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Let's tackle this question, one thing at a time, and narrow down our options quickly so we know how to answer questions like this when they pop up on the GMAT! To begin, let's take a quick look at the question and highlight any major differences between the options in
orange:
Scientists say that, by bathing the skin cells in extracts of immune cells,
that human skin cells in a test tube are made to behave as if they were immune system cells.
A)
that human skin cells in a test tube
are made to behave as if they wereB)
that human skin cells
were to behave in a test tube
as if they wereC) human skin cells in a test tube
were made to behave as ifD)
they have made human skin cells in a test tube
that were behaving asE)
they have made human skin cells in a test tube
behave as if they wereAfter a quick glance over the options, there are a few key differences we can focus on:
1. that human skin cells / human skin cells / they have made human skin cells (Construction)
2. are made to behave / were to behave / were made to behave / that were behaving / behave (Verb Tense & Active/Passive Voice)
3. as if they were / as if / as (Idioms)Let’s start with #1 on our list, which has to do with construction. If we look at the original sentence, we see that there is a non-essential phrase we can remove:
Scientists say that, by bathing the skin cells in extracts of immune cells, that human skin cells in a test tube are made to behave as if they were immune system cells.If we remove this non-essential phrase, what we have left over still needs to make sense. Let’s do a quick check to see if our options are constructed properly. To make this easier to spot, we’re going to add in “Scientists say that” to each option:
A) Scientists say
that that human skin cells in a test tube are made to behave as if they were
B) Scientists say
that that human skin cells were to behave in a test tube as if they were
C) Scientists say
that human skin cells in a test tube were made to behave as if
D) Scientists say
that they have made human skin cells in a test tube that were behaving as
E) Scientists say
that they have made human skin cells in a test tube behave as if they were
We can eliminate options A & B because they repeat “that” twice, which isn’t necessary or grammatically correct to do here. Now that we have it narrowed down, let’s tackle #2 on our list: Verb Tense & Active/Passive Voice. We need to make sure any option we choose is in active voice, and we also need to make sure the verb tenses make sense for the intended meaning:
C) human skin cells in a test tube
were made to behave as if → Passive Voice =
WRONGD) they have made human skin cells in a test tube
that were behaving as =
OKAYE) they have made human skin cells in a test tube
behave as if they were =
OKAYWe can eliminate option C because it uses passive voice, which is a big no-no on the GMAT! Now that we have it narrowed down to only 2 options, let’s tackle #3 on our list: Idioms. The phrases “behave as X” and “behave as if they were X” are slightly different things:
D) they have made human skin cells in a test tube that were behaving as immune system cells.This is
INCORRECT because saying “X behaving as Y” changes the intended meaning. The sentence we have here suggests that the scientists created the human skin cells, which isn’t accurate. The cells already existed - they just put them in a test tube and made them do something. This sentence is also saying that the human skin cells that scientists created were already acting like immune system cells - not that the doctors did anything to make them behave that way!
E) they have made human skin cells in a test tube behave as if they were immune system cells.This is
CORRECT! This clearly shows that the human skin cells already existed, and that the scientists were able to make them do something - behave as if they were a different kind of cell.
There you have it - option E is our winner! It uses clear verbs, wording, and idioms to properly convey the intended meaning!
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