ameyaprabhu
Parallelism is my biggest weakness, so can someone please help me out with this doubt:
I thought we have to maintain ||ism as follows - emotions...evolved...to help animals...and to procreate
That's why I fail to understand why C is the answer.
Hi ameyaprabhu, the issue is that no source on parallelism can ever substitute for
meaning interpretation. This is because the
grammatical similarity between various parts of the sentence must support the
intended meaning.
Hence, it becomes important that you understand the intended meaning. Here, the intended meaning is that emotions evolved to help animals:
i) survive in hostile environments and
ii) procreate
So,
survive and
procreate need to be
grammatically similar. Hence D and E are eliminated.
However, let's take your interpretation:
emotions...evolved...to help animals...and to procreateSo, as per your interpretation, D and E are the only viable choices. At this stage, you need to look one level deeper into options D and E,
Option D: Notice that
which would modify
products. There are couple of issues with this. For one thing, one would ideally have liked
products to be placed close to
which. Also, the real intent is that
which should modify
feelings.
Option E: This is not a complete sentence at all! After
and that, one would expect a
clause (since
that is used as a
conjunction here). However, there is
no verb in this case at all. The core of the sentence is:
...and that feelings reflecting the interpretation of emotions. It should have been:
...and that feelings reflect the interpretation of emotions. In this case,
reflect would be the
verb, fixing the sentence.
Hence, with D and E definitely being incorrect, you should
reconsider your meaning interpretation and fall back on options A, B and C.
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