Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
A. while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B. compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E. compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent
my doubts are related to Ellipsis.Please clarify.
meaning- The author says that over 75 percent of the total energy produced in France comes from the nuclear power, while only 33 percent of the total energy produced in Germany comes from nuclear power.
A) Incorrect- while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
1) According to me here IT is ambiguous.
while in Germany ( the energy produced from) it (nuclear power) is just over 33 percent.
while in Germany it(the energy) (produced from nuclear power) is just over 33 percent.
So it can refer to either the energy or nuclear power.
2)According to me there is ambiguity in comparison too.
while in Germany ( the energy produced from) it (nuclear power) is just over 33 percent.
this sentence doesn't convey the intended comparison, it doesn't say that 33 percent of the total energy produced in Germany.
while (the energy produced ) in Germany (from) it (nuclear power) is just over 33 percent.
This is the intended meaning.
Option B) compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent.
even this is ambiguous.
if we don't use ellipsis.
The energy produced in France is compared to Germany.(this is incorrect)
with ellipsis.
compared to ( the energy produced from nuclear power in ) Germany,which uses just over 33 percent.
Even this doesn't state the intended meaning but my point is that there are 2 comparisons possible.
DOUBT- is this all correct ?? or have i gone too far with Ellipsis. am i missing something.
And can we use that the comparison is illogical or incorrect because we didnt use ellipsis as i did in option B)
if we don't use ellipsis.
The energy produced in France is compared to Germany.(this is incorrect)