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UNDERSTANDING INTENDED MEANING

Let’ break the sentence to derive the intended meaning, identifying the errors along the way:

Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with more and more frequency
and the sentencing,
even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery,
have increased
in length.

ERRORS:
1. “More and more frequency” is a little too wordy for GMAT SC questions
2. “The sentencing” is be a singular noun. The verb for this noun is “have increased” which is plural. So SV pair does not agree in number.
3. Moreover, it is not the act of sentencing, but the sentences that have increased in length.

INTENDED MEANING

• Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with increasing frequency.
• Although the sentences are still shorter than the average sentence for crimes such as armed robbery, these sentences have increased in length.

ANSWER CHOICE ELIMINATION

Choices A, B and D all have the error of “the sentencing” and can be straightaway eliminated.

Choice C analysis:
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with higher frequency and the sentences, even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery, are increased in length.

• “Higher frequency” not a very apt substitute for “more and more” -probably not a deterministic error
• “Even though” could be replaced by “though” - probably not a deterministic error
The sentences are increased is incorrect construction. We are talking about an action that has already taken place and continues to do so. Thus we need to use the present perfect “have increased”.

Incorrect Choice

Choice E analysis
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with greater frequency and the sentences, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, have increased in length.

Logical
Clear
Per the intended meaning

Correct Choice.
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A and B can be eliminated as more is used for countable noun, also whenever a unit of measurements is used such as probability or fequency it is required that we use greater or higher.

A) more and more frequency and the sentencing, even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery, have increased. Wrong


B) more and more frequency and the sentencing, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, has increasedWrong



Between C, D & E.
There is differences in tenses, and 2nd subject i.e The Sentences.

C) higher frequency and the sentences, even though still shorter than the average fro cirmes such as armed robbery, are increased.

The sentences are increased is terribly wrong, have been is apt. as there is something that has happened in the past.

D) greater frequency and the sentencing, although still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, has been increasing

It should be "the sentences" the modifier makes sense with it.

E) greater frequency and the sentences, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, have increased

Correct.
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Project SC Butler: Day 223: Sentence Correction (SC2)


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Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with more and more frequency and the sentencing, even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery, have increased in length.


A) more and more frequency and the sentencing, even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery, have increased

B) more and more frequency and the sentencing, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, has increased

C) higher frequency and the sentences, even though still shorter than the average fro cirmes such as armed robbery, are increased

D) greater frequency and the sentencing, although still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, has been increasing


@daagh sir please help.

@daagh please help.

E) greater frequency and the sentences, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, have increased
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UNDERSTANDING INTENDED MEANING

Let’ break the sentence to derive the intended meaning, identifying the errors along the way:

Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with more and more frequency
and the sentencing,
even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery,
have increased
in length.

ERRORS:
1. “More and more frequency” is a little too wordy for GMAT SC questions
2. “The sentencing” is be a singular noun. The verb for this noun is “have increased” which is plural. So SV pair does not agree in number.
3. Moreover, it is not the act of sentencing, but the sentences that have increased in length.

INTENDED MEANING

• Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with increasing frequency.
• Although the sentences are still shorter than the average sentence for crimes such as armed robbery, these sentences have increased in length.

ANSWER CHOICE ELIMINATION

Choices A, B and D all have the error of “the sentencing” and can be straightaway eliminated.

Choice C analysis:
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with higher frequency and the sentences, even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery, are increased in length.

• “Higher frequency” not a very apt substitute for “more and more” -probably not a deterministic error
• “Even though” could be replaced by “though” - probably not a deterministic error
The sentences are increased is incorrect construction. We are talking about an action that has already taken place and continues to do so. Thus we need to use the present perfect “have increased”.

Incorrect Choice

Choice E analysis
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with greater frequency and the sentences, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, have increased in length.

Logical
Clear
Per the intended meaning

Correct Choice.
i am very frustrated and confused with many GMAT specific technique which is deviated fro my childhood learning. How the term like "Sentences" can be increased by itself,it has to be decided by Judge and hence the sentence should be expressed in passive voice.

I can eat an Apple. But apple can not eat me. apple can be eaten by me.

