quantrace
Hello, according to the OA, the sentence reads:
"U.S. officials said they are convinced that (???) Europe might help stem the crisis of confidence". Does it make sense to say "someone is convinced that something might happen?" To me it is illogical and therefore I chose option C.
Hello,
quantrace. I know what you mean, and I have eliminated
shorter answer choices before based on a conviction that seemed awash in not-so-convincing language. Here, you have to ask yourself what the officials are convinced of. You cannot jump over the
by... phrase and isolate the latter half of the sentence to take a shortcut. Perhaps the officials are convinced that Europe
can adopt a specific approach that
may produce a desirable outcome, but the approach itself is the conviction, rather than the outcome. That is how I interpreted the sentence. Choice (C), meanwhile, has two questionable attributes to my eye. The first is the double
by. Although there are instances of such a usage in correct answers, you should question whether the second
by is absolutely necessary to convey the vital meaning of the sentence. I would say it is not in this case, and extra words that achieve little to nothing in expressing the main idea typically work against that answer choice. To be clear, there is nothing wrong with saying,
by demonstrating... and solidifying. I would also argue that the change from
might/may to
can indicates a certainty about the
outcome that may not be accurate. For these reasons, although I like the initial, more straightforward angle of (C) over (B), I opted for (B). It proved to me to be the harder answer to argue against.
I hope that helps. If you have further questions, feel free to ask.
- Andrew