OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Unlike the canonical views of life and consciousness that originate with Aristotle, the occultists have views that are usually considered heretical. The sentence sets up a contrast between the views that originate with Aristotle and the views of the occultists.
Handle the word
unlike the same way that you handle the word
like.
Both are prepositions that should be followed by nouns or noun phrases. (This aspect is not at issue in the present question.)
Both create comparisons.
Like is used to compare similar things.
Unlike is used to compare different things—in other words, for contrast.
Most importantly, whenever you see these two words, be sure that the items under comparison (or contrast, if you like) are similar kinds of things.
Compare views held by Aristotle with views held by others.
Compare Aristotle the thinker with other thinkers.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Unlike the canonical
views of life and consciousness that originate with Aristotle,
the occultists have views that are usually considered heretical.
• comparison error
→This sentence illogically compares the
views [that originate with Aristotle] with
the occultists. The correct comparison here would be between Aristotle's views and the occultists’ views.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) The canonical
views of life and consciousness that originate with Aristotle are
unlike the occultists and their views that are usually considered heretical
• Comparison error
→ Same error as that in option A.
Option B compares the
views [that originate with Aristotle] with
the occultists [and their views].
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) The
views of the occultists,
as compared to Aristotle who originated canonical views of life and consciousness, are usually considered heretical.
• comparison error
→This sentence illogically compares the views of the occultists with Aristotle.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) Unlike the canonical views of life and consciousness that originate with Aristotle, the views of the occultists are usually considered heretical.
• I do not see any errors
• This sentence correctly compares the views that originate with Aristotle with the views of the occultists.
KEEP
Quote:
E) The
canonical views of life and consciousness that originate with Aristotle, unlike those of the occultists,
which are usually considered
heretical.• Fragment
→ the word
which "eats up" the verb
are, leaving the sentence without a working verb. No working verb = fragment.
• meaning error
→ Although the incorrect use of
which complicates matters, this sentence seems to be stating that the canonical views of Aristotle . . . . are considered heretical. Wrong.
→ whatever is canonical cannot also be heretical. The two words are antonyms. (Yes. You will be expected to know vocabulary words, though the words are not even close to as hard as those on the GRE. We can tell from the context of the other sentences that Aristotle = mainstream and occultists = heretical.)
ELIMINATE E
The correct answer is D.COMMENTSnikhilongc and
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