zoezhuyan wrote:
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C, that might not emerge in other procedures or in weeks of ordinary interviews
I did not pick up C, because I thought the parallelism both "
NOT in X or in Y" and "
Not in X or Y" are correct, while in C, it says might
not emerge in X or in Y, why not
might emerge NOT in X or in Y,
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It sounds like you might be trying to treat this as a not/but construction:
"The behavior emerged not in a laboratory but in a real world setting." - Note the element of contrast here: (1) the behavior did NOT emerge in a laboratory, but (2) the behavior DID emerge in a real world setting.
That is completely different than what's going on in choice (C). Here we are simply listing two situations in which the behavior and thought process might NOT emerge:
- (1) behavior and thought processes that might not emerge in other procedures
- (2) behavior and thought processes that might not emerge in weeks of ordinary interviews
Imagine removing the "not" from (C):
"behavior and thought processes that might emerge (1) in other procedures or (2) in weeks of ordinary interviews."
Notice that this is a plain old parallel list. Both prepositional phrases ("in other procedures" and "in weeks of ordinary interviews") can be tied back to "that might emerge _____." The "not" in choice (C) simply modifies the verb "emerge," giving us the opposite meaning. But the "not" doesn't affect the parallelism whatsoever.
FlyingWhale wrote:
Hi Ninja,
That's very helpful! Thanks for the explanation.
Can you please explain why "whose" is wrong in choice B? I see a lot of different explanations on the forum. Official answers says "whose" is generally used for people but I read it somewhere that "whose"can be used for object as well.
I know it is not a deal breaker here since there is clearly better answer choice available, but I just want to understand the concept better. Thanks!!
zoezhuyan wrote:
Dear
GMATNinja,
GMATNinjaTwo,
VeritasKarishma,
MartyTargetTestPrep,
TheGMATCoI am a little confused by B and C.
Quote:
B, whose emergence is unlikely in other procedures or weeks of ordinary interviews
#1 whose I read the whole thread, some say the use of
whose is incorrect because
whose can only refer to people or animate things, I don't agree,
whose can refer to non animate things, an example from MANHATTAN guide:
the town whose water supply was contaminated.#2 parallelism.Quote:
Since the word ???weeks??? is a noun, one can consider it parallel to ???procedures???. In such a case, it???d mean ???other weeks of ordinary interviewing???. Not a logical idea. To clarify that ???weeks??? is parallel to ???other procedures???, we need to repeat the preposition ???in???.
I don't think this question intends to meant "other weeks of ordinary interviewing", it just two things are parallel,
procedures and
weeks of ordinary interviewing, so I think the parallelism in B is correct.
honestly, I have no idea what's the problem in B.
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genuinely need experts' help.
have a nice day
We attempted to address the parallelism issue in
this post.
- Both (A) and (B) have, "...in other procedures or weeks of ordinary..."). Yes, it makes perfect sense to assume that "other" only modifies "procedures" (and not "weeks"). However, you can interpret the parallelism another way.
- Does that make the parallelism wrong in (A) and (B)? No. But, repeating the "in" completely eliminates that ambiguity in choice (C). So there's one vote in favor of (C) over (B).
As for the "whose..." in choice (B)... as noted in the Manhattan guide, there is nothing inherently wrong with using "whose" to modify an inanimate object (a town, for example).
But let's zoom in on "behavior and thought processes whose emergence is unlikely...". By using the possessive "whose," it sounds as though the
emergence is a quality or characteristic OF the behavior and thought processes... as if the behavior and thought processes
have an emergence... and that emergence (which the behavior and thought processes
have) IS unlikely in other procedures or weeks of ordinary interviews. In other words, we naturally want to treat it like this one:
"The GMAT tutor whose singing voice is unlikely to attract the attention of record executives should probably not quit his day job." - The GMAT tutor HAS a signing voice, and that voice is UNLIKELY to do something.
Of course, it's easy enough to understand what (B) is trying to say... which is not that the behavior and thought processes HAVE an emergence that is UNLIKELY to do something. Instead, (B) is trying to say that the behavior and thought processes
might not emerge in other procedures or in weeks of ordinary interviews - hmm, why does that wording sound familiar??
Is the "whose ___" wrong in choice (B)? No. But the intended meaning is more clear in (C), so there's another vote for (C) over (B).
I hope that helps!
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