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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides


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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides


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1) Making things even more difficult MODIFIES general market inactivity , so should be followed by it..
2) Pronoun error - general market inactivity REQUIRES a verb...


BOTH above error are corrected ONLY by D

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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides


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Making things even more difficult lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided. 'Which' refers to paralysis.
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided 'there' refers to what?
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided Making things even more difficult general market inactivity. No verb is used.
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides. which refers to paralysis
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides


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Intention of the sentence is to convey that General market inactivity are making things difficult, if not causing paralysis, and this whole thing has resulted in providing little for pricing guidance.
Subject of this entire sentence is General Market inactivity.
Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided -> use of which wrongly refers to “paralysis” that is not what sentence means.
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided => Making things even more difficult there is general market inactivity =>: no verb, no sense of connectivity and then new sentence start just like that.
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided => Same error
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides
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I generally go right to the answer choices. I notice there is a lot of variation in the word lately. What makes sense? Where is it supposed to go? Difficult lately (D) is the only option that has a logical placement of the word lately. A and E would need to say “recent general market inactivity,” all the other placements are totally nonsensical or unclear as to what it refers.

To give an alternative explanation.

-We have *market inactivity* in B/D/E that we can compare to *paralysis*.

-Market inactivity lately in A. Cannot compare market inactivity “lately” to paralysis. Elim A

-This is an illustration of what I call the fork concept. The verb "provided" needs to be the handle and "market activity" & "paralysis" are the prongs.
For this reason, we need the verb directly after market activity & paralysis. No clear antecedent for “it” either. Elim B

- In C, has lately provided little in the way of guidance makes it sound like a contrast with formerly providing lots of guidance. Also, "even more difficult general activity," makes no sense.

-E would need to say “recent general market inactivity,” here is sounds like “lately” is a type of general market inactivity

-D gets the *lately* issue sorted and the activity vs. paralysis issue is a clean comparison
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.
A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides

A- which should be next to general market inactivity
B- Run on sentence - 2 independent clauses joined by comma
C- Initial modifier "Making things more difficult " should be followed by a comma
E- not a sentence

Answer D
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides


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A - X
- uses an inverted subject - verb sentence (a correct one).
- You can read it as: "General market inactivity has been making things even more difficult, if not paralysis,which..."
- Nothice that the mentioned above does not make any sense. It's parts are not properly connected ("more difficult", "paralysis" - are not parallel).

B - X
- V-ing modier clause/phrase requiers a comma in the end of it. since we do not have it here, this option is out.

C - X
- Same as B

D - Makes sense. it connect all the proper parts of the sentence together. (market activity & paralysis are both nouns, and here parallelism is kept).

E - That is not requiered. using that takes away the subject of "is". E is out.
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided Noun (Subject) is missing,who or what has made things difficult.
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided wrong construction,illogical
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided wrong construction
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides wrong construction
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Wow, this one got me! From my error log:
No need to rush and try to solve an easy question in 30 sec.
C - needs comma after initial modifier - an interesting thing to check for.
Also, I could have seen that positioning of lately is in an issue by noticing that it is positioned across answer choices.
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides


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Hi mikemcgarry

I am having difficulty in getting my head around this one; I would really appreciate if you could give your expert explanation.

In D

D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided

What I can understand, D is a succinct version of the following sentence

Making things even more difficult lately (is) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, (which) has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

Where the words I added in parentheses are omitted. Effectively,

“general market inactivity” is the subject
“if not paralysis”, is a non-essential modifier, making it possible to defy modifier touch rule and allowing “(which) has provided little in the way…” to refer back to the subject of the sentence.


If my understanding is not correct then, well, this one is too hard for me and it is time for me to move on.

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Hi mikemcgarry

I am having difficulty in getting my head around this one; I would really appreciate if you could give your expert explanation.

In D


Here is D:
Making things even more difficult lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.
Making things even more difficult lately - present participle modifier, referring the preceding subject "general market inactivity" and acting as an adverb for the main action "has provided...",
general market inactivity,if not paralysis, has provided little in the way of pricing guidance - the main clause.

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D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided

What I can understand, D is a succinct version of the following sentence

Making things even more difficult lately (is) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, (which) has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

Where the words I added in parentheses are omitted. Effectively,

“general market inactivity” is the subject
“if not paralysis”, is a non-essential modifier, making it possible to defy modifier touch rule and allowing “(which) has provided little in the way…” to refer back to the subject of the sentence.

