Hi,
I know many people have already responded to this post but I wanted to put everything together in a single response. Instead of having to go through each response.
This is honestly one of the trickier questions in SC because understanding the meaning at first glance takes a bit of time.
First, meaning clarityThe original sentence says that:
"Despite the fact that the impact of Daylight Saving Time,
at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, have been shown to be neutral, at best
—research indicates that it may actually increase the number of car accidents occurring on the Monday after the clocks spring forward—some countries do not observe it.
If you're not careful like me you will think that this makes sense. But actually, you have to think that even if the impact is neutral at best why would countries follow it? Countries would abandon the practice altogether. You only practice something when it adds some benefit.
The sentence will make sense had it read:
"Despite the fact that the impact of Daylight Saving Time,
at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, have been shown to be neutral, at best
—research indicates that it may actually increase the number of car accidents occurring on the Monday after the clocks spring forward—some countries
do not still observe it.
So the first part of the sentence is a reason that some countries do not observe it. That's why you can eliminate A and B.
Option A also has a subject-verb agreement error. The impact of DST has not have.
Second, RedundancyOption E :
E - Because Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, has been shown to have a neutral impact, at best—research indicates that it
may actually result in a
possible increase in
The use of may and possible is redundant.
Third, Pair of dashes: Works exactly like how brackets work
Eg: The world's three most populous countries - China, India, and the United States - contribute to approximately 40 percent of the total human population.
Any information between the two dashes is removable. Between options C and D:
C - Since the impact of Daylight Saving Time,
at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, has been shown to be neutral, at best
—research indicates that it actually increases the number of car accidents occurring on the Monday after the clocks spring forward— some countries do not observe it.
D - Because the impact of Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, has been shown to be neutral
—at best, research indicates that it may actually result in an increase in the number of car accidents occurring on the Monday after the clocks spring forward— some countries do not observe it.
Option D changes the meaning of the sentence to say that at best research indicated that DST may actually result in an increase in car accidents, rather than saying the impact of DST has been neutral at best.
So eliminate D and choose C.
This is one of those questions that really test your ability to understand the meaning of the sentence and quickly be able to recognize the subtle but important changes in the construction.
Hope this helps!