Please tell me how can I learn GMAT specific grammar.
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i am very frustrated and confused with many GMAT specific technique which is deviated fro my childhood learning. How the term like "Sentences" can be increased by itself,it has to be decided by Judge and hence the sentence should be expressed in passive voice.

I can eat an Apple. But apple can not eat me. apple can be eaten by me.

Please tell me how can I learn GMAT specific grammar.
Hi tannumunu,

This is not something that is "GMAT-specific". Sentences can be used that way in the English language in general.

I know that this can be frustrating, but you can try to avoid taking calls of this type until you feel more confident taking such calls.
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UNDERSTANDING INTENDED MEANING

Let’ break the sentence to derive the intended meaning, identifying the errors along the way:

Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with more and more frequency
and the sentencing,
even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery,
have increased
in length.

ERRORS:
1. “More and more frequency” is a little too wordy for GMAT SC questions
2. “The sentencing” is be a singular noun. The verb for this noun is “have increased” which is plural. So SV pair does not agree in number.
3. Moreover, it is not the act of sentencing, but the sentences that have increased in length.

INTENDED MEANING

• Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with increasing frequency.
• Although the sentences are still shorter than the average sentence for crimes such as armed robbery, these sentences have increased in length.

ANSWER CHOICE ELIMINATION

Choices A, B and D all have the error of “the sentencing” and can be straightaway eliminated.

Choice C analysis:
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with higher frequency and the sentences, even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery, are increased in length.

• “Higher frequency” not a very apt substitute for “more and more” -probably not a deterministic error
• “Even though” could be replaced by “though” - probably not a deterministic error
The sentences are increased is incorrect construction. We are talking about an action that has already taken place and continues to do so. Thus we need to use the present perfect “have increased”.

Incorrect Choice

Choice E analysis
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with greater frequency and the sentences, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, have increased in length.

Logical
Clear
Per the intended meaning

Correct Choice.
i am very frustrated and confused with many GMAT specific technique which is deviated fro my childhood learning. How the term like "Sentences" can be increased by itself,it has to be decided by Judge and hence the sentence should be expressed in passive voice.

I can eat an Apple. But apple can not eat me. apple can be eaten by me.

Please tell me how can I learn GMAT specific grammar.

Hi Tannumunu

It is often difficult to understand the different ways of conveying a particular meaning.
Let's look at the sentence segment in question:

The sentences....have increased in length.
or in other words
The length of the prison sentences have increased.

Now it is obvious that the said increase could not have happened on its own. It is equally obvious that somebody must be announcing such long sentences. However, the intention of this sentence is not to tell you who increased the sentences but to tell you that the length of the sentences has increased..

In our course we encourage students to break down sentences into small segments to make understanding easier. You can try the free trial on the link given below.



Hope this helps :)
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UNDERSTANDING INTENDED MEANING

Let’ break the sentence to derive the intended meaning, identifying the errors along the way:

Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with more and more frequency
and the sentencing,
even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery,
have increased
in length.

ERRORS:
1. “More and more frequency” is a little too wordy for GMAT SC questions
2. “The sentencing” is be a singular noun. The verb for this noun is “have increased” which is plural. So SV pair does not agree in number.
3. Moreover, it is not the act of sentencing, but the sentences that have increased in length.

INTENDED MEANING

• Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with increasing frequency.
• Although the sentences are still shorter than the average sentence for crimes such as armed robbery, these sentences have increased in length.

ANSWER CHOICE ELIMINATION

Choices A, B and D all have the error of “the sentencing” and can be straightaway eliminated.

Choice C analysis:
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with higher frequency and the sentences, even though still shorter than the average for crimes such as armed robbery, are increased in length.

• “Higher frequency” not a very apt substitute for “more and more” -probably not a deterministic error
• “Even though” could be replaced by “though” - probably not a deterministic error
The sentences are increased is incorrect construction. We are talking about an action that has already taken place and continues to do so. Thus we need to use the present perfect “have increased”.

Incorrect Choice

Choice E analysis
Federal judges are sentencing white-collar criminals to prison with greater frequency and the sentences, though still shorter than the average for such crimes as armed robbery, have increased in length.

Logical
Clear
Per the intended meaning

Correct Choice.

I got a bit confused at the sentencing and the sentences part at options D and E. I was able to eliminate options A,B and C with ease. Great explanation.

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