We cannot omit the main finite verb in such scenario, specially in the main clause - there are cases when we can do so, for instance in ellipses or in verbless clause, but not here. Moreover, also note that there is a comma after "lately" in D, and your version of D does not consider that.

In addition to the above, considering "general market inactivity" as a noun predicate alters the meaning too/illogical meaning, but as you are concerned only with the structure, I am not discussing the meaning aspect.
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AbdurRakib wrote:
Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides
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Hi mikemcgarry

I am having difficulty in getting my head around this one; I would really appreciate if you could give your expert explanation.

In D
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided

What I can understand, D is a succinct version of the following sentence

Making things even more difficult lately (is) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, (which) has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

Where the words I added in parentheses are omitted. Effectively,

“general market inactivity” is the subject
“if not paralysis”, is a non-essential modifier, making it possible to defy modifier touch rule and allowing “(which) has provided little in the way…” to refer back to the subject of the sentence.

If my understanding is not correct then, well, this one is too hard for me and it is time for me to move on.

Your time is appreciated.

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Dear TheRzS,

I'm happy to respond. :-)

My friend, I disagree with your interpretation of (D). The words you think are implied are not necessary, and the sentence words much better without them. This is what I would say:
Making things even more difficult lately, = participial phrase, acting as a noun-modifier, modifying the subject
general market inactivity, = MAIN SUBJECT
if [it is] not paralysis, = noun modifying clause, modifying the subject (implied pronoun & auxiliary verb pair)
has provided = MAIN VERB
little in the way of pricing guidance = object

The core sentence, without the participial phrase and the qualifying clause, is:
General market inactivity has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

This is a fabulous question. The OG really contains some gems.

Does all this make sense?
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

'making things.......difficult' is modifying general market inactivity which has provided little ................

comma+which structure modifies the closest noun and it is modifying paralysis here which is not correct. Choice D is correct...
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided

B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
--> wordy and awkward.

C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
--> two adjectives difficult general are not properly joined.

D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
--> correct.

E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides
--> fragment.
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided - "which" refers to paralysis + "has been" is not required I believe because it says "lately"
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided - complete mess, "it" refers to what is not clear + "general market inactivity lately.." not a valid sentence
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided - missing comma b/w ".. difficult" and "general market .."
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided - CORRECT.. "general market inactivity" is rightly placed
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides - this goes in present tense but we are talking present perfect + "which" refers to paralysis
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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

A) has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided
B) there is general market inactivity, if not paralysis, lately it has provided
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided
E) is that lately general market inactivity, if not paralysis, which provides


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Hello GMATNinja

Although I dont find any error in D but I'm having a little trouble understanding why option C is wrong. I would really appreciate if you could give your expert replies.

As per the above posts I see that option C does not have a verb, but if I cancel out the modifier (as it's rightly placed) and then read the rest of the sentence as a whole I find a verb 'has' in it. So in option C why do I need a verb in the initial phase i.e. 'Making things even more difficult general market inactivity'.
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Thank you for your question! Let's tackle what the issues are with answer C. To make this easier to explain, I'm going to add in answer C to the original sentence:

Making things even more difficult general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

The main problem here is that we have no subject. We have two modifiers and a verb phrase:

Modifier #1: Making things even more difficult general market inactivity
(This is also a problem because, as a phrase, it doesn't sound right. It sounds like a run-on.)

Modifier #2: if not paralysis

Verb Phrase: has lately provided little in the way of pricing guidance.

If you were to write this sentence out in your own writing, the easiest way to fix it would be to put a comma after the word "difficult," which sets apart the subject "general market inactivity" instead of lumping it in with the modifier. However, they didn't give you that option, so it's unfortunately wrong.

I hope this helps!
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Can experts comment on usage of LATELY in C / D ?

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Making things even more difficult has been general market inactivity lately, if not paralysis, which has provided little in the way of pricing guidance.


My understanding:
For C:

Quote:
C) general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has lately provided


Lately is an adverb modifying verb - provided

For D:
Quote:
D) lately, general market inactivity, if not paralysis, has provided

Lately is adjective modifying noun - difficult.

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