OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONQuote:
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Like trees have rings to determine their age, so do growth rings on the scales of some fish. A)
Like trees
have rings to determine their age, so do growth rings on the scales of some fish.
B)
Like trees
have rings to determine their age, some fish have growth rings on their scales.
C) Trees,
as some fish, have growth rings that determine their age.
D) As
trees have rings,
growth rings also appear on some fish to determine their age.
E) Some fish,
like trees, have growth rings that determine their age.
• HIGHLIGHTSLike must be followed by a noun, pronoun, or noun phrase.
Like must not be followed by a clause (with a verb) or a prepositional phrase.
As must be followed by a noun and verb (a clause).
Like means "similar to."
Use
like to compare nouns.
Do not use "like" to compare clauses. Clauses have verbs!
That is, the word
like means "similar to" and must be followed by a noun or a noun phrase.
(Literally, substitute "similar to" in place of "like"; you may "hear" the need for a noun.)
As means "in the same way that."
Use
as to compare clauses. Look for verbs!
→ In comparisons,
as should be followed by a subject and a verb (a clause).
If "in the same WAY that"
works, then you need AS and you should not use LIKE.
Use a mnemonic: s
Ame w
Ay th
At → →
As
I explain these concepts in Notes, below, with examples.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Like trees have rings to determine their age, so do growth rings on the scales of some fish.
• Like should be followed by a noun or noun phrase only: no clauses! A clause has a verb.
Like is incorrectly followed by
have.
• not parallel at best, illogical at worst
It sounds as though
growth rings on the scales of some fish also "have rings to determine their age."
What does
do stand in for?
Trees . . . should be parallel with
fishELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) Like trees have rings to determine their age, some fish have growth rings on their scales.
•
Like should be followed by a noun or noun phrase. No verbs!
Like is incorrectly followed by
have.
• This option avoids the parallelism problem in option A, but repeats its incorrect use of
like.ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) Trees, as some fish [DO], have growth rings that determine their age.
• AS must be followed by a verb in a comparison. AS compares clauses. A clause contains a subject and a
verb.AS is not followed by a verb and should be.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) As trees have rings, growth rings also appear on some fish to determine their age.
• The comparison clauses are not parallel
LHS = trees have rings
RHS = growth rings appear on fish
Trees and
fish should be parallel: they're the things under comparison.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) Some fish, like trees, have growth rings that determine their age.
•
like is correctly followed by the noun
trees.
This part may sound strange, but like is
not followed by a verb.
Yes, I know that [comma + have] comes right after "like trees."
That verb,
have, belongs to
fish. Not to
trees. Why? Because the word trees is "cordoned off" from the verb
have by the comma.
• we have a parallel comparison between the rings of both fish and trees.
KEEP
The best answer is E.NOTES• LIKE/AS
I pulled out my
MGMAT Sentence Correction 6th Edition because I recalled that it contained three effective examples.
About 70 percent of the text in this bullet point is verbatim.
(1) "Like" is used to compare nouns, pronouns, and noun phrases.
Never put a clause or a prepositional phrase after "like"!
(Remember, a clause contains a
working verb, [my emphasis] one that can be the main verb in a sentence.)
Take a look at this example:
Right: LIKE
her brother,
Ava aced the test.
→ Here,
like is followed by the noun phrase
her brother.The whole phrase
Like her brother indicates a comparison between
Ava and
her brother (two nouns).
[In the phrase
Like her brother, there is no verb.]
(2) On the other hand,
as can be used to
compare two clauses [i.e., WITH verbs].
Wrong:
LIKE her brother DID,
Ava aced the test.
Right:
AS her brother DID,
Ava aced the test.
["Like" cannot be used because like should not be followed by verbs and] [t]he words
her brother did form a clause (
did is a working verb).
Therefore, use
as to make the comparison between the two clauses
Ana aced the test and
her brother did, too.
On the GMAT, these two sentences mean the same thing:
Like her brother, Ava aced the testand
As her brother did, Ava aced the test.In one sentence, you compare
Ava and
her brother directly [using
like followed by only a noun].
In the other sentence, you compare what Ava did and what her brother did [using
as followed by a verb].
• Please, be slightly specific in your explanations.
Labels are not explanations.
"Logical shift" or "pronoun error" tells me very little.
If the meaning in an option is nonsensical or illogical, say so, but also explain why the option is illogical or nonsensical.
• TAKEAWAYSTry not to worry too much about jargon, except these parts:
Like must be followed by a noun, pronoun, or noun phrase.
Like must not be followed by a clause (with a verb) or a prepositional phrase.
As must be followed by a noun and verb (a clause).
COMMENTSGMAC tests
like and
as in ways very similar to those in this question.
I like the question.
Good questions are very hard to find.
This question gets easier the more you review it.
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