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B and D fail to establish parallelism
so does E
between A and C
A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
without "not" before "as" ,what are we contradicting ??incorrect

C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
Idiom error
As not.... But as...

B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
As not.... But....
Also parallelism error second is whole clause
Will not go with this choice
Incorrect

C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as

Not as... But as.... - correct
Rest also correct


D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
Idiom error
Not as ..... Rather....
Incorrect

E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
In terms of scary - wordy
Incorrect

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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as Incorrect

parallelism error - .....as not........but as......

B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but Incorrect

parallelism error - .....as not........but ......

C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as Correct

D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather Incorrect

parallelism error - .....not as........rather......

E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but Incorrect

meaning change
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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
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Although I marked c , i don't see any error in B . "As" is outside the parallelism ,and it can go with "not" as well as "but".

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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but

After a quick glance over the options, there are 2 main differences we can focus on:

1. as not / not as / not in terms of (Idioms)
2. but as / but / rather (Idioms)


Since both of our differences have to do with idioms, let’s ask ourselves this: do they both have to do with the SAME idiom? YES! The idiom we’re dealing with here is “not X, but Y.” We need to make sure each option follows the idiom’s basic format, while also checking to make sure both X and Y are parallel:

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
not X, but as Y = WRONG
B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
not X, but Y = OKAY
C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
not X, but Y = OKAY
D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
not X, rather Y = WRONG
E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
not in terms of X, but Y = WRONG

We can eliminate options A, D, & E because they either don’t follow the idiom format at all (option D), or the X and Y aren’t parallel (options A & E). Now that we have it narrowed down to only 2 options, let’s take a closer look to see if we can find any other problems:

B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
This is INCORRECT because it changes the intended meaning. By referring to the snakes as “not scary,” that doesn’t create a contrast between the two ways of looking at snakes. They ARE seen as scary to some people, but they SHOULD be seen as useful!

C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
This is our CORRECT option! It uses parallel structure with the “not X, but Y” idiom, and there aren’t any issues with the meaning of this one – it conveys the intended contrast perfectly.

There you have it – option C is our winner!

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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but


imo C .

Idiom Tested : not X , but Y -- Where X and Y must be logically as well as grammatically parallel .

Meaning :
Although snakes are legless,
people should think of non-venomous snakes not as scary, forked-tongued creatures,
but as useful animals
that eat disease-carrying rodents.


Error Analysis :

The idiom not x , but y is used incorrectly. The way choice A is written structurally, it is not parallel.

Instead of not scary ... But as useful animals ..

It should be not as scary... But as useful animals


A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as

--Parallelism issue in the idiom not .. But... As discussed above


B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but

--Omission of as doesn't convey the meaning properly . We need ..not as .. But as


C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as

-- Seems Correct .. This choice corrected the the errors of choice a and b . Meaning is also clear ..


D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather

-- Incorrect use of idiom ..we need . not .. But... As discussed above


E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but

-- Omission of as .. Doesn't convey the meaning properly .

Well done, HoneyLemon! You cracked the code on this one! Kudos to you! :) :thumbsup:
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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

The correct idiom in use here is "not as X, but as Y" in which X and Y are parallel elements.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as -- wrong as mentioned above
B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but -- same as A
C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as -- CORRECT
D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather -- "as" is not used after rather. Not parallel
E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but -- wordy and colloquial(not very GMAT-like)


The answer should be C

Another great catch, NiftyNiffler! Kudos to you! :) :thumbsup:
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B and D fail to establish parallelism
so does E
between A and C
A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
without "not" before "as" ,what are we contradicting ??incorrect

C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
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You're right SKY396! Option A isn't a contrast at all - saying that snakes are "not scary" is not a contradiction to the later part of the statement! Kudos to you! :) :thumbsup:
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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
Idiom error
As not.... But as...

B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
As not.... But....
Also parallelism error second is whole clause
Will not go with this choice
Incorrect

C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as

Not as... But as.... - correct
Rest also correct


D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
Idiom error
Not as ..... Rather....
Incorrect

E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
In terms of scary - wordy
Incorrect

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Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as Incorrect

parallelism error - .....as not........but as......

B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but Incorrect

parallelism error - .....as not........but ......

C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as Correct

D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather Incorrect

parallelism error - .....not as........rather......

E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but Incorrect

meaning change

Great explanation winterschool! Kudos to you! :) :thumbsup:
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Pack 18, Question 5 of 5:

Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but


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Although I marked c , i don't see any error in B . "As" is outside the parallelism ,and it can go with "not" as well as "but".

Regards,
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Gauravvinod92 - The problem with option B is that it changes the intended meaning of the sentence. It describes the snakes as "not scary," which doesn't create a clear contradiction to the rest of the statement (that they're useful).

Check out the official explanation in the comments for more details!
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Pack 18, Question 5 of 5:

Although snakes are legless, carnivorous reptiles, people should think of non-venomous snakes as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as useful animals that eat disease-carrying rodents.

A. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
B. as not scary, forked-tongued creatures, but
C. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, but as
D. not as scary, forked-tongued creatures, rather
E. not in terms of scary, forked-tongued creatures, but


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Although I marked c , i don't see any error in B . "As" is outside the parallelism ,and it can go with "not" as well as "but".

Regards,
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Gauravvinod92 - The problem with option B is that it changes the intended meaning of the sentence. It describes the snakes as "not scary," which doesn't create a clear contradiction to the rest of the statement (that they're useful).

Check out the official explanation in the comments for more details!

Thanks for the explanation.

Regards,
Gaurav
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