OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
The word
where?
Contrary to near-universal aspirant belief, the word
where is not restricted to an actual physical location.
Mind you, the alternative usage is rare—but that usage exists.
Read the explanation below.
Quote:
In bourgeois culture,
where it is considered that running a machine is less noble than to be a lawyer or a metaphysician, parents often make great sacrifices to put their children through secondary school and college.
A) where it is considered
that running a machine is less noble than
to be a lawyer or a metaphysician B) where it is considered more noble to be a lawyer or a metaphysician than to run machines
C) which
consider that running machines is less noble than
to be a lawyer or a metaphysician
D) which considers it more noble
to be a lawyer or a metaphysician than
running machines
E) considering
it more noble
being a lawyer or a metaphysician than
to run a machine
• Split #1: ParallelismWe are dealing with a rare 4-1 split.
In the comparison
More X than Y, elements X and Y must be parallel.
That is, X and Y must be the same grammatical form and must play similar logical roles in the sentence.
In options A and C,
running [a machine/machines] and
to be [a lawyer or a metaphysician] are not parallel.
→
running is a gerund, whereas
to be is an infinitive
In option D,
to be [a lawyer or a metaphysician] and
running [machines] are not parallel.
In option E,
being [a lawyer or a metaphysician] and
to run [a machine] are not parallel.
→
being is a gerund, whereas
to run is an infinitive
(If you were tempted to eliminate E because it used
being, you were wrong.
Being a lawyer is a noun phrase.
When
being forms a noun phrase, it is correct.)
Eliminate A, C, D, and E
Answer: B• What about the word where? Shouldn't where refer only to actual physical locations?No, not
only.
Where can also refer to a type of society or a type of community.
I have noted as much in at least three OEs, including a recent one that you can find
here. Again, on the GMAT, the word
where can refer to
community or
society (or part of a society, including bourgeois culture).
Spoiler alert!Official question #1:
here.Official question #2:
here.Be careful: although it is permissible to use
where to refer to something that is not an actual physical location, such usage is not common on the GMAT.
The fact that
where can (very rarely) refer to a part of society confirms what we already know from slam-dunk POE: option B is the correct answer.
→ options A, C, D, and E are not parallel.
There is no chance in Hades that
to be a lawyer and
running a machine will ever be parallel on the GMAT.
Takeaway: trust POEYou
know that parallelism is among the most heavily tested of SC concepts.
Think as a test writer would.
→ Parallelism involves grammar, logic, and meaning.
→ what
where may refer to is a single grammar guideline and in the scheme of things, a very small detail
Lack of parallelism is fatal.
A strange-looking
where (which turns out to be permissible) is not fatal.
Does option B maintain parallel structure?
Yep.
→
to be and
to run are parallel
And it's the answer.
COMMENTSvijk , welcome to SC Butler.
Sentence Correction can be frustrating, but you all have handled yourselves gracefully, even though not all of you reasoned yourselves to the correct answer.
Kudos go to correct answers with good explanations.