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Let's tackle this question, one issue at a time, and narrow it down to the correct answer! To begin, here is the original question with any major differences between the options highlighted in
orange:
Similar to other Mississippi Delta blues singers, the music of Robert Johnson arose from an oral tradition beginning with a mixture of chants, fiddle tunes, and religions music and only gradually evolved into the blues.
A.
Similar to other Mississippi Delta blues singers,
the music of Robert Johnson arose from an oral tradition
beginning withB.
Similar to that of other early Mississippi Delta blues singers,
Robert Johnson made music that arose from oral tradition
that began withC.
As with other early Mississippi Delta blues singers,
Robert Johnson made music that arose from an oral tradition
beginning asD.
Like other early Mississippi Delta blues singers,
Robert Johnson’s music arose from an oral tradition
beginning withE.
Like the music of other early Mississippi Delta blues singers ,
the music of Robert Johnson arose from an oral tradition
that began asAfter a quick glance over the options, there are a few key differences we can focus on:
1. How they begin: similar to / as with / like
2. What comes after the modifier: the music of Robert Johnson / Robert Johnson / Robert Johnson's music
3. How they end: beginning with / that began with / beginning asSince we're dealing with a comparison question, the first place to start should always be parallelism! We need to make sure that the sentence is comparing 2 similar things (apples to apples, bicycles to bicycles, etc.). Let's focus on that first, and eliminate any options that don't compare similar things:
A. Similar to
other Mississippi Delta blues singers,
the music of Robert Johnson arose from an oral tradition beginning with -->
WRONG (
compares people to music)
B. Similar to
that of other early Mississippi Delta blues singers,
Robert Johnson made music that arose from oral tradition that began with -->
WRONG (
compares music to a person)
C. As with
other early Mississippi Delta blues singers,
Robert Johnson made music that arose from an oral tradition beginning as -->
OK (
compares people to people)
D. Like
other early Mississippi Delta blues singers,
Robert Johnson’s music arose from an oral tradition beginning with -->
WRONG (
compares people to music)
E. Like
the music of other early Mississippi Delta blues singers ,
the music of Robert Johnson arose from an oral tradition that began as -->
OK (
compares music to music)
We can eliminate options A, B, & D because they create a non-parallel comparison.Now that we have it narrowed down to only 2 options, let's focus on the other two list items to narrow it down to just one option:
C.
As with other early Mississippi Delta blues singers, Robert Johnson made music that arose from an oral tradition
beginning asThis is
INCORRECT for a couple reasons. First, starting a noun phrase with "As with" is considered a no-no on the GMAT. The GMAT prefers you use "like" instead because it's clear and to the point. Second, the phrase "beginning as" suggests these events took place in the present tense, but we need to use verbs or phrases that are in the past tense for this to make sense. If his music eventually "evolved" at some point in the past, then it doesn't make sense to say that it "starts" in the present.
E.
Like the music of other early Mississippi Delta blues singers , the music of Robert Johnson arose from an oral tradition
that began asThis is
CORRECT! The comparison is parallel, the phrasing is clear and concise, and the meaning is clear thanks to the use of past tense verbs throughout.
There you have it - option E is the correct choice!Don't study for the GMAT. Train for it.