those two things consists of a clause (with a subject and a verb):

  • (1) that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals:
      (i) survive in hostile environments AND
      (ii) procreate
  • (2) that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect the interpretation of emotions."

Note that each of these two (after "that") could stand alone as a complete sentence:

  • (1) Emotions {...} evolved in the nervous system {...}.
  • (2) Feelings {...} reflect the interpretation of emotions.

So we actually have really nice parallelism here: "Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain...

  • (1) that [clause 1 (subject + verb)] AND
  • (2) that [clause 2 (subject + verb)]."

The parallelism is admittedly a bit hard to follow (especially since the first thing has another parallel list nested within it), but it's grammatically correct. Remember, as discussed in our SC guide for beginners, "a huge percentage of correct GMAT SC sentences sound like hot garbage. Many of them are just too damned long and convoluted. They’re often messy, wordy, and awkward." :)

I hope that helps!
I thought "evolved" in after the comma therefore its a modifier?
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In (C), "reflect" being a verb is not parallel to the modifier "evolved".
Hi lakshya14, the core of the sentence is:

...that emotions evolved...and that feelings reflect....

So, evolved and reflect are both verbs.

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In (C), "reflect" being a verb is not parallel to the modifier "evolved".
Hi lakshya14, the core of the sentence is:

...that emotions evolved...and that feelings reflect....

So, evolved and reflect are both verbs.

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses framework to distinguish between "Simple Past tense" Verb and "Past participle", its application and examples in significant detail. If you or someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.

But the both "evolved" is after the comma. Still can it be verb or is it an exception of the rule rule after a non-restrictive clause?
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Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions, which are biological functions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals survive in hostile environments and procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting the interpretation of emotions.

A) procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, reflecting
B) procreate, and that feelings, as products of the conscious mind, reflecting
C) procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflect
D) to procreate, and feelings are products of the conscious mind, which reflect
E) to procreate, and that feelings, which are products of the conscious mind, reflecting

Read the sentence as Scientists maintain that emotions..... evolved... to help animals survive.... and.......

Key decision to make should we choose procreate or to procreate....

To Procreate - the sentence would read as emotions evolved to help animals and to procreate.. Clearly wrong since emotions dont procreate, animals do so D and E are out...

Since scientists maintain "That" emotions, which are biological is parallel in structure to ,and that feelings, which are products.... C is the answer
Thanks for the explanation but i think that there shouldn't be any comma before and that...

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But the both "evolved" is after the comma. Still can it be verb or is it an exception of the rule rule after a non-restrictive clause?
Sorry can you explain what rule you are referring to?
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In (C), "reflect" being a verb is not parallel to the modifier "evolved".
Hi lakshya14, the core of the sentence is:

...that emotions evolved...and that feelings reflect....

So, evolved and reflect are both verbs.

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses framework to distinguish between "Simple Past tense" Verb and "Past participle", its application and examples in significant detail. If you or someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.

But the both "evolved" is after the comma. Still can it be verb or is it an exception of the rule rule after a non-restrictive clause?
I'll second EducationAisle on this one. The commas are only there to separate the noun modifier "which are biological functions" -- take that part out, and the commas can go too, leaving us with: "Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions evolved..."

Also, notice that "evolved" wouldn't really work as a modifier here (i.e. "Contemporary cognitive scientists maintain that emotions, evolved in the nervous system to help animals survive in hostile environments, ..."):

  • You can't say, "Emotions are evolved in the nervous system..." or "Check out those emotions evolved in the nervous system!"
  • In other words, you can't really modify emotions directly with "evolved in the nervous system." Instead, "evolved" makes more sense as a verb or action in this case -- something that the emotions DID in the past.

That's a fairly subtle point, but I hope it helps!
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in A] 'evolved' seems an ed verbal

if I ask - 'what (are) evolved in the nervous system?
v/s
what evolved in the nervous system? - does not make sense ?

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