Got this wrong, Selected D, but spotted the Error.
Proponents of monetary rewards that managements _______________ the work
culture of the industry.
(A) awards to employees to prevent them from leaving consider these vital extrinsic
motivation, while critics of the policy condemn these as corporate benefit that helps
some workers but debilitates -
managements awards(B) awards to employees to prevent leaving consider these vital extrinsic motivation,
while critics of the policy condemn it as corporate benefit that helps some workers
but debilitates -
Same as A(C) award to employees to prevent them from leaving consider these vital extrinsic
motivation, while critics of the policy condemn
these as corporate benefit that
helpsome workers but debilitate - these help, these that help (Plural Subject these), 'as corporate benefits' adds info to 'these'.
(D) award to employees to prevent leaving consider these vital extrinsic motivation,
while critics of the policy condemn these as corporate benefit that helps some
workers but debilitates -
Pointed in C.(E) award to employees to prevent them from leaving considers it vital extrinsic
motivation while critics of the policy condemn it as corporate benefit that helps
some workers but debilitates
Though i believe the use of pronouns is not completely correct and can still have some ambiguity.
Proponents of...
managements... award to
employees to prevent
them, perceived 'them' points to employees. But can still stand for managements.